Reviewer: downbythebay (Signed) · Date: 05/02/09 03:43 PM · On: Chapter 25: Surprises
Interesting. I do like the idea of Lucifer being outfoxed in his own tricks.
Author's Response: Thanks Kelly! I'm glad you appreciate the irony of it. And the good guys just stay good and let him hang himself.
Reviewer: Synera (Signed) · Date: 05/02/09 12:19 AM · On: Chapter 25: Surprises
Excellent. I love the loophole you came up with for Dean's deal.
Author's Response: Thanks Shae! It's always good to hear from the 'regulars'. It's like a phone call from family---always a pleasure! We've heard from the demon side long enough. I thought it was time the good guys up North stepped in to flex their muscles. Thanks for the review and for hanging in there with me!
Reviewer: Nervegirl88 (Signed) · Date: 06/11/08 11:21 PM · On: Chapter 5: His Baby or His Baby?
Wow. I feel so sorry for Dean and Asher. The way you wrote Dean's character is very convincing. If Dean had a girlfriend in the show, he would feel responsible if anything happened to her whether it was his fault or not. So props for that. Sam's character is just as convincing. So good characterization. Anyway, your writing style is good. I like it.
Author's Response: Wow! Thanks Barbara for the best compliment I could get! To hear you think I keep Sam and Dean true to the episodes is wonderful! Thanks for reading and for letting me know your thoughts! I hope you continue to enjoy the story.
Reviewer: violettestars (Signed) · Date: 01/10/08 08:31 PM · On: Chapter 25: Surprises
I just finished this and wow. I love this verse so much. I'm biased tho. I love Het, not into the wincest at all. So, when are you starting the next installment????? *waits patiently*
Author's Response: Thanks for the great reviews and for encouraging me to keep Asher going. That tells me you like her which thrills me! I've started a rough draft for the next story. I think it's going to be called Valley of Fire. It may be awhile before I post because I don't write in chronological order---I'm kind of all over the place. Jus tlet me say that there will be a surprise that I hope you'll like. *bits nails*
Reviewer: violettestars (Signed) · Date: 01/10/08 01:50 PM · On: Chapter 15: Eternal Laws 101 (cliff notes)
Oh that is so sad. :(
Author's Response: It gets worse before it gets better. But we love to see Dean suffer!
Reviewer: violettestars (Signed) · Date: 01/10/08 01:23 PM · On: Chapter 14: Choices and Consequences
Okay are you trying to make me cry? Dean and Mary's reunion so heartbreaking.
Author's Response: Not trying to make you cry. Who would Dean want to see more than anyone in Heaven? I'm just fulfilling some of his fantasies.
Reviewer: violettestars (Signed) · Date: 01/10/08 01:20 PM · On: Chapter 11: Got Your Six
I love this story SO much. Though, if I was Asher I would not be pushing Dean away. We'd be locked in my bedroom for his remaining 6 days.
Author's Response: I'm delighted that you're still enjoying the story! It makes me smile. Yeah, most women would just lock themselves away with Dean but Asher's a woman of principles. The good girls need a heroine, too.
Reviewer: Glyconut (Signed) · Date: 20/09/08 09:44 PM · On: Chapter 25: Surprises
*Eyes wide, jaw on the floor* OMG!!!!! I thought the premier of S4 was the thing to leave me speechless for the next few days, but that was.......it was just........OMG!!!!!! Brilliantly written, awesome plot, twists & turns & the outcome...*sigh* WOW, just WOW!! When's the next story??? *grins*
Author's Response: *lauging uncontrollably* Jo, you just made my weekend!
Reviewer: Glyconut (Signed) · Date: 20/09/08 08:36 PM · On: Chapter 22: Hell's Welcoming Committee
OMG OMG OMG!!!!!! He he he I didn't mean to shame you, but I am glad it helped you with the writer's block. *grin*
Author's Response: Wow! What can I say to such a wonderful review. THANK YOU! And a special thanks for the kick in the pants you gave me. It was just what I needed to get off my butt and get back to the computer.
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 20/09/08 04:23 PM · On: Chapter 25: Surprises
Thank you, for a brilliant story. i've really enjoyed it. Can't wait for the next one, you are going to do another one aren't you? Pretty please lol.
Author's Response: *pant, pant* Next one? I barely can catch my breath from this one. lol! I'm delighted you liked it Lindsay and thrilled that you want more! I just have to come up with a scorching idea. If you have any ideas, please pass them along.
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 01/09/08 08:30 AM · On: Chapter 21: Carbon Copy
Two very intense chapters. A real roller coaster of emotions, i'm worn out just reading it lol.
Author's Response: Please keep hands and legs inside the ride at all times until it comes to a complete stop. :) Thanks for the great review Lindsay! So happy you're having a good time reading!
Reviewer: Glyconut (Signed) · Date: 03/08/08 07:34 PM · On: Chapter 21: Carbon Copy
OMG!!!!! I have no internet for 9 days (I moved house) & I come back to THE MOST HEARTWRENCHING chapters of the story!! Brilliant!! I sat here bawling my eyes out. But also marvelled at how strong Dean & Asher are being while watching all this. Bravo!! More soon please.
