Reviewer: Cookie6 (Signed) · Date: 22/03/09 01:36 AM · On: Smiles
Wow, sensational chapter to wrap up your first chapter fic PB. You had the boys in perfect character and I loved it - snarky Dean and emo Sam. You tied all the ends of your fic up so it left us readers very satisfied, great stuff. You should be extremely proud of yourself little one. I'm just sorry it took me so long to catch up on this terrific fic!
Reviewer: Cookie6 (Signed) · Date: 22/03/09 01:31 AM · On: Not Possible!
Oh Pooka, your little John and Mary touch was just lovely, just what our boys needed *big sigh* Another thrilling chapter, you writing just gets better and better. Not only is this story plot dynamite, but your use of description and dialogue just paints clear images in our heads. Your Loki was sinister and I loved how you had Sam all fierce hunter. I am loving this chapter fic of yours. PS your song choice at the beginning of each chapter is perfect.
Reviewer: Cookie6 (Signed) · Date: 22/03/09 01:24 AM · On: Hope
It seems I have a bit of PB-reading to do, you have been busy! I was away from UnGen for a while, but I miss everyone so here I am! Pook, what an awesome chapter! Your description is very exciting, in fact downright scary in some places! You showed Sam's emotion so well, and then that cliffie!! I sat here in shock! My fingers are nearly tripping over each other as I head for that 'next' button and that's exactly what a good writer does - sucks their readers right into their story. Great work my little friend!
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 19/07/08 01:30 PM · On: Smiles
That was a lovely ending to a great story. I always like to think that John and Mary are together somewhere.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading! I like to think they went somewhere safe and they are still watching out for their boys. Thanks again. Ashton.
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 15/07/08 06:31 AM · On: Not Possible!
A very exciting chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Ashton
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 22/06/08 09:47 AM · On: Hope
Great chapter. The part where Sam felt his mother around him was lovely. I'm looking forward to more.
Author's Response: Thanks! I really wanted to put his mother in there somewhere so what better way than through hope. Glad you decided to stick around. ~Ashy/Pooka Bunny
Reviewer: Cookie6 (Signed) · Date: 06/05/08 05:08 AM · On: Planes are Hell!
Pook, what an exciting chapter! Your descriptions are fantastic, particularly the witch transforming. Animated seatbelts!! Good grief, how freaky! Now wonder Dean was shocked! And that clown is downright creepy! You have captured Dean's character very well and you have scare and creepy going on. Such a great job! Looking forward to the rest! Kitty X
Author's Response:  , Oh! Thanx sooo much Kitty! I always have seemed to have trouble w/ my descriptions so to me this is gold! I agree w/ ya there I get sooo creeped out by clowns. lol Thanx again! Ashy xx
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 03/05/08 02:44 PM · On: Planes are Hell!
very very good,poor dean stuck on a plane.
Author's Response: Hehe. Thanx! Yup dean's stuck there. ashy xx
Reviewer: Hunter4Life (Signed) · Date: 02/05/08 06:33 PM · On: Shiny Shoes
Ooooh Ashy. kinda creepy dontcha think? i lovs it! update soon! =-b
Author's Response: Oh.... creepy!! Lol love creepy stuff. Thanx for "lighting up" my day! aka: the stars. Ashy xx Sent the chapter in on thurs. so should come soon.
Reviewer: Cookie6 (Signed) · Date: 30/04/08 03:45 AM · On: Shiny Shoes
Ooo Mini-Pook, you're writing a chapter fic, good on you! Again, I am very proud of you!! But gotta say, how cheeky are you? Midget-strippers and Gumby-girl!?!? And Sam in only pj bottoms!?!?! Yeah, I saw your bio page!!! What a horrifying predicament for Sam! A clown with razor sharp teeth in a total black and white environment! Very scary! And no Dean in sight but an evil threat. You have us on the edge of our seats Ash! This is a great start, can't wait for the rest. Kitty X
Author's Response: Kit kit, Hehe thanx! I'm not cheeky!!! lol you love that bio pic and u know it. ;) yup well yer going to have to read the rest, once i get it typed, to find out what goes on next. *evil grin* Ashy xx
Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 28/04/08 06:18 PM · On: Shiny Shoes
Great start! This sounds like it will a very interesting, and scary story....I am right along side with Sammy. I hate clowns! ~kayla
Author's Response: Kayla, Hehe thanks! I'm with ya too I loath clowns. They scare me so bad lol. Hope you'll enjoy the further chapters, if my teachers ever stop giving reports lol. Thanks again! Ashy xx
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 28/04/08 08:30 AM · On: Shiny Shoes
great start,i'll be looking out for chapter two.
Author's Response: Wow thanks! I should have chapter two up soon... as long as my school projects don't get in the way lol. Ashy xx
Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 28/04/08 04:55 AM · On: Shiny Shoes
Pooka. Hey hunny, whoa freaky wierd clowns! So not what you wanna wake up to especially not if you're a gigantic tall geek boy who's scared to death of ickle clownies! hopefully big brave Dean will save his baby bro next chapter? Love Funny Hat xxx
Author's Response: Fun Fun, Hehe. Thanx! I don't know... can't tell ya any little hints...lol. U will just have to read on. *evil smile* ashy xx
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