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Reviews For Gone to the Dogs
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 01/07/09 10:32 PM · On: Beep...Beep...

Acme!!  I can't stop laughing!

This was a totally amusing story!  It was such a breath of air after the angst fest I usually read.  Thanks for sharing it!  I'll bet it was a joy to write.



Author's Response:

It was an absolute joy to write. I'm so glad you enjoyed it.

Laura

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 01/07/09 10:17 PM · On: We Hunt Demons All The Time...No, Really, We Do!

"Gunfire first thing in the morning, as an alarm clock, was never a good thing."  Priceless!

The whole caper with paying for the beer was masterfully done!  I could picture it as part of an episode.  And the fact that Dean thinks stealing liver is more of an embarassment than stealing beer is something.



Author's Response: *snickers*  Thanks!

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 01/07/09 09:53 PM · On: Sometimes You Just Have To Improvise...

you know what Dean says about squirrels,: "they're just rats pretending to be fancy."  It's only natural he'd be scared of them.

"A few minutes later he gave up his pretense long enough to flip Sam off when he heard the words whispered about girls, and screaming, and squirrels.  Dean whispering back about brothers who run naked from squirrels brought complete silence."  the perfect way to end this chapter!  It seems the boys have equal ammunition to use against one another.



Author's Response:

Yes, they do!

Thanks for reading and commenting.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 01/07/09 09:40 PM · On: How Hard Can It Be? Right???

This just keeps getting better and better!  Wile E on a skateboard---Hee!

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 01/07/09 09:29 PM · On: It's Got Solid Black Eyes!

“Aw, Sammy, there’s no alcohol in it, that’d be a waste.”  Dean couldn’t help the snicker, “Besides you get a virgin to shower with you.”  So funny!  This story is a laugh riot!  Just like Bad Day at Red Rock.

 

Oh that lucky Marion!  Some women have all the fun.

 

 



Author's Response: Yeah, I was a bit jealous of Marion myself. Thanks again for reading and commenting.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 01/07/09 09:14 PM · On: The Game's Afoot!

"Dean also heard cackling.  Cackling!  What the hell?  Nothing should cackle."  Damn straight!

"Problem was, what Sam didn’t see, or was ignoring was something about to get Sam."  That was a funny way to put a serious statement.  Loved it!

Great cliff hanger!  They usually aren't humorous which adds oomph to this.



Author's Response: Hehehee...thanks for reading.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 01/07/09 09:02 PM · On: If You Don't Have a Plan, at Least Have Back-Up...

Hilarious!  The antics in the clinic had me practically rolling with laughter.  The Winchester luck was in full suck mode.

Is this town real or did you make it up?  I know towns that pick a theme then over-do it to death.

And the consistent reappearance of the stuffed coyote is great!



Author's Response:

Oh sheesh I hope that town isn't real!  LOL

I made it up.

Thanks for reading and commenting.

Reviewer: aquariannightsky (Signed) · Date: 13/02/09 05:42 PM · On: Beep...Beep...

That cracked me up. haahaahaaheehee

Author's Response:

I'm glad you got a few giggles.

Thanks for reading!

Laura

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 08/02/09 08:05 AM · On: Beep...Beep...

WELLL THTHTHATTTSSS ALLL FOLLLLKKKKSSS.

I give you credit for the hard work of imagery.

Thanks can't wait for another one.



Author's Response: Thank you for your reviews and for reading!

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 08/02/09 07:51 AM · On: We Hunt Demons All The Time...No, Really, We Do!

“And you pack of fur-covered spikes, will NOT latch onto my brother anymore. Or me! Keep that litter crap in the boxes.” The gun aimed down at the squirrel. “As for you, YOU are a squirrel. You belong outside. You do not sleep in my bed, Sam’s bed, or any bed. I pick on Sam, not you. Go find your own brother and pick on him. And under no circumstances do you shower with either of us. Find a freaking tree!”

Now that is a DEAN chick-flick moment.

This would do well as a cartoon show.

All the vivid actions are noticable along with the imagery.



Author's Response:

Hehee...I guess that is a definate Dean moment.

Thanks again.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 08/02/09 07:26 AM · On: Sometimes You Just Have To Improvise...

This is getting to be more and more exciting.

I love all the imagery and vivid climate in this chapter.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading and all your great comments.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 08/02/09 06:42 AM · On: How Hard Can It Be? Right???

This sound like a cartoon enterprise. Cute.



