Reviewer: TuckerCat (Signed) · Date: 14/08/08 01:11 PM · On: Chapter 6
I just keep writing the same things - you are a very good writer, I am really caught up in this story. It shows how Dean would learn to believe only Sammy mattered. Great work.
Reviewer: TuckerCat (Signed) · Date: 14/08/08 01:10 PM · On: Chapter 11
I agree with hope being something that is born in the dark. When you are hurting it is always dark and hope brings the light to help mend. Without hope it is impossible to continue with joy in life. I can't tell you how much I have enjoyed your stories. You have written much of what I have felt. I have never gone through physical abuse of any sort, but not having someone who loves you just for yourself is hard. Thanks for writing.
Reviewer: TuckerCat (Signed) · Date: 14/08/08 09:39 AM · On: Chapter 6
I just keep writing the same things - you are a very good writer, I am really caught up in this story. It shows how Dean would learn to believe only Sammy mattered. Great work.
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 15/05/08 04:47 PM · On: Chapter 11
The last conversation at the dinner table was a perfect family discussion, especially considering the family! I loved it! I'm so glad there's another Brotherhood story coming! I love your work!
Reviewer: Winchester_Warriors (Signed) · Date: 15/05/08 03:01 PM · On: Chapter 1
This was fabulous! A brilliant story! I think you did very well in showing us the themes you wanted to represent. (Good cliffies too.) I was going insane, feeling like they couldn't post fast enough. So good! (deep breath) Okay, I think I'm going to go back to lurking now. :D Thank you so much for sharing your talents with us!
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 15/05/08 01:52 PM · On: Chapter 10
When Charles asked Sam what he wants to be when he grows up and Sam said "a dragon" my heart melted. Soooo perfectly innocent and telling! Great, Manuela and Charles, but who's in the backseat?
Reviewer: ReccaF (Signed) · Date: 13/05/08 12:04 PM · On: Chapter 9
This was an AWESOME chapter!!!!!! I especially liked the idea of Jim Murphy finally taking a hand in stopping Peter-good shot!!!!!! Caleb was totally there for the boys.Mackland needs to realize that Caleb is right. OUTSTANDING writing!!! It's time the Brotherhood get Sammy away from Connor-he's not to be trusted on any level. Your words have painted such a clear picture of the action and suspense-EXCELLENT JOB!!!! More please!!!!! BRAVO!!!!
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 13/05/08 11:23 AM · On: Chapter 9
Incredible chapter! I lvoe it when the hunters work together. And Sammy's innocence with all their hardenend skepticism is so refreshing! Yay Caleb! give it to him with both barrels! I can't believe their letting Charles separate the boys again. Damn!
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 11/05/08 10:08 PM · On: Chapter 8
I'm so glad you told us the meaning behind the two of spades! What a sweet story! Run Sammy run!!
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 11/05/08 09:00 PM · On: Chapter 7
Wow! I can't believe Marcus went to Jim's to get Dean! Too bad Caleb wasn't more on the ball. Those poor boys! You have me on the edge of my seat!!!!
Reviewer: ReccaF (Signed) · Date: 09/05/08 12:26 PM · On: Chapter 8
OMG... now Peter will have Sammy too?????? I'm jumping out of my seat here- Sammy's walking right into danger-where is Manuela????? I didn't think the suspense could go up anymore-i was wrong-AWESOME AWESOME writing!!! you have painted such a vivid picture that I just want to warn Sammy to run-SPECTACULAR!!!!! You are the master!!! More please. BRAVO!!!!
Reviewer: ReccaF (Signed) · Date: 09/05/08 12:19 PM · On: Chapter 7
OK... this is just crazy. Going right into Jim's house to get Dean- pretty bold for a cowardly killer. You certainly know how to crank up the drama, action and suspense in one fell swoop-AWESOME!!!!!!! Jim's revelation about he may be a little too far from the action-ya think!!!! Caleb getting shot- this kid is never going to heal-What will John say now...he needs to get angry and do something- OUTSTANDING writing!!!! BRAVO!!!
