Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 13/05/08 07:00 AM · On: Still Day 2: Allergies Are For Geeks And Girls
another very funny chapter,poor dean,lol.
Author's Response: Yeah, I'm making him suffer. I'll have to come up with a happy ending for him. Maybe a sexy brunette rubbing Vics into his chest? Thanks for reviewing! Kirsty x
Reviewer: Vanessa (Signed) · Date: 12/05/08 04:59 PM · On: Still Day 2: Allergies Are For Geeks And Girls
Nice update. Wow--poor Dean. I felt so bad for how the waitress was treating him. I did laugh a little when Dean looked at the napkin after blowing his nose, and Sam was appalled.
Author's Response: I had wondered if I had made it too unbelievable - what woman wouldn't respond to Dean smiling at her, however gross he was being? I guess everyone has their limits, though. Thanks for the reviews, I really appreciate them. Kirsty x
Reviewer: lostatc (Signed) · Date: 12/05/08 03:38 PM · On: Still Day 2: Allergies Are For Geeks And Girls
That was hilarious. I would be feeling sorry for poor Dean except that I'm going through the exact same thing. Gads, it's terrible to have allergies. I honestly don't know who's smart mouth I like more - Sam or Dean. Although Dean blowing his nose in public...gross! Thanks for the fun.
Author's Response: My husband complained that I hadn't given Sam any of the good lines, so I'm glad you don't agree. Of course, I'm an older sibling whilst he was the youngest so I guess we're coming at it from different points of view! Oh, and I prefer to think of Dean as loveably disgusting... Thanks for everything. Kirsty x
Reviewer: calUK (Signed) · Date: 12/05/08 12:50 PM · On: Day 1: Dismal Swamp? Sounds Great!
Ick and yuck and MORE MORE MORE! Lovin' poor old Dean with what seems to be a wicked case of hayfever (know just how he feels...) but I'm guessin' it's all gonna get real nasty soon... Can't wait, you're bringing a smile to my face everytime i read this - tho' i think the gals i work with are wondering why i keep chuckling when someone sneezes...
Author's Response: Yep, it's that time of year again and poor Dean is being made to suffer. But it's such fun to inflict... I'm glad you're enjoying and thanks so much for the review! Kirsty
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 11/05/08 02:50 PM · On: Day 2: A Hair Brained Plan
great update,love the banter between sam and dean.can't wait for more of this story.
Author's Response: Thank you so much. Chapter 3 is on it's way. Kirsty x
Reviewer: Vanessa (Signed) · Date: 08/05/08 07:16 AM · On: Day 2: A Hair Brained Plan
Yay--barefoot Dean! (I share Bev's obsession. hehehe) Great update! Poor Dean. You can just "feel" how miserable he is. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: I'll bet there's a fair few of you foot-fetishists out there - I'm a 'broad shoulders' girl myself. Maybe I should be writing him shirtless... Thanks for reviewing. Kirsty x
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 08/05/08 07:13 AM · On: Day 2: A Hair Brained Plan
I do LOVE your take on the boys snark, it really is some of the very best out there... ...and Granny Firefly?...lol ...and as for poof snuffly barefoot Dean, wonder who you wrote all that for? Huh? Bet Bev's stoked...lol Great chapter my friend...and a shower scene too...Hehehe. XXX Louy
Author's Response: Hi Louy, Thanks so much for you kind words. My shower scene was considerably less detailed than yours. I may have to work on that in future fics! Bev earnt the naked feet. Not sure I should be enabling her sick habit though ... Thanks again for reviewing. Kirsty x
Reviewer: lostatc (Signed) · Date: 07/05/08 06:59 PM · On: Day 2: A Hair Brained Plan
Kirsty, I wish I could feel sorry for Dean but actually I just sympathize. I love the snark between the guys, beautifully written. I also love that they are truly trying to keep things civil between each other even under the circumstances. Gotta love the Great Dismal Swamp. Thanks for the story. I'm loving it and can't wait for more. Kim
Author's Response: Hi Kim, Well you know how hard to live with these allergy sufferers can be! Maybe you and Dean could start a self-help group; Swamp Snifflers United or something. You could swap anti-histamines and rub each others eyes. Hmm... Thanks for the review, I really appreciate it. Kirsty x
Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 07/05/08 05:34 PM · On: Day 2: A Hair Brained Plan
Geekster Am i first am i am i ?? yeah! God I just love slightly poorly and a bit grouchy Dean he is the epitome of sweet with that touch of pissy arse about him. Delectable! Love Granny Firefly and big haha at sammy thinking its a partnership. What ever younger sibling every realy attained prtnership! And Dean's bare feet? ahhhhhh!! So so so thank you dribble dribble drool drool! Loves ya babe! Three soon I know!Bev xxxx
Author's Response: Hello my freaky foot fetishist friend! Yeah grouchy Dean is gorgeous. As is happy Dean, sad Dean, tortured by a demon possessed arch angel gobshite Dean. You can pretty much do what you like to the guy, he isn't getting any less attractive. You know they are gonna have to leave the motel eventually, and unfortunately that means footwear. Sorry hun. I'll whip 'em off him again as soon as I can. Love ya right back! Kirst xxx
Reviewer: marian_dnsg4l (Signed) · Date: 05/05/08 09:43 PM · On: Day 1: Dismal Swamp? Sounds Great!
