Reviewer: Midge (Signed) · Date: 08/01/09 01:33 PM · On: Chapter 15
Amazing story. Well done. I just need to go off and read the previous stories to this series now.
Author's Response: Thank you! Hope you enjoy them. Laura
Reviewer: Midge (Signed) · Date: 08/01/09 12:05 PM · On: Chapter 13
Thanks for the link to the original version of Sam's hallucination. Personally I think the original gives a much better understanding of exactly what the demon is forcing Sam to endure. And that horror is truly horrific. Of to read more.
Author's Response: Thanks, and I appreciate you commenting on both chapters. Laura
Reviewer: Midge (Signed) · Date: 08/01/09 06:22 AM · On: Chapter 10
Your opening story note about cranking up the heat on the boys was spot on, you certainly have. I'm going to have trouble concentrating at work this afternoon thinking about this. See you again tonight. Midge
Author's Response: Ok, no blaming me if you can't work..hehehehe...thanks for reading and commenting.
Reviewer: Midge (Signed) · Date: 08/01/09 05:44 AM · On: Chapter 8
Oh my, oh my, oh my. My heart is in my mouth. Can't stop reading though...
Author's Response: Hhhahaa...thanks so much. I'm glad you're enjoying. Thanks for commenting. Laura
Reviewer: Midge (Signed) · Date: 08/01/09 02:41 AM · On: Chapter 6
Threatening the Impala! The boys battered, broken or threatened is one thing, but the Impala that's something else entirely! That's plain wicked, but at least you let the boys save her, so you can't be all bad. Looking forward to having the time to read the rest.
Author's Response: Hahaha...nope I sure wouldn't have anything bad happen to the Impala---that would be wrong! Thanks for reading and I hope you enjoy the rest. Laura
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 07/01/09 08:00 PM · On: Chapter 8
OMG! another beautiful chapter but I'm too anxious to review---just on to the next...
Author's Response: LOL...thanks for commenting and reading.
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 07/01/09 07:47 PM · On: Chapter 7
The way you describe Dean and compare him to the kind of people who live with lions is incredible! what a fantastic analogy! I never would have thought of that. It made me wonder. I also like how the two boys battle the thing using each other for the strength they need. Beautiful!
Author's Response: Thanks, this was one of my favorite chapters I think. Laura
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 07/01/09 07:25 PM · On: Chapter 6
Great description of the battle between Nature and the Winchesters fighting over the Impala! Amazing job!
Author's Response: Thank you.
Reviewer: Midge (Signed) · Date: 07/01/09 04:14 PM · On: Chapter 3
OMG That is one evil cliff-hanger! No time to say more, I'm off to read the next chapter immediately.
Author's Response: Hehehhee...Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: ReccaF (Signed) · Date: 07/01/09 02:08 PM · On: Chapter 15
This story was AWESOME!!!!!! from the first lines, you totally captured your readers interest -timimg- tenor-visually perfect verbage-everything that makes a story GREAT!!!!!-you had ot all!!!! It was so Winchester in every way- added to that Dante , Concha , and our favorite ghost... the total package-you are the the consumate author and storyteller!!! I loved every minute reading this one and i will be re-reading it to make sure I didn't miss anything. OUTSTANDING in every way !!!!!! BRAVO!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you so very much.
Reviewer: rbliss1969 (Signed) · Date: 06/01/09 09:27 PM · On: Chapter 15
Laura, wow great job. is there going to be another story soon with Concha and Dante? hope so i like the 4 of them together. Renee
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading and commenting! I think there might be another story, I like them too. Laura
Reviewer: ashon13 (Signed) · Date: 03/01/09 03:46 AM · On: Chapter 14
OH NOOOOOOOOOOOO! *sits and waits patiently for the next chapter* :D
Author's Response: It's coming soon. Thanks for your great comments. Laura
Reviewer: ashon13 (Signed) · Date: 03/01/09 03:20 AM · On: Chapter 11
Wow, this story is intense! I feel like I'm sitting on the edge of my couch..*looks down*..wait a minute..how did I get here?..:P It really is amazing though..It sucks I have to go to bed now, but dont worry, I'll be up bright and early tomorrow morning to start again..*looks at time*..well, maybe not tooooo early..hehe.
