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Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 07/07/11 12:13 PM · On: Chapter 15

this is one awesome story and i was wondering if i can have a copy of this story to keep as a collection of the greates and maybe one day i may do it.

i love the safisticaitions you placed of dad being deans place and see if he see'a what he see's himsefl dean is proud of his son.

 i leave you my yahoo email pissedsam74@yahoo.com

THANK YOU.

 

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 07/07/11 11:59 AM · On: Chapter 14

this submission of placing whom gives the orders in your writing is amazing. I love the order you placed dean to be and how it always was to be that he was the firm father of Sam and will niver aquitl from it i love the story...thank you.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 07/07/11 11:38 AM · On: Chapter 13

? do you follow each show of supernatural to diagnose ur stories?

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 06/07/11 12:18 PM · On: Chapter 12

y is it that the caracter of dean is strong and bull head that he could never tell his father what he thought of him

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 06/07/11 12:11 PM · On: Chapter 11

this should be part of the show this is emaculate and if i can have a copy of this story i am good friends with mizpha and she well tell you how bondified i am with all of you and very respectfull i just cant stop reading it and i <3 your creation ... i leave my email pissedsam74@yahoo.com i do <3 it and respect your work ... im sorry if i ?ed it i will try not to do that again. thank you. u are all insperational to me.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 06/07/11 10:35 AM · On: Chapter 10

i applaude for picking up on how most ass buttts can treat those that have a minor disability, thank you.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 06/07/11 10:25 AM · On: Chapter 9

wow, sorry to ? a writer when a reader should nto be rude to ? ... how do you cumulate that state fo mind to have not only place friction from the father and have also the side effect friction of the elder son not putting a heavy swift kick on the ass of the father?

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 06/07/11 10:16 AM · On: Chapter 8

wow ? how do you harness the commotion along with the atributes of each character and make thme blend to not only indivdualizing them bout putting them together like humpty dummpty?

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 06/07/11 10:09 AM · On: Chapter 7

Now that last sentance of dean is what a real father would say to a young son and i dont care of it weighs a ton for jOHN  winchester a;; i know is that sam is better off with dady dean.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 06/07/11 09:59 AM · On: Chapter 6

oh my what a revolution you established with the commotion of sam comeing back to reality that scared the hell out of me.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 06/07/11 09:48 AM · On: Chapter 5

having intense chills is dramatic enough to feel so awkward in feeling the sense of me being in this story and witnessing it silently like one of those silent movies wow.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 06/07/11 09:39 AM · On: Chapter 4

its emotional to me for even feling and witnessing that his own father can pull tears of reality your structure of him i sso unique i <3 it.

 

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 06/07/11 09:30 AM · On: Chapter 3

i dont think that daddy ever relized what a toll he gave to his elder son and how Sam was Deans son...that setting of the impala in a ditch halfway was awesome and the creativeness on how Dean tries to help with valor is outstanding thanks.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 06/07/11 09:18 AM · On: Chapter 2

the only thing that *JOHN WINCHESTER* cares for is to get that enemy creature that took his wife and i understand that but to be rude to his sons he needs his ass kicked hard core style.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 06/07/11 09:13 AM · On: Chapter 1

oh man Dean is an ASS-butt im with you sam Dean and daddy are alike the double jerks. This is so getting hot and i <3 the way you placed the comments of father towards dean and then to a suprise his younger son was there.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 20/12/10 09:48 PM · On: Chapter 15

I sure do hope so for SAMMY, sake. I knew that he would see it our way Dean...thanks.

To the folk lore whom wrote this poetic story i bow and applaude to u for it...i may have over did it. though i felt that i was a part of the story and my fibble mind went over board and i will tell u that not many writes can do that to me only special ones with ROYAL CLASS like u can so thank u in useing such playfull metaphores this was good and i was wondering if i may get a copy of this litterature that has class, and read it over and over again...ivonne_sammmmy69@yahoo.com please send it here. Thank u for filling my life with ur scripture i loved them all. HAPPY SAFE HOLIDAYS

RATING: Enduring, what better word then anything a number is only a number that one can rewrite but a word, sentance or phrase mean and have a better value.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 20/12/10 06:21 PM · On: Chapter 14

God John, is this a fucken joke with u...Dean told u not to take Sam and that he did not feel that they were both ready for this task to take on ... especialy Sam. He got his cast off, and looked like shit which mean that he was probably eating it to ever since u left like a cowered...dont look at me that way. U know im right, at least show some type of decentcy and respect for ur ONLY FREAKEN BOYS U HAVE LEFT THAT THEY EVEN CALL U DAD IN FRONT OF YOUR PATHETIC EMBLM OF BEING A FATHER. IT HURTS DONT IT!!!!~if u dont mind im sitting in with the boys u are not allowed. JERK!

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 20/12/10 06:05 PM · On: Chapter 13

i so hate JhOn WinChester for this and if MAry was around he'd of sculde him for sure. Damn it JOHN WINCHESTER these are ur boys not ur fucken puppets...

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 20/12/10 11:19 AM · On: Chapter 12

Dean, please dont go. Loook at the safty of Sam he is not so ready and this will only break what he has already learned and insted of beign that 90% he will be as low as 50% to worse...screw him...he can call for back up from other hunters near him.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 20/12/10 11:03 AM · On: Chapter 11

is it hsrd for anyone to belive that only one persone can change the matters of reality become improvment then just follow along and not say anything?

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 20/12/10 05:54 AM · On: Chapter 10

Dean, what the hell is the matter with ur father what a con faceless dick...all he knows is hurt someone to the bear liquidfy bone...if u dont slap him i will...and thanks for the beat down with those scanked imagal of bikers...Come on Sam, lets go home...u okay, bud? Help me out Dean please...thanks...this place is a tripper out filth of a dinner...yeah u heard me bitch...u need to take class of learning how to be a waitress...here's a freaken penny for ur mental state....

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 19/12/10 08:17 AM · On: Chapter 8

i think hes more then a horses family bread of ass's why dont we take it futher to their family of rejects maybe DONKEES...burros...im sorry but its true...ur father is faceless to me...i swear dean if he was ever a true man or father he'd better behave or i'll kick his sorry ass...

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 19/12/10 08:03 AM · On: Chapter 7

see dean, what the hell lis wrong with that so called father of urs...sam nor u would have done that sleeeezy move when one of u are hurt htis badly...who the hell is he to fen up and take care of a damn hunt then stay and mend the situation with his younger son...ur father is a cowered and man that has only smaller balls to consider him to even being a human for good sakes dean...leave me here go and punch ur father for being a dick.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 19/12/10 07:50 AM · On: Chapter 6

what the hell is this jack ass going to say that its not so uncommon...damn it what is wrong with sam spit it out will u. U would have asked the samething Dean?

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 19/12/10 07:05 AM · On: Chapter 5

good and i hope that its okay for the winchesters and bobby along with hopefully pastor jim that i stay as well...sorry. :P

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