Reviewer: Ebbtide (Signed) · Date: 09/07/08 03:52 PM · On: Chapter 2
Oh. I'm in like with this fic. I especially enjoy the characterization. Great story!! :)
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 08/07/08 03:51 PM · On: Chapter 13
That was a brilliant story,i have enjoyed every minute of it. Thank you. I'll be watching out for your next story.
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 17/06/08 07:15 AM · On: Chapter 11
Two brilliant chapters,very exciting. Have a great holiday.
Author's Response: Thanks!! Had a great time but it's back to the grindstone today unfortunately... next chapter will be up as soon as poss - promise! Sarah
Reviewer: calUK (Signed) · Date: 17/06/08 04:54 AM · On: Chapter 11
Damn holidays! Emo Sam, Emo Dean (and I never thought I'd see that work, but tell-tale streaks from panicked tears and the nice little Score one, big brother, for opening up that big old wound and jabbing at it with a big stick. and maybe wiggling it about a bit guilt trip - fantastic! Can't wait to hear how he manages to dig his way out of that hole, if Sam lets him in to help in time... Say again, damn holidays! (Especially since I seem to be working flat out to cover everyone elses and not getting one myself!)
Author's Response: Damn holidays indeed!! Ha ha... I'm back now but apart from the sunburned (note, burnt not tanned) shoulders and the huge pile of work on my desk its like it never happened!! Glad you liked Emo Dean... I don't like to overdo it but maybe he can be an iccul bit emo... sometimes ;0) Hope you get a holiday soon hon, too bad you're covering everyone else!!!
Reviewer: ReccaF (Signed) · Date: 12/06/08 04:44 PM · On: Chapter 8
this has just gotten better and better with each chapter!!!! poor Sam, now this spirit is invading his head and pulling him apart..OUTSTANDING writing!!! Finally , we know for sure it's Emma- miss too good to be true- isn't. She wants Sam -all of him- Dean is not pleased with that idea- great tension and humor at the same time!!!! leave it to Dean to have the commentary going- he knew she was too good to be true. timing -tenor-vivid verbage-you have it all going!! AWESOME job!!! more please BRAVO!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review Recca and really glad you're enjoying it. Wow, you're making me blush!! Really appreciate the comments, thanks :0)
Sarah
Reviewer: supernaturaldh (Signed) · Date: 09/06/08 09:15 PM · On: Chapter 8
Great story, can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Hi, again, sorry for the late reply! Cheers for reading, hopefully I'll have the next update up soon!
Reviewer: calUK (Signed) · Date: 09/06/08 12:02 PM · On: Chapter 8
Oooh, scary, funny, hurt!Dean and a very over-sexed spirit? Fun fun fun! Keep 'em coming!
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 08/06/08 05:10 PM · On: Chapter 8
Brilliant chapter. So the nasty bitch is after Sam Lol. I can't wait to see what happens.
Author's Response: Sorry sorry sorry!! I'm rubbish at keeping up at replying to reviews... glad you're better than me at keeping up reading!! Yes, she's after him, but who wouldn't be, he's so yummy... ha ha!
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 05/06/08 05:39 PM · On: Chapter 7
Some more great chapters. Dean falling off the chairs was very funny. I can't wait to find out what's happened to Dean.
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 23/05/08 09:58 AM · On: Chapter 5
Very good i loved that chapter.
Author's Response: Cheers hon, thanks for the encouragement it's good to know that people are reading! Sxx
Reviewer: sandy (Signed) · Date: 22/05/08 01:15 AM · On: Chapter 5
really liked it. keep going.
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 17/05/08 06:31 PM · On: Chapter 4
this story is starting to get very interesting.can't wait for more.
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 14/05/08 03:06 PM · On: Chapter 3
great update,love the banter between sam and dean.
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 14/05/08 03:03 PM · On: Chapter 3
great update.love the banter between sam and dean.
Reviewer: Cookie6 (Signed) · Date: 08/05/08 04:18 PM · On: Chapter 3
Cute chapter, loved the bro banter, you did very well with your props budget *giggling* but they did get some serious research under their belts so it was budget well spent! This line made me smile - "he could hear his brother’s low, deep voice telling him it was okay, “Don’t cry Sammy, I know, I know it hurts” - behind the banter and the teasing the heart of the brothers deep bond. And loved Dean cheating, popping his shoulder back on 'two' instead of 'three', so Dean! The boys bitching about it, but each knowing that Dean was making it easier for Sam. I think you are spot on with Sam constantly worrying about the fallout of Meg's dirty work. It was too significant for it not to be in the back of both of their heads, no wonder you have them watching each other like hawks. Great chapter, loving your work.