Author's Response: Hehehe...thanks!
Reviewer: ashon13 (Signed) · Date: 03/01/09 12:47 AM · On: Chapter 3
*gasp*.....What the hell?!....What's goin on?!....:P
Author's Response: You'll see...*snickers* Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 28/12/08 09:22 PM · On: Chapter 14
What an intense chapter. Dante's still alive thanks to Concha. I was at the edge of my seat while reading Sam's rescue. I'm glad that Ezra helped Dean to save Sam. Terrific work Laura, I'm looking forward to your next update. Happy New Year.
Author's Response: Thanks so much and very happy New Year to you! Laura
Reviewer: Noelani618 (Signed) · Date: 28/12/08 02:59 PM · On: Chapter 13
Very intense! I feel for poor Sammy :( I look forward to seeing Dean rescue him! Great job :)
Author's Response: Hehhee...thanks!
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 21/12/08 07:14 PM · On: Chapter 5
Wonderful description of the action! I could picture it in my head. I'm rushing off to see what has Sam running.
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 21/12/08 04:10 PM · On: Chapter 13
Gripping, suspenseful chapter. Calgary shot Dante, the boogeyman got a hold on Sam, what he saw in his vision is a nightmare from hell, poor Sam. Can't wait to know if they'll be alright. Riveting story Laura. Happy Holidays.
Author's Response: Thanks so much. I'm glad you liked, and have a great New Year!
Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 14/12/08 09:40 PM · On: Chapter 12
Terrific chapter Laura, it was worth the wait. I hope that Dean and Concha'll get there soon, Sam won't hang on not much longer and Dante can't fight five men alone. Can't wait to know what'll happen next.
Author's Response: Thanks for all your great comments, I appreciate them so much. Laura
Reviewer: lillelouis (Signed) · Date: 14/12/08 06:05 AM · On: Chapter 12
Oooooh nooooo.... You can't leave them like that! Hurry with another update!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: ReccaF (Signed) · Date: 04/11/08 05:27 PM · On: Chapter 11
OUTSTANDING!!!!!!!!! Concha and Dante... perfect ...... I was hoping they would be around to help the boys. I can't wait to see how Dante will handle these "hunters" ... I'm still a little afraid that the boogyman will hurt Sammy alot before they can help him..... You have created another GREAT story!!!!!!!!! MORE PLEASE!!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 18/10/08 01:57 PM · On: Chapter 11
Dean got the better of the bad guy. Great, Concha and Dante to the rescue. It's getting better and better, I can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Thanks, more coming soon.
Reviewer: Yzba (Signed) · Date: 17/10/08 06:44 PM · On: Chapter 11
Yeah, Concha!!!!!
Author's Response: Yep! Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: ReccaF (Signed) · Date: 15/10/08 01:50 PM · On: Chapter 10
OK.... ........damm those other hunters!!!!!! Sammy as bait ..... the boogyman could really do some damage to him without Dean's protection. How is Dean going to get out of this one....????????... a little help would be in order here....Bobby, Dante, Concha,,,,Ellen ... the suspense is over the top on this one!!!!!!AWESOME writing!!!!!!!! Very slick how the other hunters could sneak up on them .... figures they would need a hurricane for those idiots to be effective!!!! MORE PLEASE!!!!!!!! BRAVO!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks so much. Yeah, boogeyman is definately not going to be nice to Sam. Laura
Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 13/10/08 12:17 PM · On: Chapter 10
Interesting conversation between Dean and Sam. No!Hunters caught the brothers. Can't wait to know what'll happen next.
Author's Response: Thanks so much. More coming soon. Laura
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