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Reviewer: Wingz (Signed) · Date: 11/02/11 03:49 PM · On: Chapter 13 Guy Talk

lol enter the vampire slayer ... cant wait to read the next chapter!

Reviewer: Wingz (Signed) · Date: 11/02/11 01:40 AM · On: Chapter 13 Guy Talk

lol enter the vampire slayer ... cant wait to read the next chapter!

Reviewer: Kitana (Signed) · Date: 18/01/11 09:58 PM · On: Chapter 13 Guy Talk

I cant wait for more chapters...you've got those boys pegged...lol

Reviewer: lillelouis (Signed) · Date: 27/01/10 02:03 PM · On: Chapter 13 Guy Talk

Great to see an update :) Nice chapt, but I missed having a little clarity as to why the vampires in Sunnydale all go 'poof'? That would'a been nice, but otherwise awesome return. Glad to see the hiatus has ended :D

Reviewer: moni9576 (Signed) · Date: 30/11/09 11:39 AM · On: Chapter 13 Guy Talk

Are they going to Sunnydale soon? I cannot wait until Dean and Sam meet Buffy and Willow.  Please update soon!


Author's Response:

It'll be awhile before anyone goes to Sunnydale. Wiether Xander goes with his brothers, or by himself, I'm not completly sure.

Though since Dean hasn't beaten Tony up, I know the other brothers have to show up eventually! :)

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 21/11/09 11:49 AM · On: Chapter 13 Guy Talk

Great chapter, it's lovely to see an update.

Author's Response:

Thank you :)

Sorry it took soo long!!!! I had some real life tragedy (death in the family) & it took that long to even THINK of writing. :(

I HOPE the next chapter won't take soo long to get out!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: kezza2kerri (Signed) · Date: 29/03/09 11:27 AM · On: Chapter 12 Don't Make The Waitress Cry, Or She May Just Spit In Your Pie!

i cant wait for the next chapter

Author's Response:

I just hope it doen't take as long as last time!!!!!!!!!

*crosses finger*

Reviewer: kezza2kerri (Signed) · Date: 22/03/09 10:29 AM · On: Chapter 12 Don't Make The Waitress Cry, Or She May Just Spit In Your Pie!

cant wait for the next chapter

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 30/01/09 08:55 AM · On: Chapter 12 Don't Make The Waitress Cry, Or She May Just Spit In Your Pie!

Great update, spitting in pies,yuck lol.

Author's Response:

My cousin had a friend who did that to people who were mean to him!!! So that DOES happen!!!

I just couldn't let any of our boys eat it!!! But since Sammy laughed so much about first the getting shot in the butt thing, then the thought of Dean eating spit pie, I had to have Dean punish him!! :)

Reviewer: dangermouse00 (Signed) · Date: 13/01/09 03:26 AM · On: Chapter 11 Between Jobs

:D

Author's Response: Thanks :)

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 12/01/09 05:55 PM · On: Chapter 11 Between Jobs

Great update, well worth the wait.

Author's Response:

Thanks :)

I just hope the next chapter won't take soo long!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: crackers (Signed) · Date: 24/10/08 01:09 AM · On: Chapter 10 Fire Crackles,Fire Crackles..Burn, Burn, Burn!

Another wonderful chapter.  I like how you wrote Dean - very protective and angry about what happened.  The fire burning as though it were coming from his eyes was a particularly good image.

Author's Response:

Thank you!!! You ALMOST feel sorry for those evil SOBs when they try to mess with Dean's family!!! :)

Sorry it took so long to respond...I thought I had!!!!

Reviewer: Leila (Signed) · Date: 23/10/08 08:11 AM · On: Chapter 10 Fire Crackles,Fire Crackles..Burn, Burn, Burn!

I really love this story, can't wait for the next chapter! (Ok, I do not want to wait long so pleasssse don't make us wait! (ha!ha!))

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 19/10/08 11:57 AM · On: Chapter 10 Fire Crackles,Fire Crackles..Burn, Burn, Burn!

Another great chapter. i love the banter between Dean and Xander.

Author's Response: Thank you!!! It's fun writing them!! :)

Reviewer: moni9576 (Signed) · Date: 18/10/08 08:49 PM · On: Chapter 10 Fire Crackles,Fire Crackles..Burn, Burn, Burn!

Ooooh, I just loved it!!!!!

Author's Response:

Thank you!!!!!!

I'm working on Part 2 (with the second spirit) , so it's not over yet!!!! :)

Reviewer: WiccanWitch (Signed) · Date: 18/10/08 08:03 PM · On: Chapter 10 Fire Crackles,Fire Crackles..Burn, Burn, Burn!

Wow, remind me to never get on Dean's bad side. It's a good thing Tina was destroyed, cause I don't think the brothers could have taken many more hits like that. Poor Dean must have been out of his mind with both his little brothers nearly being taken from him.

