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Reviewer: Midge (Signed) · Date: 20/10/08 03:17 PM · On: Chapter 16:Revenge and Redemption

Oh thank you. The boys back to normal at the end. Thank you so much, you definitely had me worried there for a while.

That was one intense story, so dark and sad and certainly one I was glad I could read straight though, but it was compelling and very well written. 



Author's Response:

HI

Well you've read my very 1st ever journey through fanfiction, glad that you liked the ending.

I often wonder if any of this will tie into S4 at any point but I'm not sure where they are going to go with the season so need to wait and see. (I know that you haven't watched yet.) I mean Dean went to hell at the end of S3 so that's a bust for starters.*laughs*

I would love to see bits of it there but not others. The boys together at the end definitely.

Glad you read it 'cos it made me go back and do it too and I still like this story a lot. I think I like the struggle the boys have in it.

Thanks again Mary xx

Reviewer: Midge (Signed) · Date: 20/10/08 02:30 PM · On: Chapter 11: Just another day at the office

I know I've come late to this story, and I have to be honest, I'm not at all sure how it's making me feel. I think the nearest I can come is I feel sad. I don't want Dean to be working with Lilleth, and I don't want Sam alone and more than anything I want them back together and everything back to normal. But how? 

I'll just have to keep reading.



Author's Response:

Hi

This story kinda keeps the seperated all the way through doesn't it which is how I saw things going at the time I wrote it which was actually before S3 ended. But I always have to have then back together at the end as well Midge...'cos the story is all about the brothers.

Mary x

Reviewer: Midge (Signed) · Date: 20/10/08 01:41 PM · On: Chapter 6: Even the devil wouldn't recognise you.

OMG. There's nothing else to say, but OMG!


Author's Response:

HI there Midge

It's that kinda chapter isn't it. This was where I'd written this too and then someone asked if there was more so I took it on.

Mary x

Reviewer: mustang (Signed) · Date: 08/09/08 07:22 AM · On: Chapter 16:Revenge and Redemption

I absolutely loved this story. I really loved the letter you had Dean write to Sam..I liked your version of Lilith and Dean's deal to..Thanks so much for writing..it was awesome..

Author's Response:

HI there

This was a strange story, it was my first multi chapter and I intended to just leave it at Dean going with Lilith but someone asked me to take it on, kinda glad I did, it's a bit weird in places but I had fun with it.

Thanks for reading it. Mary x

Reviewer: mustang (Signed) · Date: 08/09/08 03:58 AM · On: Chapter 1: Save me from myself

The letter was awesome..

Author's Response:

Thank you, this was the first multi chapter I wrote and I love little bits of it, that's one of them.

Mary xx

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 23/06/08 05:53 AM · On: Chapter 16:Revenge and Redemption

There were to many doors of passages that I had to re-read which is good, but that ending I think that was eaither Ruby or Lillth. You've got class. Thanks. I thought they were both going to pass, but at least it would be together and not alone. THANKS.

Author's Response:

Thanks for all the reviews, they're great.

After the Season 3 finale I just couldn't bare to kill Dean again .. or Sam so I let them live...'til next time!

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 23/06/08 05:28 AM · On: Chapter 15: Alona

A very scary way to even try to end it this way. It makes me feel like my brother and I are in this situation, and I would not be able to even kill my brother

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 23/06/08 05:18 AM · On: Chapter 14: Let Go

Well, I don't think that Sam will be able to recover the once brother he knew. He basicly SLOTHED all those victims. Now what is there left for SAM to do.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 23/06/08 05:05 AM · On: Chapter 13: Lilith

I thought that the deal started with grandpa, shit they were both screwed. I am beging to a hate Lilth. Well life inded grew. Interesting message though.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 23/06/08 04:42 AM · On: Chapter 12: True Colours

My friend whom has writen a good story,. So far, but Bela . . . screwed BABE then she shot poor sam. She is a good actress, but I would so have kicked her ass for hurting the BABE. But I did like the way she toyed with DEAN. This Ruby is a tricky THUMPER though. A bit more edge then Bela, but I do admire her for giving hell to him. Its just she toched the BABE. Now, while reading this; SAM is almost acting like his brother. where he would come in say hello, do a short cut of the work at hand, then take a shower, and then maybe sneak out or work on the laptop. You are a very clever writer. Thank You

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 23/06/08 01:30 AM · On: Chapter 11: Just another day at the office

Last statement was a bit VENOMUES, but interesting.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 23/06/08 01:20 AM · On: Chapter 10: Battlelines

This is getting worse by th min ute I keeo reading. I don't think SAM will be nice to him he may even scar him.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 23/06/08 01:16 AM · On: Chapter 9: Hope

I am getting worried and a little bit scared so thank you.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 23/06/08 01:11 AM · On: Chapter 8: Stronger

Very good, yet tricky. Could this entity be talking about SAM?

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 23/06/08 12:32 AM · On: Chapter 7: Remembrance

If he has found new powers then he could use them to get his brother back. I a m not sure that would be wise for he to could change and then it will become a never ending fight with two winchesters.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 23/06/08 12:20 AM · On: Chapter 6: Even the devil wouldn't recognise you.

Okay this is getting weired. In thinking that with one touch she would be dead. An inquiring mind would like to know.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 23/06/08 12:13 AM · On: Chapter 5: My brother's keeper

Wouldn't Lilith feel that Sam was there. this is getting to perrty interesting.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 22/06/08 03:14 AM · On: Chapter 4: Brother, where art thou?

I do hope there is a way to get him of the DEAL.

Author's Response:

Thanks for the reviews, hope you liked the rest of it and were I took it, have to admit I struggled a bit with this even though I kinda knew were I wanted to go, I was never quite sure that I actually arrived.

Thanks again for taking the time to review.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 22/06/08 03:06 AM · On: Chapter 3: Date with the devil

Is there any way of trully KILLING this Lilith? Where the HELL is Ruby? Can Sam be able to help his brother.

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Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 22/06/08 02:57 AM · On: Chapter 2: Miles away

No, I dont think I want to rip it up  . . . just yet. I'm joking! It is good, but haveing Ruby drive BABE its like have Bella toy with Deans head in loosing any spare keys to Babe . . . oh that sounded DIRTY, but I can trust more on Ruby. As long as BABE is not a casulty, PLEASE!

Author's Response: Hi, thanks for reviewing, while the brothers maybe fair game I would NEVER hurt the Impala, she is far to beautiful.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 22/06/08 02:47 AM · On: Chapter 1: Save me from myself

This is getting very interesting. God he can be a JERK!

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 22/06/08 02:34 AM · On: Beginnings: Once more into the breach...........

A very not smart idea to hurt the young sibling. It is turning and sounding very interesting.

Reviewer: GotTheShining (Signed) · Date: 12/06/08 06:14 AM · On: Chapter 16:Revenge and Redemption

Don't change anything! (I never say that:)

Author's Response:

Thanks for your reviews.

I like this story but the thing that was in my head was so not the thing that ended up on the page.

Glad you liked it!

Mary x

Reviewer: GotTheShining (Signed) · Date: 12/06/08 05:58 AM · On: Chapter 15: Alona

OMG.....Do I really have to go to work? I can't believe so few people have reviewed. This is a great read!

Reviewer: GotTheShining (Signed) · Date: 11/06/08 08:56 PM · On: Chapter 10: Battlelines

I'm glad you didn't write dean as evil and not remebering Sam. The fact that he is following Llith but still loves Sam is what makes this story so exciting.

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