Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 19/04/08 10:17 PM · On: Chapter 1

CONGRATS!!!! Anna.. fab job on grabbing a featured spot.  I absolutley loved this especially :

Above all else they carry each other. They carry each other's laughter in their heart on good days and they carry each other broken and bloody and weary on bad days. Sometimes they are so broken that merely standing requires the complete concentration and stamina of both. But they have each other and they have always and will always stand as one.

Excellent, excellent job and I'm going to be checking out the origional short story.  Thanks for the terrific read - Kel

Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing.  I'm glad you loved it. The conclusion is my favorite section, too.  and yes, yes, yes, check out the original!  I am so thrilled that reading my adaptation made you want to seek it out!  annA