Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 30/06/09 08:26 PM · On: Chapter 9

Great ending!  I'm not certain why John didn't do anything.  Was he angry at Paul or overwhelmed to have Dean back?

I really loved Jake!  He's a cool kid.  His father raised him right.

Author's Response:

Thanks Shannondoah for all your wonderful reviews. I think John is both overwhelmed and angry so he don't do anything. I'm glad  you love Jake! I like him too.

~A

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 30/06/09 08:08 PM · On: Chapter 7

Wonderfully exciting!  You put a lot of thought into this ritual and all the possible loopholes.  Excellent work!

Reviewer: rahne (Signed) · Date: 02/02/09 01:51 AM · On: Chapter 9

Hi again. I guess I really like your stuff, I've spent all tonight reading it. I never review anything before it is complete, so you get just the one for this. Not sure if you got John just right here, although it is like John to just give up at the end. He's been hurt so much he hasn't much hope left, I'm afraid. But Sam and Dean are too tightly bonded to be fooled, or to give up on each other. At this point in their lives even they haven't really figured out just how bonded they are. If you haven't done so, you might like to read some pre-colombian New World mythology. Here the "hero" was almost always two boys, twins or brothers, who complemented each other exactly. One was always a warrior, and one a seer or shaman. I see that all through Kripke's stories of the Winchesters.
P.S. HEAR(pg21) should be here. Another of the frequently mixed up homonyms I see every day. Like PASSED/PAST or LOOSE/LOSE or BEAR/BARE or THEN/THAN, the writer really needs to pay attention, because Spellcheck won't save you. Since I don't use my Email or chat with most of the other writers, maybe you can help me spread the word. A lot of good ideas are missed because it's too painful to read with so many grammatic or syntactical errors. (Not that you need to worry, you write very clearly and well, baring the occasional homonym.) Keep writing about season 4, you seem to have a good grasp of our boys.

Author's Response:

Thanks for the corrections! I'll go fix them soon! In the meantime, I'm so glad you've like it!

~A

Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 14/11/08 10:10 PM · On: Chapter 8

Well, I truly hope John doesn't really feel that way about his sons.A soldier captured by the enemy?  I just wanted to slap John but then at the end of the chapter you had him weeping like a child (you don't do that unless you love someone). Looking forward to seeing how Sammy can work this problem out! Literally!!!

Author's Response:

I think John has moments of both feelings. I think he thinks of his sons as soldiers to distance himself from the situation, but it doesn't work so well when it's going to hit you in the face.

 ~A

Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 14/11/08 09:58 PM · On: Chapter 5

Oh oh, I hope Dean didn't cause Paul to have a psychotic breakdown. I hope he doesn't hurt Dean too much.

Author's Response:

Guess you'll have to find out...

~A

Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 14/11/08 09:46 PM · On: Chapter 3

Yikes! I'm not sure that was Pastor's Jim's motive. Very curious as to where you are taking this story.

Author's Response: Curious is very good. Thanks!

Reviewer: mustang (Signed) · Date: 16/08/08 09:22 AM · On: Chapter 9

that was an awesome story. I really felt bad for Paul in the end, even thou he hurt Dean. Family is everything. Thanks for writing. 

Author's Response:

Thanks mustang!  Glad you liked it and thanks for the stars!

~A

Reviewer: SNholic (Signed) · Date: 31/05/08 08:10 AM · On: Chapter 8

what happen next???? the spell wasn't complete????? okay, im obssesed!! 

Author's Response:

Sweet!  "I've still got it."  Glad you're liking it!

 ~A

Reviewer: mymuseandi (Signed) · Date: 06/05/08 02:57 AM · On: Chapter 9

Love this story....it's not often that you see in the series that Dean gets kidnapped and Sam has to save him....and i love reading stories like this.. :)

Author's Response: Thanks!  Glad you like it!  :D

Reviewer: tvbatina (Signed) · Date: 03/05/08 02:44 PM · On: Chapter 7

Poor Dean - can't wait to see what happens next! Please update soon...

Author's Response: Will do!

Reviewer: nurple_girl (Signed) · Date: 03/05/08 11:45 AM · On: Chapter 8

Man you're harsh! Cold John. I like nice John who loves his sons not the drill sarge. But in the end it sounds like you have John finally realizing it....I hope! Oh yeah, poor Dean! Save him!

Author's Response: John does realize it, I think.  John is really hard for me to write.  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: impalamedean1 (Signed) · Date: 02/05/08 02:35 PM · On: Chapter 7

Whats gonna happen to Dean??? can't wait till the next chapter!! please update soon!

Author's Response: I've posted!  Hopefully the last two chapters will appear soon!  Glad you like it! :D

Reviewer: Midge (Signed) · Date: 01/05/08 01:24 PM · On: Chapter 7

Oh dear, poor Dean. I do hope the cavalry arrives soon. 

Author's Response: Next up, the cavalry...  ;)