Reviewer: WiccanWitch (Signed) · Date: 09/09/08 10:29 PM · On: Chapter 8 Stupid Kids!School Spirits Are For Student Corpses!
"Oh my God! You killed Kenny!" Robert shouted, his mind not able to comprehend seeing Tina, only that Dean had shot his friend. "You bastard!" Pete also shouted as he and Robert rushed to their fallen friend.
ROTFLMAO!!! Loved the South Park reference. This was a great chapter. Loved the look inside Dean's mind. How he both wants and fears to stay in one place and get close to others. I think he and Sam would be perfect in Sunnydale, but they might have some trouble accepting the "neutral/good" demons like Angel and Clem. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Reviewer: crackers (Signed) · Date: 08/09/08 05:20 AM · On: Chapter 7 Getting Down To Business
Wonderful update! I am excited to see what happens when Xander encounters Tina's spirit. :)
Author's Response: No need to wait much longer!!!! Here she goes!!!!!! :)
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 06/09/08 05:35 AM · On: Chapter 7 Getting Down To Business
Great chapter. Looking forward to some more of this story.
Author's Response: I didn't mean for itto take soo long!!! My computer died and I had to save up for a new one :( The next chapter shouls be up by Monday! :)
Reviewer: WiccanWitch (Signed) · Date: 05/09/08 08:40 PM · On: Chapter 7 Getting Down To Business
Yay, a new chapter! I've meant to give you feedback on this and the first story, but...well...I suck at that kind of thing. LOL Anyway, I enjoyed this update. You're doing a good job of blending Buffy and SN. Even though Xander is cooler here than on Buffy this reminded me of some of the research missions he and the scoobies used to go on in the early seasons. Soooo....will the other scoobs ever make an appearance?? Looking forward to more.
Author's Response: I'm really glad your enjoying my stories so far!!! :) I'm hoping to update again in a couple of days!! *crosses fingers
* :) Yeah, I figured anyone spending time 24/7 with the Winchesters would up thier cool status. Especially since they were supposed to be related! :) But don't worry, he won't suddenly become ultra cool. He wouldn't be our Xander if he didn't let out his inner dork every once in awhile!!! :) Someone from Sunnydale will be in the next story in the series "Text Message From Hell". Though I can't say who......don't give me those Puppy dog eyes!!!!! I don't want to spoil it!!! I already riuned it on another site I post these stories on since they also let you put fanart on it!
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 17/07/08 12:25 PM · On: Chapter 6 From Friends To Foes
Great update. Looking forward to more.
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 07/07/08 08:34 AM · On: Chapter 5 New Kid Cool
That was a great chapter. It's nice that Xander get's to be cool for a change.
Author's Response: Xander's always been cool in my eyes :)
Reviewer: crackers (Signed) · Date: 06/07/08 11:22 PM · On: Prolauge
Excellent chapter! I am happy for Xander to be the 'cool kid' for once. Nice lead in to the story behind the story - how the spirit came to be a vengeful spirit.
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm posting the next chapter now. So it'll be up once it's validated. :)
Reviewer: crackers (Signed) · Date: 30/06/08 01:43 AM · On: Chapter 4 The Colorado Paintball Massacre
I loved this chapter, especially the nuances of how Xander has changed through Dean's influences. Very nicely written, and quite beliveable. I am looking forward to the next chapter. :)
Author's Response: Thank you soo much :) I'm glad it's believable, because even a good story can be ruined if things don't seem like they would really happen. :)
Reviewer: ReccaF (Signed) · Date: 17/06/08 04:32 PM · On: Chapter 4 The Colorado Paintball Massacre
I really love this story.!!!!!! Xander as a Winchester just adds to the fun. He really does fit in with the boys. you are a skillful and talented writer-you capture your readers interest immediately wit the easy flow of your vivid verbage-OUTSTANDING!!!!!!!!! Having the boys teach Xander what he needs to survive is perfect- it's really funny how Sammy dislikes being the middle brother-yet , he likes to be a "big' brother to Xander. AWESOMEjob!!!!! this paintball chapter was priceless- the entire football team????????talk about cheating- but, the boys came thru. Your atyle and character development make this story a must read for me. more please. BRAVO!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: THANK YOU SOOOO MUCH!!!!!!!!!! :) Your review made my day!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :)
Reviewer: dangermouse00 (Signed) · Date: 15/06/08 08:30 PM · On: Chapter 4 The Colorado Paintball Massacre
I waited so long for you to update and it was worth it all the way. I hope you don't leave so long next time! Good chappy, it's great to see the brothers caring for him like that.
