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Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 07/10/08 07:46 PM · On: Chapter 9

What a riveting chapter. For one moment, I thought that Sam would be the next victim of the demon, I'm relieved that both got out of the school alive. Great story so far Laura, what'll happen next, can't wait to know.

Author's Response: Thanks so much!

Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 01/10/08 09:35 PM · On: Chapter 8

Dean and Sam're in big trouble. I hope that whatever is Dean's plan it's going to work. I'm looking forward to more. 

Author's Response: Thanks so much.

Reviewer: palemoon (Signed) · Date: 29/09/08 05:28 AM · On: Chapter 7

Well done! Your series has to be one of my favourites! I love the way you included the other set of siblings. I hope you include them in your future stories! Fantastic!

Author's Response:

Thank you. Dante and Concha will be in this story also.

 

Reviewer: ReccaF (Signed) · Date: 23/09/08 05:11 PM · On: Chapter 7

this is a very powerful chapter.

right from the start , the confrontation with the cops- Dean and the law- never a mix!!!!!

Sammy thinking about the Boogyman and all it's connotations -AWESOME writing!!

You can still feel the slimy,horror that attacked them back in that  other school- the current pictures drawn by these children bringing those memories to Sam's mind.

Dean's touch, a look, a smile- Sam's anchor -his protection- his guardian-his best friend.OUTSTANDING  job!!!

each chapter brings more tension and suspense to the  story!!excellent storytelling  at it's best!!

MORE PLEASE!!!!!!!!

BRAVO!!!!!!



Author's Response:

You always humble me with your kind reviews...thanks.

Laura

Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 21/09/08 09:52 PM · On: Chapter 7

Gripping chapter. Poor children, victims of this monster. Terrific story so far, I'm looking forward to more.

Author's Response: Thanks so much!

Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 25/07/08 09:46 PM · On: Chapter 6

Dean and Sam rescued the impala, I'm so relieved. Loved the conversation at the end, awesome brotherly moment. I enjoy so much this story, great work so far Bayre.

Author's Response:

Thank you, I'm so glad you're enjoying it and I very much appreciate your comments, they're awesome.

Laura

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 25/07/08 05:05 PM · On: Chapter 4

Always glad to see Craven.

Ooohh!  Ghost children are so cool!  I'm glad Sam's made a friend with the dead orphans.  This should be interesting!



Author's Response: Hehehehee....thanks Shannon.

Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 03/07/08 05:28 PM · On: Chapter 5

Terrific chapter Laura, it was worth the wait. With the help of Craven, Dean and SAm got away from the hunters. What Sam saw, he left Dean alone. I'm looking forward to more.

Author's Response:

Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Laura

Reviewer: Noelani618 (Signed) · Date: 03/07/08 02:49 PM · On: Chapter 5

Would it shock you if I said the scene of Craven saying "Uh-uh.  No, very impolite" makes me think of Captain Jack Sparrow in COTBP?  LOL  Anyway, I can't wait to find out what has Sam running off.  Poor Dean!  

Author's Response:

Hehhe...I never even thought of that!

Thanks so much Tamara!

Laura

Reviewer: Noelani618 (Signed) · Date: 01/06/08 05:28 PM · On: Chapter 4

Hey, wonderful chapter Laura!  Things are really heating up now!  Can't wait to read more. 

And I'm sorry about the late review, I never received and email from saying this site that it was updated.  And I didn't check either.  :(  Oops



Author's Response: Awww...no worries Tamara.  Thanks so much, I'm glad you liked.

Reviewer: Big Fan (Signed) · Date: 31/05/08 12:36 PM · On: Prologue/Chapter 1

Hey, awesome storyline....alwayz luv an overprotective Dean...lol. Plz put up da next chapter asap....Pretty please!!

Author's Response: Thanks so much...will be updating soon.

Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 25/05/08 06:04 PM · On: Chapter 4

Suspenseful chapter. What a relief Dean is alright. Craven showed up, great. Sam had to deal with hunters and the Boogeyman but he got the unexpected help from a ghost child. Terrific story so far Laura, can't wait for your next update. 

Author's Response:

Aww...thanks so much, glad you're enjoying it.

Laura 

 

Reviewer: danny (Signed) · Date: 25/05/08 06:18 AM · On: Chapter 4

love it update soon please

danny

xxx

 



Author's Response: Thanks so much!

Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 11/05/08 07:30 PM · On: Chapter 3

Poor Sam thinking that the amulet is to protect Dean from him. The last scene of Dean and Sam hanging onto each other was so intense. Where's Dean now, hope that Sam is alright. What a cliffhanger, I can't wait for more. Captivating story so far Laura.

