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Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 19/12/10 06:52 AM · On: Chapter 4

u guys or one of u should call pastor jim or bobby, please...those idiots take to much time that is not needed...Nurse, damn u all they want to know what is goning on with sammy please...

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 19/12/10 02:47 AM · On: Chapter 3

please dean call the ambulance, and tell ur father to not keep his panties in a bunch like he usually has them.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 18/12/10 11:40 PM · On: Chapter 2

what a hypocrit Mr John Winchester...a grown man that has to be less of a father to have state such crulty in words. I so see now why the youngest was more attached to his brother for in his puppy young eyes ... he knew whom he could call FATHER to...bearing on what Dean always wanted was to always kiss fathers ass to be a good soldier, but what u never relized is Dean saw that one thing Sam always wanted and that was being and haveing a normal life and not judged.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 18/12/10 08:40 PM · On: Chapter 1

i have always had a ? but noone seemed interested nor wanted to answer does or did his father ever loved Sam for whom he was becomeing or ever will be in the future?

Reviewer: supernatfem76 (Signed) · Date: 09/06/09 08:53 PM · On: Chapter 15

I really enjoyed this story.  Excellent ending to an excellent story!

Reviewer: supernatfem76 (Signed) · Date: 09/06/09 07:58 PM · On: Chapter 10

It's funny how Dean views things such as a family dinner as strange but it definitely showed how different normal is for the Winchesters.  I felt so bad for Sam as he was teased by the two bikers.  What a jagoff!  I loved the scene where Dean came to Sam's rescue.  I liked the way you wrote that scene.   Another great job!

Reviewer: supernatfem76 (Signed) · Date: 09/06/09 07:31 PM · On: Chapter 9

Very touching scene with Dean encouraging Sam in his speech therapy session.  That is definitely something I could see Dean doing.

Reviewer: supernatfem76 (Signed) · Date: 09/06/09 06:54 PM · On: Chapter 7

I could tell that you did a great deal of research for this chapter for the aphasia.  I liked how you wrote how this condition is affecting Sam.  I liked the end scene in which Dean comforted Sam.

Reviewer: supernatfem76 (Signed) · Date: 09/06/09 02:24 PM · On: Chapter 6

Great job showing how well Dean knows Sam.  He can sense that something is off while John's thoughts have shifted to the hunt.  

Reviewer: supernatfem76 (Signed) · Date: 09/06/09 02:17 PM · On: Chapter 5

A well written masterpiece!

Reviewer: supernatfem76 (Signed) · Date: 09/06/09 02:02 PM · On: Chapter 4

Another great chapter!  You are really knocking it out of the park on this story.  Each chapter pushes me to read on.

Reviewer: supernatfem76 (Signed) · Date: 09/06/09 01:52 PM · On: Chapter 3

I loved this chapter.  Very suspenseful!  Great job writing Dean's anxiety about trying to find Sam.  I liked your word choice for describing the wrecked Impala. 

Reviewer: supernatfem76 (Signed) · Date: 09/06/09 01:43 PM · On: Chapter 2

Another good chapter!  I liked the setup of this chapter.  Great job describing Sam drifting from unconsciousness to consciousness.

Reviewer: supernatfem76 (Signed) · Date: 09/06/09 01:28 PM · On: Chapter 1

Excellent beginning!  Very heartbreaking scene with Sam overhearing what his father was saying about him.  I think you really captured all of the Winchesters well.  I also liked the dialogue too.  Great job!

Reviewer: kiara_ratterjmouse (Signed) · Date: 20/08/08 07:33 PM · On: Chapter 15

wow, has anyone noticed that in fights between the bro's even on TV that sam stutters? this could be a good explanation for that! i liked it! very good.

 

mouse

Reviewer: Ebbtide (Signed) · Date: 08/07/08 10:29 AM · On: Chapter 15

Aw! What a perfect ending to a great fic. :). You are an awesome writer. :) 

Reviewer: Ebbtide (Signed) · Date: 08/07/08 10:26 AM · On: Chapter 14

John should've listened to Dean...Now what's going to happen?!!! I like your version of the Dean character. Wonderful. :).

Reviewer: Ebbtide (Signed) · Date: 08/07/08 10:22 AM · On: Chapter 13

No way! Cliff-hanger moment. Great chapter. :)

Reviewer: Ebbtide (Signed) · Date: 08/07/08 10:20 AM · On: Chapter 12

Don't do it, Dean! I just know that this can't bode well for the younger Winchester. Great writing. Loved this chapter. :D.

Reviewer: Ebbtide (Signed) · Date: 08/07/08 10:15 AM · On: Chapter 11

Just delicious. Wonderful chapter. . . .you know, your story reads well to the song Wayward Son. ;).

Reviewer: Ebbtide (Signed) · Date: 08/07/08 10:11 AM · On: Chapter 10

I love the defensiveness of Dean. Part of why the shows so good.

Reviewer: Ebbtide (Signed) · Date: 08/07/08 10:04 AM · On: Chapter 9

We know who takes care of Sammy too. ;).The wonder that is Dean. Great chapter!

Reviewer: Ebbtide (Signed) · Date: 08/07/08 09:59 AM · On: Chapter 8

Good stuff. Poor Sammy. Love the angstyness when he first tried talking. ;).

Reviewer: Ebbtide (Signed) · Date: 08/07/08 09:57 AM · On: Chapter 7

"Dean's here, I'm safe" I love that. :). You make great scenes. :). 

Reviewer: Ebbtide (Signed) · Date: 08/07/08 09:50 AM · On: Chapter 6

Dean needs a hug. Sammy will be alright...right?? *Hurries to next chapter*

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