Author's Response: You moved? What?! Dean & Asher are invincible together! (trumpet fanfare) It may be a while before my next posting---my flopppy ate my next two chapters and won't let me back in to retrieve them! Augghhh!
Reviewer: Destra (Signed) · Date: 31/07/08 10:23 AM · On: Chapter 18: A Stranger in His House
A little depressing? Oh my God! I actually cried and that doesn't happen very often. This is just fantastic writing. Thank you. I think I'll take a minute before I tackle the next chapter!
Author's Response: I know I should be sorry that I made you cry but I'm actually kind of pleased. I'm so glad it was real for you. I actually wrote this chapter a long time ago but had no place to put it. I considered it as a one shot but its too depressing to stand alone. The next few chapters are Posh Puffs necessary also. It has to get bad before it gets good. And Sam will really go through the ringer. Thaks for taking the time to review!
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 31/07/08 10:10 AM · On: Chapter 19: Another Bullet to the Heart
Two fantastic chapters. I'm really loving this story. I can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Thanks a million Lindsay! So glad you liked them! Unfortunately, (for Dean) it gets worse before it gets better.
Reviewer: violettestars (Signed) · Date: 28/07/08 12:09 PM · On: Chapter 6: Two's a Crowd
This is really really good. I just read the first five chapters. Poor Asher.
Author's Response: *curtsy* Thank you kindly Dawn! Yeah, poor Asher. Just wait---there's plenty more misery up ahead (and enough to go around).
Reviewer: riley (Signed) · Date: 15/07/08 03:58 PM · On: Chapter 17: Damned
This is my first review here... couldn't help myself! I read the whole story in one sitting, just couldn't get away.. and I must admit you had me weeping like a child from time to time! keep 'em coming- you are incredible!
Author's Response: A big slab of apple pie ala mode for you riley! Thanks for the review! I love it when you shy ones find your voice---that's truly a golden moment for me! I'm delighted you like it!
Reviewer: Glyconut (Signed) · Date: 12/07/08 08:58 PM · On: Chapter 17: Damned
Your descriptions are so vivid & real. You describe the emotions to perfection, I can see everything you write in my head. The story is captivating. THAT is the mark of a true writer. I want more ASAP please!!!
Author's Response: Wow! Thank you soooo much! I'm so glad that I've beenable to do the story justice and that you enjoy it!
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 12/07/08 01:00 PM · On: Chapter 17: Damned
Two great chapters. Loved the line about the dandelions. i remember picking them for my mam and my son used to bring me them when he was little. Can't wait to see what's happening to Sam.
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked the dandelions. That's one of my favorite parts, too. Who can resist a child with a bouquet of the bright yellow puffs? You can be certain that Sam is going out of his mind with worry. Before we return to him though we get to peek into his future. I hope you like angst. ;)
Reviewer: SupernaturalKat (Signed) · Date: 12/07/08 11:03 AM · On: Chapter 17: Damned
really gud
Author's Response: Hey Kat, Thanks for the review! It's always good to hear from new people! I'm glad you enjoy!
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 04/07/08 04:40 AM · On: Chapter 15: Eternal Laws 101 (cliff notes)
Three really lovely chapters. The lion was a brilliant idea,i loved it.And yes i would so love to pet a lion,Lol.
Author's Response: Yay! I knew I wasn't the only little girl who dreamed of taming a lion in heaven! Thanks Lindsay!
Reviewer: Glyconut (Signed) · Date: 03/07/08 09:28 PM · On: Chapter 15: Eternal Laws 101 (cliff notes)
NO!! Petty the lion was NOT over the top cheesy, especially when it's called Karsha!!!! LMAO That was a huge surprise!! Thank you!! She was their daughter? Oh WOW!! I read the last 3 chapters in one hit & I loved every word, every noun & syllable. AWESOME!! More soon please.
Author's Response: Hee! I thought you'd appreciate the little shout-out. I love slipping inside info into my stories. Yep, Pip is the daughter of Dean and Asher. Or would have been. Will be...? So glad you enjoyed them Jo!
Reviewer: GotTheShining (Signed) · Date: 02/07/08 05:01 PM · On: Chapter 15: Eternal Laws 101 (cliff notes)
Girl, you seriously need some crackers with that cheese:) What happened when Sam saw Dean jump? We need a little more angst to balance the cheese.
Author's Response: Cracker and angst are coming. We still have to recover the bodies, right? Thanks for leaving the review!
Reviewer: Supernaturalfan15 (Signed) · Date: 02/07/08 09:51 AM · On: Chapter 13: Heaven or Hell?
gud
Author's Response: Eloquent! You must have been learning from Dean. :) Thanks for leaving a review hon!
Reviewer: HauntMe42 (Signed) · Date: 02/07/08 09:11 AM · On: Chapter 13: Heaven or Hell?
Cool story! I really don't think that they would CHOOSE hell though. lol. Who the hell would? lol
Author's Response: Hee! Who the hell would choose hell? I guess we'll find out. Thanks for the review! I hope you continue to enjoy the ride.
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 21/06/08 06:16 PM · On: Chapter 12: The Answer
Another fantastic chapter. So very sad,but you are going to make it right are'nt you?Lol.
Author's Response: Glad you liked it! thanks for the review! Never fear. Everything will end the way it should.
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