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Reviews For One Little, Two Little, Three Little Demons

Reviewer: impalamedean1 (Signed) · Date: 31/05/08 06:18 PM · On: First Test

this is awesome!! I love the part when John kisses Sam and Dean on the top of the head!! soo cute!!! please update soon!!!

Author's Response: Thank you for the review and for enjoying the moments between John and the boys that are so much fun for me to write.

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 31/05/08 12:10 PM · On: First Test

Great chapter,i can't wait for the next update.

Reviewer: supernatfem76 (Signed) · Date: 30/05/08 09:21 PM · On: First Test

This wasn't too short. It was just the right length. I liked the classroom scene. Poor Sammy! I also liked how you had Sam carrying Dean's old backpack. I could really see that being the case. I am really liking this story so far. I can't wait until Chapter 4.

Author's Response: Thank you for the detailed review! I like to hear about what parts that are enjoyable to you as a reader.

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 11/05/08 08:51 AM · On: Not Yet

very good,this story is starting to get interesting.

Reviewer: supernatfem76 (Signed) · Date: 10/05/08 09:22 PM · On: Not Yet

Good update. I liked your comparison of Dean to James Dean. The demon kids seem like they are going to be good villains. I can't wait to see their agenda for Sam.

Reviewer: impalamedean1 (Signed) · Date: 07/05/08 02:36 PM · On: The Dark Haired One

whoaaa what up with the two brown haired boys!! are they possessed or something?? anyway, you got me waiting for more!!

Reviewer: ReccaF (Signed) · Date: 06/05/08 08:12 AM · On: The Dark Haired One

Ok... don't stop now.
This is very interesting-considering the boys are in school and demons are already after SAMMY.
GREAT START!!!!!!!!!
MORE PLEASE!!!!
BRAVO!!!!!

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 06/05/08 07:33 AM · On: The Dark Haired One

great start,i can't wait to read more of this story.

Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 05/05/08 04:27 PM · On: The Dark Haired One

I enjoyed this, you've got some real nice detail of the relationship between the two boys and their dad. And now that Sammy's in a new school and Dean is slipping into protective brother mode..it's getting better and better...
Keep it coming, great work.

Reviewer: supernatfem76 (Signed) · Date: 04/05/08 09:32 PM · On: The Dark Haired One

I really liked this first chapter and I really want you to continue. You got me hooked due to your excellent beginning. The demons being children was chilling but I liked it. One of my fav moments of this chapter was John grilling Sam and Dean about demonic omens in McDonald's. I could definitely see John doing that please continue.

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