Author's Response: Thanks again for the feedback Cookie, next chappy is on its way! I'm getting them out of the motel room for the next chapter but i'm afraid I've not splashed out on any special effects yet... saving them for the later chapters! Cheers for reading and taking to time to leave a review :0)
Reviewer: Ragamuffin (Signed) · Date: 06/05/08 09:40 AM · On: Chapter 3
Oh, I had to come out of loitering mode for this story - and submit my first ever review on this site!!! I just love how you portray the boys - the characterizations are spot on, it reads like an episode with plenty of added hurt Sam (which is my favorite). The brotherly bantering used to disguise real caring was beautifully done! Waiting eagerly for an update.
Author's Response: Oooh... I'm honoured to have your first ever review!! And don't worry, Sam's not quite out of the woods yet... Thanks for reading and leaving a review; it spurs me on to know that people are enjoying it xx
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 03/05/08 07:24 AM · On: Chapter 2
2 great updates,chapter 3 wasn't slow at all.i enjoyed it.
Author's Response: Thank you!! Didn't think Sammy was up to going back out hunting yet, poor baby.... sorry, I digress. Cheers for the review and I'll get the next part up as soon as humanly possible!
Reviewer: Cookie6 (Signed) · Date: 01/05/08 04:52 PM · On: Chapter 2
Great chapter. Dean bashing himself with guilt and self-blame for what happened to Sam was so Dean, you wrote that perfectly and as usual it made me sad. You also nailed Dean with this description "It never ceased to amaze him; if there were guns, weapons or first aid supplies to be packed up, Dean was positively anal about keeping them straight and tidy. A few day old pizza box, however, was invisible to him." Gotta love that! This was a ripper of a line"...Sam had somehow slipped past Dean, managed to turn himself from a gangly teenager into a powerhouse of a hunter." Yeah, we've noticed that too! Great choice of phrasing. Looking forward to finding more about your hunt, Great job.
Author's Response: Thanks again Cookie... the wayward pizza boxes etc always bug me, my hubby often asks me why I fantasise and obsess over men I'd never be able to live with - those boys are far too messy for me ;0) Cheers again and I'll hopefully be updating soon xx
Reviewer: ReccaF (Signed) · Date: 01/05/08 02:56 PM · On: Chapter 2
Poor Sammy, he never catches a break. the machine moving on it's own-too weird-even for the Winchesters. So this girl......??????.... the suspense is building and there are questions to be answered...OUTSTANDING writing!!!!! you have captured the boys banter and moves-EXCELLENT job... more lease!!! BRAVO!!!!
Author's Response: My goodness, you're making me blush!! Cheers for the review, and no, Sammy never catches a break. It's just too much fun to break him!! Sorry Sammy!!
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 27/04/08 09:51 AM · On: Chapter 1
great start,looking forward to more.
Reviewer: buttercup (Signed) · Date: 27/04/08 07:09 AM · On: Chapter 1
WOW!! Great start... You have my full attention - I'm completely hooked. Can't wait for what happens next, please update soon sophie x x
Author's Response: Thanks for reading Sophie and appreciate the review - I'm a bit late replying to this but I'm hoping to have the next chapter up in the next couple of days xx
Reviewer: supernaturaldh (Signed) · Date: 26/04/08 10:59 PM · On: Chapter 1
Awesome story, can't wait for the next chapter. Hurry....
Author's Response: Oooh, thanks, I'm typing as fast as my fingers can go... promise!
Reviewer: Cookie6 (Signed) · Date: 26/04/08 09:48 PM · On: Chapter 1
Very exciting story! Your prologue worked really well to set the tension and establish the scary factor and your ch 1 was edge of the seat stuff. Loved the dialogue between the boys, and how you wrote their reflections and thoughts about each other was spot on - yep, you nailed the 'traditional' alright! You have mystery and Winchester brobond - a winning combination. Loved it, looking forward to more
Author's Response: Thanks Cookie, am enjoying writing this one! Glad you agree that I got the 'traditional' - I love the boys fighting spirits and not having to worry about deals etc!
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