Reviewer: Ebbtide (Signed) · Date: 08/07/08 09:29 AM · On: Chapter 2

Please, let Sam be okay! Great chapter, btw. ;).

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 07/06/08 09:36 AM · On: Chapter 15

A happy ending for the Winchesters?  That doesn't happen very often, but I'm glad it did this time.

Wonderful story!  I like how you focused on the relationship dynamics between the three men.

Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing my story.  I love writing about the family relationship, or dysfunctional family relationship these three have. 

 

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 07/06/08 08:39 AM · On: Chapter 13

Yay!  Sammy to the rescue ( I think)!  Those Winchester boys are quite a team!

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 07/06/08 07:55 AM · On: Chapter 11

I love the the contradictory thoughts the brothers have!  While Sam is desperately planning his escape to Normal, Dean is hoping Sam will inevitably accept their life.  Great job!

Reviewer: bia1007 (Signed) · Date: 06/06/08 04:44 PM · On: Chapter 14

What a special moment at the end, Sam immediately calming down when he felt his brother's touch, shows how close these two are, wonderful!

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 05/06/08 01:01 PM · On: Chapter 15

I have really enjoyed reading this story.

The ending was lovely.

Author's Response: Wow- thanks darkhunter.  I am so glad you liked it.  It was an easy write.  MMMM- now what to start on next!  Thanks again!!

Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 03/06/08 02:29 AM · On: Chapter 14

Awe that final paragraph was such a beautiful image, both kids finding solace with each other, and John there finally watching over both of them...great chapter and looking forward to more...XXX Louy

Author's Response:

Hey Louy- thanks for the great review.  Your words are too kind.  Hope you find the last chapter puts it in a nice, neat little package. 

 Oh my, now I have to start another!!

Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 03/06/08 01:59 AM · On: Chapter 12

Gutting that John would do this but so in character, and a real nice touch that the doctor instincively knew it was Dean that took care of his brother...lovely chapter..XX Louy

Reviewer: bia1007 (Signed) · Date: 02/06/08 03:15 PM · On: Chapter 12

What a bad turn, can't believe John actually asked the boys to join him on a hunt, there could be some serious consequences for Sam and his recovery; just hope Dean will be able to help his little brother through this, he never would let Sam down, amazing guy!

Reviewer: bia1007 (Signed) · Date: 25/05/08 09:19 AM · On: Chapter 11

As sad it is, sometimes you just can't ask for more and I think John gave about everything he had to give (and did quite good, I'd say), 'End to the Fantasy' covers it well; still I'm sorry for both Sam and Dean - it's hard to learn you have to deal with the brutal effects of reality and now it's the time to make painful and far-reaching decisions. Loved the way you described how Sam struggles with his need to have a normal life and his wish not to leave his brother. For Dean Sam is the centre of his world, he never would have chosen a life without his little brother; so this seems to be a turning point and I'm anxious to know how they deal with it.

Reviewer: bia1007 (Signed) · Date: 22/05/08 08:40 AM · On: Chapter 10

John's decision to rent this house is about the best thing to help Sam with his recovery (that's the way John shows he cares), I like the idea Sam can experience some normal family life for a little while. Also you point out here something very essential about Dean's role in his brothers life, that he is in fact since their mom died brother, father and mother all rolled in one for Sam - well done! And I certainly enjoyed the little Winchester-style fight at the end!

Author's Response:

Thanks, so glad you see it the same way I do.  Dean is Sam's mother, father, brother, everyone all rolled into one.

 More to come

Supernaturaldh

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 20/05/08 08:00 AM · On: Chapter 10

great update,poor john he's finding it all a bit of a struggle.