Author's Response: Thank you!! I'm really glad the wait was worth it!!! :)
Reviewer: theldybg4u (Signed) · Date: 15/06/08 02:58 PM · On: Chapter 4 The Colorado Paintball Massacre
homeschooling? altho dean and sam noe absolutly nothing about what they're teaching in school these days but its worth a shot
Author's Response: I Hate the thought of tearing them apart!!! At least it'll be awhile before I have to decide how I'll do it!!!!! :)
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 15/06/08 01:53 PM · On: Chapter 4 The Colorado Paintball Massacre
I enjoyed that chapter. Loved it when xander wsa acting like Dean.
Author's Response: THank you!!! :) I'm really glad you liked it!!!! :) I figured Xan would be learning from the best, so he better be good :)
Reviewer: dangermouse00 (Signed) · Date: 14/06/08 10:23 PM · On: Prolauge
Please update soon. It's been a long time since last time.
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 30/05/08 05:06 AM · On: Chapter 3 Family Dysfunction
Great update,it's nice that Xander has a proper family that care about him. I was going to say normal Lol.
Reviewer: crackers (Signed) · Date: 28/05/08 08:53 PM · On: Chapter 3 Family Dysfunction
I have so been enjoying these crossovers. I really like how you've added Xander - he kind of reminds me of a puppy eager for love and attention. The las line: "Maybe they really were cursed, like Sam had always thought." leaves me wanting more. I look forward to the next chapter!
Author's Response: Chapter 5 is up! I hope you enjoy :) I hope the next one won't take so long to get out! :)
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 19/05/08 06:19 AM · On: Chapter 2 Mmmmm Pie!!!
i loved dean and xander fighting over the pie it was very funny. not overboard at all.
Author's Response: Thank you!!!! :) *vbg*
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 18/05/08 07:48 AM · On: Chapter 2 Mmmmm Pie!!!
i'm loving this story.the banter between sam, dean and xander is really funny.
Author's Response: Thank you! What did you think of Dean and Xander fighting over the last piece of pie? At first, I was worried I went overboard. But then I thought of when Dean and Sam fought over Sam's money in the 1st Trickster episode. And since both boys love to eat, I figured they would soo fight over the last piece!!!!
Reviewer: impalamedean1 (Signed) · Date: 16/05/08 10:24 AM · On: Chapter 2 Mmmmm Pie!!!
I loive this story!!!! will buffy and Willow be in the stiry anymore?? anyways please update soon!!!
Author's Response: No one from Sunnydale will be in this story, but you haven't read the last from them, I promise!!! :)
Reviewer: dangermouse00 (Signed) · Date: 15/05/08 02:42 PM · On: Chapter 1 Finding Out
What's going on with the next chappie?
Author's Response: You should be able to read it now!
Reviewer: dangermouse00 (Signed) · Date: 13/05/08 03:59 PM · On: Chapter 1 Finding Out
I'd love to see (well read) Xander kicking his step-father's ass, would serve him right for beating him!!!!
Author's Response: He's have to wait in line, cause you know who'd want first punch...and second..third...fourth...fifth........ Xander might not get a CHANCE to beat Tony up!!!! Dean might not leave anything left of him!!!!!!!:)
Reviewer: impalamedean1 (Signed) · Date: 13/05/08 02:39 PM · On: Chapter 1 Finding Out
haha samsa pouty face is just sooo funny!! please update soon!!!!
Author's Response: Sam's pouty face was the best thing about the rabbit foot episode (besides Batman of course!)!!!!! I LOVED Sam's pouty face!!(and I'm a Dean girl!!!)!!!!!
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 08/05/08 12:59 PM · On: Chapter 1 Finding Out
great chapter,at last the secrets out, well some of them.loved sam sulking.
Author's Response: Thank you! :) It's only the beggining I think of Sam's pouty face! :)
Reviewer: gengen0776 (Signed) · Date: 07/05/08 06:47 PM · On: Chapter 1 Finding Out
LOL I loved over protective Dean! Great chapter! Poor Sammy is now the middle kid not as much fun as the baby!
Author's Response: Thank You!! There will be more over protective Dean to come!! :) And yeah, poor Sammy! lol
Reviewer: theldybg4u (Signed) · Date: 04/05/08 07:58 PM · On: Prolauge
creepy i can't wait for the next chapter
Author's Response: Thanks :) I was hoping it would be creepy!!! But I was worried it would be cheesy! :) The next chapter will be up as soon as it gets validated. :)
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 04/05/08 12:23 PM · On: Prolauge
great start,i'll be waiting for more.
Author's Response: As soon as it gets validated, chapter 1 will be up!!! :) I hope you enjoy it!!!!!! :)
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