Reviewer: Dean494 (Signed) · Date: 01/05/08 07:54 PM · On: Chapter 1: Just a Groupie
Loved Asher with the drums and Dean saying: "I thought I knew every classic rock song there was but that one’s got me stumped", and finding out that the song was written with Asher help. That´s so sweet and also Dean´s birthday present, is so Dean. Hope Dean is going to feel that something´s wrong with Asher: "He would be able to sense her distress." that´s just great. I like Asher and you make me very happy writing another story, and even better because she´s going to have an active part saving Dean. Keep going, I´ll be waiting for the update.
Author's Response: Thanks Gabriela! Asher's kind of a combination betweenmy sister and my daughter so I had to make her a drummer. Dean ssems to be the kind of guy who'd think dating a drummer would be hot! Who knew Dean could be so romantic? Nothing says I love you like a pure silver dagger. Asher's fallen into the Wincester domino effect---get save, save them, get save...see the pattern? I'm glad you like Asher! I try to make her a good mix of characteristics to complement Dean. I'll be posting again probably today.
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 01/05/08 04:38 AM · On: Chapter 1: Just a Groupie
oh wow.this is going to be a brilliant story.i can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Thanks Lindsay! So glad you could come with me on this adventure!
Reviewer: Glyconut (Signed) · Date: 30/04/08 08:02 PM · On: Chapter 1: Just a Groupie
This was just as intense as the first time I read it. Awesome, Awesome, Awesome!!!! I can't wait for the next part!!
Author's Response: Thanks Jo! It's readers like you who keep me going!
Reviewer: GotTheShining (Signed) · Date: 30/04/08 06:40 PM · On: Chapter 1: Just a Groupie
One more thing I forgot to mention: I don't like the title "Together in Death" it alludes heavily to the story being a death fic.......and you wouldn't do that, right *pleading sheepishly* right?
Author's Response: No I wouldn't. Hmmmm...would I?
Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 30/04/08 06:35 PM · On: Chapter 1: Just a Groupie
Liked this first chapter and eagerly await the next one. Being a Dean fan I always like reading stories about him.
Author's Response: Thanks Maureen! I'll have the second chapter up soon! I agree, can't get enough of Dean.
Reviewer: GotTheShining (Signed) · Date: 30/04/08 06:28 PM · On: Chapter 1: Just a Groupie
Hey girl thanks for the heads up! As soon as I got your message I went back and read ch 16 again. Whew, I had forgotten how heart wrenching it was......but is really sets the mood for this chapter. I'm glad you picked up so soon after the last story. You've written the Brownings so well you just have to love them. The sister sparing was perfect. My favorite part is how Dean battles wth his hopes and fears. He wants Asher to be happy but he really can't think of her with someone else. Then you go and introduce stalker!Darath. I kept waiting for his eyes to flash black OR for Dean to show up. Where the heck is Dean?! Only eight days left and she gets taken? You sure do have an evil streak in you! And then.......ok...I'm going to shut up now and wait for Dean to figure out something s wrong. Post soon please because shis is one of those emotionally adrenaline driven stories that i have to keep re-reading. I just HAVE to know did they finally consumate their relationship when Asher found out that Dean's time was running out or did Dean refuse??? Thanks for continuing the story! ---GTS
Author's Response: I'm delighted that you like it! Yeah, the sister sparring---kind of lived it. I'm glad you like the inner demons Dean is struggling with. The poor guy's gotta be hurtin'! Dean will figure it out soon enough and then watch out! The status quo between Dean and Asher remains the same.
Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 30/04/08 11:48 AM · On: Chapter 1: Just a Groupie
Shannon "When he let his guard down, stoic, hard-ass big brother was a lovesick puppy, but to comment on this would mean certain death." That's a cool line! "He was such a romantic. Not in the wine and roses sense, but in the ‘we have matching knives’ sense" oh there's another! you're cracking me up! Shannon, I don't know your Asher and her sister so I obviously have some earlier stories to sample (always nice) but I ike her. She's feisty and seems very good for Dean. As to Darath, I am sensing he's a wrong un Hun! Liking it gonna need to know more! Bev xx
Author's Response: Bev, I'm so glad you like Asher! I tried to make her a complementary balance for Dean. I lvoe to point out lines that I enjopy in stories so I was delighted to see you'd done the sam thing The matching knives idea came to me last fall when my husband surprised me with matching rakes. Their hearts are in the right places. Thanks for the read and the review!! Hugs, Shannon
Reviewer: Destra (Signed) · Date: 30/04/08 09:31 AM · On: Chapter 1: Just a Groupie
That was fantastic Shannon. I was hoping for another Asher story. Top quality writing as always. Thanks.
Author's Response: Thanks for the compliment! It's because of wonderful readers like you that I keep writing more of Asher. It was meant to be a one time story. Thanks for your interest and your review!
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