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 10/05/08 08:51 AM · On: Chapter 3

OMG!!  I can't believe...wow!  Dean was sucked...and Sam is still...how will they...wow!

Love the part about the space between Dean's body and his jacket where Sam feels safe.



Author's Response: LOL......thanks so much Shannon.

Reviewer: calUK (Signed) · Date: 10/05/08 05:58 AM · On: Prologue/Chapter 1

Okay, now I'm about to faint from the adrenaline rush of that last paragraph - stunning, terrifying, awesome writing, you crammed in so much suspense and angst it's just taken me three tries to type this my fingers are shaking so much - and we're only on chapter three!

If the rest of this story carries on the same way, or anything at all like the rest of your stuff, it's gonna be fantastic and I really, really can't wait.

Be warned though - saving up some rotten tomatos all ready for evil cliffies...!



Author's Response:

Save up plastic coverings---check!  LOL

Thanks so much for reading and for your delightful comments.  I'm so glad you liked the chapter.

Laura

Reviewer: hgarf (Signed) · Date: 10/05/08 02:36 AM · On: Chapter 3

Hi,

I don't really have much to say except Excellent!!! I can tell this is going to be as exciting and gripping as your other two previous stories in this series.

Can't wait for the next update. Brilliant!!!!



Author's Response: Thanks for reading and commenting.  I very much appreciate it.

Reviewer: supernaturaldh (Signed) · Date: 09/05/08 10:07 PM · On: Chapter 3

Awesome story.  I love it.  Did I say awesome.  You  have me hook, line, and sinker.  Can't wait for the next chapter.  Hurry!!

 



Author's Response: Thanks so much!

Reviewer: jensenluva28 (Signed) · Date: 09/05/08 08:55 PM · On: Chapter 3

AHHH! OMG in like a half a paragraph you managed to "get rid of" Sam and Dean and leave me hanging on the edge of my seat biting my nails! way-to-go! can't wait for the next chapter! :)

Author's Response: Hehehe....Thanks.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 02/05/08 08:49 PM · On: Chapter 2

Driving into a hurricane?  Only a Winchester would do something like that!  I can't wait to find out more about the monster at the orphanage, especially since Dean's nightmare.



Author's Response:

You'll be seeing plenty of that particular demonic entity.

Thanks for reading and commenting.

Laura

Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 02/05/08 07:30 PM · On: Chapter 2

Gripping chapter. What a nightmare, I'm glad that Dean told Sam about it. With the hurricane, hunters in town, the mystery behind the orphanage and the power out, the tension is building up. I can hardly wait for more.

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: ReccaF (Signed) · Date: 02/05/08 03:35 PM · On: Chapter 2

OK... the suspense and tension is already jacked up several notches.

Dean's dream of the demon- of his attack on Sam  -a warning??? and they are in the middle of a hurricane-where these demons get their power-AWESOME

So, just by chance , we have a group of hunters eating at that rest stop..??????.......chills are already creeping up.

Dean;s bad feeling should be 4 alarm at this point.EXCELLENT set up for what's to come.

I'm already  getting jumpy, waiting to see where this is going.

more please

BRAVO!!!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much.  The dream is a combination warning and rehash of what happened in the previous story.  But yes, Sam and this demon---not a good combination.

Those were indeed other hunters.

Thanks again!

Laura 

 

 

Reviewer: Bookworm (Signed) · Date: 24/04/08 06:49 PM · On: Prologue/Chapter 1

Looks awsome will be waiting for more chapters. keep up the good work

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: d6l2j7 (Signed) · Date: 22/04/08 07:00 PM · On: Prologue/Chapter 1

I am so glad you are continuing from Gale Warning.  I really loved that story.  I hope Concha makes an apearance.  I really like her character.  Can't wait till the next chapter.

Author's Response:

Thanks so much.  I think she might be around for a minute or two.

Laura

Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 21/04/08 08:32 PM · On: Prologue/Chapter 1

WooHoo!Laura, you finally start Gale Warnings sequel, great news. Terrific start, I'm already hooked. Intriguing story about the orphanage and Melinda, Ezra's disappearance, can't wait to learn more about it. So Dean lived near Sam's place in Palo Alto, what a revelation. Poor Sam, his headaches sounded so painful. I'm looking forward for more.

Author's Response:

I'm thrilled to hear you've enjoyed the first chapter.  Thanks so much for reading and commenting.

Laura

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