L.O.L! My stomach hurts from laughing so much! Dean is sooo funny! "He smirked, slipping into chauvinist overdrive: a sure-fire way to piss off Mr Sensitive" I loved it! And their conversation had me cracking up from the very start. Great work, loved every second of this!
Author's Response: Well I'm sorry to have caused you injury but thank you so much for such a nice review! Kirsty x
Reviewer: Vanessa (Signed) · Date: 04/05/08 07:52 AM · On: Day 1: Dismal Swamp? Sounds Great!
haha Great first chapter! I can soooo see that brotherly-baiting conversation between the boys and the look on Sam's and Dean's face. Too funny. Looking forward to your next update.
Author's Response: Hi, glad you liked it and thanks for the review! Kirsty x
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 04/05/08 07:20 AM · On: Day 1: Dismal Swamp? Sounds Great!
brillient,very very funny.
Author's Response: Thank you, very, very much! Kirsty x
Reviewer: Silvertayl (Signed) · Date: 03/05/08 08:57 PM · On: Day 1: Dismal Swamp? Sounds Great!
Love the banter bewtween the boys, so like them, great work looking forward to more soon. Well done. Silvertayl
Author's Response: Hey, we all love the boys bickering, right? Hugging would be better but that seems to be rationed ... Thank you very much for the review and more is on it's way. Kirsty x
Reviewer: lostatc (Signed) · Date: 03/05/08 01:41 PM · On: Day 1: Dismal Swamp? Sounds Great!
Nothing like Dean sex talk in the morning. That was fabulous, I laughed through the whole thing. I especially loved the line "And how Sam managed to look both pious and pissy at the same time was beyond Dean." I've seen that look on Sam's face way too many times not to be able to see it here. I can't wait to see how this turns out. I'm learning more about that dang swamp that's making me miserable than I ever wanted to know! Thanks Kirsty -- Love It!
Author's Response: Hi Kim, See it's funny, Sam didn't appreciate the conversation at all but I can think of lots of us that would sit and happily listen to Dean talk about his sexploits. Or read off his shopping list for that matter. Thank you so much for the review, but mostly for the kick up the bum in the first place. But don't look for too much geological detail, this is gonna mostly be fluff and snark... I'm as shallow as Lake Drummond! Kirsty xxx
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 03/05/08 11:36 AM · On: Day 1: Dismal Swamp? Sounds Great!
Damn, this is a great start to what promises to be an awesome story. Some of the very best snark I think I've ever read and Dean is absolutely right...he can call me darlin' when ever he likes...lol And the eyepatch, just too funny for words... and by the time I got to 'walking the plank' I was in hysterics... Great start Kirsty, will be keeping my eyes out for more of this one...
Author's Response: Hi Louy, Thanks so much for the review and I'm glad it made you giggle. Now, if I can just try and work a shower scene in somewhere ... Kirsty xxx
Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 03/05/08 10:55 AM · On: Day 1: Dismal Swamp? Sounds Great!
Hey there, Ya filthy Lemur lover! I'm first, I'm first! yeah and yahoo! Kirst, Can ya please send vine boy over to discipline Cheetah as he will keep doing the 'activity' i mentioned and its not really acceptable in a posh suburb like what I live in! Where did you find Tarzan the chook hunny, was it in scufferland -Essex? Anyhoo, Swampthing is fab-u-lus! Weird, freaky, totally bucket loads - just like ya loony self and I adore it. Big freaking great snogs and get ya bloody self on messenger asap! Bev xxxx (PS: Bird keeps licking tarzan, you think he'll get a feather-ball?)
Author's Response: Oi Bev, Check it out - no blimmin' lemurs in sight, dude. Now stop trying to tarnish my rep as the normal one. Vine boy is on his way but it could take awhile as he is having to swing from lampost to lampost (distinct lack of vines in Cambs!) Whaddya mean posh suburb? You're in Yorkshire, Hunny. It's all tin baths in lean-to's innit? (scufferland indeed!) Thanks for the review and for the beta. At least half of those buckets of weird were filled by your goodself and I appreciate it. Love ya! Kirst xxx PS - that's what you get for calling a cat Bird - identitiy crisis. Get him in kitty therapy asap.
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