Author's Response: Hehehee...thanks for reading.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 31/01/09 04:07 AM · On: It's Got Solid Black Eyes!

Hestericlly cute, but dangerous and now I feel that you as a writer ay have DEAN sense of humor.

Author's Response: Awww...thanks so much.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 31/01/09 02:02 AM · On: The Game's Afoot!

This coyot is being a true bitch and almost like DEAN or it has some of his personality of being COCKY!

Author's Response:

Yeh, Dean and the Coyote are a pretty even match.

Thanks for reading and commenting.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 31/01/09 01:51 AM · On: If You Don't Have a Plan, at Least Have Back-Up...

I'm delighted to read this a lot of imagery and i like that.

Author's Response: Thank you so very much!

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 30/01/09 11:42 AM · On: Some Serious Coyote Kink Goin' On!

Very tactical with many imagery.

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: ashon13 (Signed) · Date: 02/01/09 02:09 AM · On: Beep...Beep...

Ahahahahahaha! *takes breath*...ahahahahaha! That has honest to god got to be the funniest story I've ever read! Poor little squirrel, just wanted to hang out with the boys..in the car..in the shower..in the bed.. I mean..who doesnt? :P Amazing story. *applauds*

Author's Response: *Blushes*  Thank you.

Reviewer: ashon13 (Signed) · Date: 02/01/09 01:49 AM · On: We Hunt Demons All The Time...No, Really, We Do!

Well....at least the squirrel has good taste...if I knew Sam was going to shower, I'd be in there every chance I got too...*giggles*..:P

Author's Response: Ya got a point there.  Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: ashon13 (Signed) · Date: 02/01/09 01:30 AM · On: Sometimes You Just Have To Improvise...

I LOVE THAT SQUIRREL!

Author's Response: He is a bit entertaining, isn't he...thanks for the comments and for reading.

Reviewer: ashon13 (Signed) · Date: 02/01/09 01:11 AM · On: How Hard Can It Be? Right???

Okay, so I gotta say, I'm still laughing at this line "I'll get you cookies." HA! Loved it!

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: ashon13 (Signed) · Date: 02/01/09 12:44 AM · On: It's Got Solid Black Eyes!

I take my previous statement back..THIS is the best chapter EVER! I loved everything about this one, in fact I read certain parts like 5 times cuz once just didnt seem like enough! I love your Dean, and especially your Sam! And might I say Marion too, points to her for standing after that little encounter with Sammy. :P

Author's Response: Hehehehe...I like them a lot too...thanks again!

Reviewer: ashon13 (Signed) · Date: 02/01/09 12:18 AM · On: The Game's Afoot!

Oh my! What is it?! Is it a bear?!..oh right, just read the next chapter..hehe...anyways, I LOVE this story! The boys getting taken down by little kittens, stuffed animals, and clothes! Genius! And I have to mention that I love how detailed you are, I always have a really clear image and visual of whats goin on, and I really love that! :D *rushes on to the next part*

Author's Response:

Thank you so much I appreciate and enjoy your comments a lot!

Laura

Reviewer: ashon13 (Signed) · Date: 01/01/09 11:37 PM · On: Some Serious Coyote Kink Goin' On!

Oh my gosh! *giggles uncontrollably* That was the best chapter ever! So sweet and funny! I laughed through the entire thing, even got a couple of weird stares from my family sitting over there *points in some direction*..I always have the tendency to glance down the page, and every time I did, I'd catch a few words that would have me laughing again...and um..I'd probably be the same way about that coyote...I dont think I'd bury it in the woods, but still...Hehe, anyways, this is an awesome story, first one in a WHILE that has made me honestly laugh till my cheeks hurt. :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D

Author's Response:

Thanks, I'm so glad to give a giggle...I laughed a lot while writing it too.

Laura

Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 25/09/08 11:39 AM · On: Beep...Beep...

Dean reacted in his customary way to Sam’s facial acrobatics. He ignored it. - Loved that line and how true.  Great story I loved the homage to WilE and the road runner.  Thanks for the laugh and I'll catch you on the next one ;) Kel

Author's Response:

Thanks. I figure Wile E and Winchesters were sort of made to go together.

Laura

Reviewer: Noelani618 (Signed) · Date: 13/09/08 09:52 PM · On: Beep...Beep...

Beep! Beep!  LOL

Beautifully hilarious Laura!  Great story!



Author's Response:

Hehehee...thanks!

Laura 

 

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