And double ouch! Not only having to sit after being shot, but driving over potholes and bumps? Yikes. I love the interactions between Xander and Dean. Both have the same sarcastic sense of humor and make jokes to cut the tension.

Oh, and the cat is a he.......

Named Dean!



Author's Response:

Yep, Angry Dean is only sexy Dean when he's not pissed at you!!!!!!!!

My cat is a girl....but that didn't stop me from naming her Winchester lol :)

Reviewer: Leila (Signed) · Date: 08/10/08 08:33 AM · On: Chapter 9 Two Four Six Eight..Who Do We Incenerate!?!

I just love you story! I am hooked and need you to please update us quickly. This is great!

Author's Response:

Thank you soo much!!!!!! *Grinning broadly*

You will have your next Xander Winchester fix as soon as the next chapter is validated!! :) 

I hope to keep you stringing along through the whole series!!!! :)

Reviewer: moni9576 (Signed) · Date: 07/10/08 11:25 PM · On: Chapter 9 Two Four Six Eight..Who Do We Incenerate!?!

I`m glad that Xander was not killed.  This story is really getting interesting.  I want to know if Xander will go back to Sunnydale or will he stay with his brothers?



Author's Response:

I couldn't KEEP Xander dead!!!!!!

I only intended to wound him at first, but soo many people at 'Twisting The Hellmouth' (which is the other site I have my series in as well as my fanart for the series) wanted me to hurt him so Protective Dean could kick ass. Since everyone expected and WANTED me to hurt him, I figured I'd do one better and do something a little mean and UNEXPECTED by temperarily killing the Xan-man.

You won't find out if Xander goes back to Sunnydale until the fourth story 'Dead Man's Blood'....the one where Xander FINALLY meets his real father!!!

Reviewer: WiccanWitch (Signed) · Date: 07/10/08 09:14 PM · On: Chapter 9 Two Four Six Eight..Who Do We Incenerate!?!

Awesome! I think I ran through almost every emotion imaginable in this chapter. Grief as Dean held Xander when he was(temporarily, thank god!) dead. Then relief and warm fuzzies when Dean couldn't let him go after he was revived. Fear as Tina kept appearing and reappearing. Than fall off my chair, scare the cat, hysterical laughter as Xan shot Dean there! Oh man! Poor boy, both his little bros have shot him now. *pets Dean,offers to kiss the boo boo. Uh....did I just say that out loud? ;D *Next chappie please?

Author's Response:

I'm glad you enjoyed the emotional rollercoaster that was chapter 10!!!!! :)

That is just too funny!!!!! :D    I myself have had my cat or dog (sometimes both) looking at me as if I've gone insane!!!! Or did he/she run off?

Tell him/her that even though I'm sorry, I TOTTALLY want it to happen AGAIN!!!! Cause it's really awesome that I got such a strong reaction from one of my readers!!! *grinning proudly*

Anyhoo, the next chapter will be up as soon as it's validated!!! :)

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 03/10/08 12:12 PM · On: Chapter 9 Two Four Six Eight..Who Do We Incenerate!?!

A wonderful chapter, lots of emotion.

Author's Response:

Thanks soo much!!!

It's good to hear that I can get inside thier heads and bring them through! :)

Reviewer: crackers (Signed) · Date: 02/10/08 02:15 AM · On: Chapter 9 Two Four Six Eight..Who Do We Incenerate!?!

I loved this chapter!  You wrote the emotion well and I am so glad that Xander was rejuvenated.   Well done!



Author's Response:

Thank you soo much!!! :)

I couldn't leave poor Xander  dead!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Leila (Signed) · Date: 23/09/08 09:49 AM · On: Chapter 8 Stupid Kids!School Spirits Are For Student Corpses!

I really like your take on this story, I am enjoying it, keep it up!

Author's Response:

I'm glad that your enjoying it!!! :)

The next chapter will be up as soon as it's validated!

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 12/09/08 05:20 AM · On: Chapter 8 Stupid Kids!School Spirits Are For Student Corpses!

No no no,what an evil cliffhanger lol.

Please try to update soon.



Author's Response:

The update will be here as soon as it's validated! :)

Sorry it took so long...had trouble with the computer. :(

Reviewer: dangermouse00 (Signed) · Date: 10/09/08 03:01 PM · On: Chapter 8 Stupid Kids!School Spirits Are For Student Corpses!

NNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response:

I've updated, so it'll be there as soon as it's validated. :)

 

I KNOW it was an evil cliffhanger, so thanks for hanging in there! :)

Reviewer: crackers (Signed) · Date: 10/09/08 02:51 PM · On: Chapter 8 Stupid Kids!School Spirits Are For Student Corpses!

Wow!  I was happy to see that you had updated so soon.  Wonderful cliff hanger - don't keep us hanging for too long though.

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