Reviewer: Midge (Signed) · Date: 07/05/08 08:37 AM · On: Chapter 6
This story is good, and I can honestly say I have fallen, well and truly in love with The Brotherhood concept. Looking forward to lots more.
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 06/05/08 05:50 PM · On: Chapter 6
I can't believe John is going to use Dean as bait, especially after he just lost Sammy! I'd think he'd wrap Dean in bubble plastic and lock him in the Hunters Tomb. After Sam's nightmare I'm afraid that Sammy's going to get involved somehow and put himself in danger.
Reviewer: ReccaF (Signed) · Date: 06/05/08 02:51 PM · On: Chapter 6
OK... so now my heart's racing thinking of Dean being the bait to this psycho. Sammy's talk about Martha's Vineyard and name changing -dam that Connor-what's John waiting for .......??????????? And i still get a sneaking feeling that Sammy isn't going to stick to the pinky swear abouy staying in the hotel........ AWESOME AWESOME writing!!!!! talk about suspense.... More please!!!!!!!! Bravo!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 06/05/08 02:28 PM · On: Chapter 6
Great chapter, keeping us fans dangling, wanting more. So PLEASE !!! update soon.
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 05/05/08 02:13 PM · On: Chapter 5
Excellent chapter! I love the rare moments when different members of the Brotherhood connect and you get to see why they care so deeply for one another. You have to post soon! My sanity hangs in the balance.
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 05/05/08 01:50 PM · On: Chapter 4
So funny when Joshua refers to Caleb and himself as the brother and the red-headed stop cousin when it comes time to fess up to John Winchester! "I think I just threw up a little." My daughter and her friends say that all the time. I can really relate to the way you write Caleb and Sam. I have children the same ages and you are spot on!
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 05/05/08 10:54 AM · On: Chapter 3
OMG! all this time I thought Sam would be the monster's next victim and it was really Dean! Very clever! Poor Sam. I'll bet he's beside himself with worry for his big brother.
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 05/05/08 10:26 AM · On: Chapter 2
My eyes had barely dried when you had to make the tear ducts work overtime again. At least we know that Sam's still alive and well---for now.
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 05/05/08 10:12 AM · On: Chapter 1
After the heart-shredding, helplessness of the last chapter of Dragons, it's wonderful to have some action. I'm eagerly moving on.
Reviewer: ReccaF (Signed) · Date: 30/04/08 03:38 PM · On: Chapter 4
this story just gets better and better. the thoughts revealed in this chapter were really intense. Now we know this sick sob is also a child molester. Poor Caleb-seeing Dean's agony , and also seeing thru the sicko's eyes.AWESOME piece of writing!!!!!!! It was interesting to 'see" Joshua's interaction with Dean and his need to compare their lives. Quite an interesting segway to get to the "mother" aspect. EXCELLENT work!! Only a truly talented writer could accomplish this - you are one in a million. more please..... BRAVO!!!! ps: again , I got carried away-I relly love your writing, it just takes me a lot of words to say so.
Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 28/04/08 10:39 AM · On: Chapter 3
Enjoyed reading this chapter and will be waiting for the next installment
Reviewer: ReccaF (Signed) · Date: 25/04/08 11:55 AM · On: Chapter 2
OK... this was a great chapter.!!!!! More tears for the boys...Dean is a piece of work ...getting to Sammy with the dragons and the toy dog. It was good to "see" that there were at least 2 people who were nice to Sammy...making war on his nanny...only Sammy.LOVED IT!!!!! Now to Connor- he needs to be taken down more than a peg or 2. This so called grandfather that works a lot-he's just garbage in my book. Your characterization of him makes me want to deck him every time i see his name-AWESOME writing!!!!!! as always , your stories do not disappoint-perfect in every way!!! More please. BRAVO!!!!!!!
Reviewer: PropGal (Signed) · Date: 24/04/08 04:10 PM · On: Chapter 1
i'm completely intrigued. can't wait for the next chapter.
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