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Reviewer: caty (Signed) · Date: 02/07/08 07:23 AM · On: Caring and Sharing

It,s me again jst want to make sure you know your a great writer!

you could write a book, In your bio you said you were 16 jst to let you know my sister is also 16! she's known as danny. she's writen 2 stories. 1 called brothers and 1 called help.

plus cryin cause i want 2 read more

glad you you wrote this story Emma!!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

It will probably be at least a week before anything is ready to post as I'm working on other stories too.

You probably already have a beta reader, but if you need any help with anything please let me know!

Reviewer: caty (Signed) · Date: 02/07/08 07:12 AM · On: Caring and Sharing

What, a brillant story i loved it sooooooooooooooooooooo much!

PLZ up date soon cause it's killin me cause i have 2 wait for next chapter!

Reviewer: caty (Signed) · Date: 02/07/08 07:04 AM · On: Out in The Open

Glad she's with sam and dean, hopefully she'll find her sister's body! Glad the judge could even though he could have lost his job!

(Like i said your really good Em)

Reviewer: caty (Signed) · Date: 02/07/08 06:49 AM · On: Hero

Gosh i hope she's ok. I don't think she'll be happy about going to the hospital! GREAT CHAPTER AGAIN

your really good at this i wish i was, but people are better at stuff then others.

Example 1: I better at drama then my friend tara and she's better at writing.

Reviewer: caty (Signed) · Date: 02/07/08 06:38 AM · On: Damsel in Distress

 Good chapter again, you never disapoint em. By the way my names katie!

Poor dan i hope dean will save her as he is goin to cheak on his car so hopefully he'll help dan! she most live the same horror over and over again. I wish she would team up with sam and dean!

Reviewer: caty (Signed) · Date: 01/07/08 12:14 PM · On: Stepping Stones

Didn't like it I LOVED IT your really good at writing writing i wish i was as good as you!

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 28/06/08 06:16 PM · On: Caring and Sharing

++++150, just for rating purpose. Well, interesting to a point where DEAN is ending up to be probably another father or a brother. I like its cute, SNUGGLY CUTE. I just don't get it that DEAN once stateded that he wanted to get that SNUGGLY BEAR. you know for the fabric softner now that could be a story.

Author's Response:

Lol, i have no idea what you are talking about! Still thanks for the good comments, I wouldn't enjoy it as much if you and all the others didn't review!  

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 28/06/08 05:45 PM · On: Out in The Open

I tell you that you have accomplished a good carrer goal. I love the story so far. Thanks!

Author's Response:

I cannot begin to explain how much it means to me that people like this story. So thanks for everything!

 Emma

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 28/06/08 05:03 PM · On: Hero

The same all usuall DEAN avoiding as much as possible for his BABE to get DIRTY. Typical Jerk, anyway its a great story.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 28/06/08 04:54 PM · On: Damsel in Distress

To only hope that DEAN would see it even close to happening that he may need SAMS help, or maybe not.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 28/06/08 04:43 PM · On: Stepping Stones

This story hit me hard for it reminded me of a friend of mine, but only they were twins male and female. The only difference was that he never had any superpowers to back him up. Though he was always protective over all the girl - friends that were his friend. He did date, but had to stop before he hurt someone . . . . if you'd understand (he didn't like a man to hurt a woman of any age) . . . . This is great stuff. Thank you for allowing me to remember a hero that has a locked history of crulty, hate,and saddness.

Author's Response:

My personal objective when writing stories is to provoke a reader into feeling certain emotions, it was never my intention to upset anybody and I am so sorry if this story has upset you. I do understand exactly what you mean, although I have never actually experienced it first hand. Thanks for the good review, it does mean so much to me to know that my story has actually made a difference to someone. *weep weep*

Emma

Reviewer: Tazzy (Signed) · Date: 28/06/08 08:06 AM · On: Caring and Sharing

ah im cring now cause i cant read any mopre yet. i think its brillient how u cant grab the readers attention and keep it there till the last page is turned. Well done xx



Author's Response:

Thanks. It isn't easy at all, this chapter got left for a few weeks because I got stuck, I rediscovered it yesterday and decided to write some more.

Don't forget tissues!

Emma

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 28/06/08 04:35 AM · On: Cut Like a Knife

This an interesting rading material. Thank YOu

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 28/06/08 04:24 AM · On: Into the Sky

So far, yeah a 10. I need to read more into this interesting dialog. Wouldn't it been better if you space the paragraph?

Author's Response: A ten? Really? OMG! thank you so much!

Reviewer: Tazzy (Signed) · Date: 27/06/08 04:56 PM · On: Out in The Open

WOW ur story gets better and better . keep it going. cant wait to read the ending xx

Reviewer: Tazzy (Signed) · Date: 27/06/08 04:42 PM · On: Hero

wow ur story i my fAVOURITE so far . keep it up xx

Reviewer: Tazzy (Signed) · Date: 27/06/08 04:33 PM · On: Out from the Darkness

wow ur story is the best so far !!! i bet dean gears her and comes tohelp ger !! xx

Reviewer: Tazzy (Signed) · Date: 27/06/08 04:25 PM · On: Stepping Stones

WAAAAAAAA how could her dad do that . i never realised that her sisters death was not so long ago, i thought i would of been about a year since her sister died.

Reviewer: Tazzy (Signed) · Date: 27/06/08 04:16 PM · On: Cut Like a Knife

Ah tears are running from my face. i like it how u envolve flash backs about dans past . so did the dad really kill allison or not ? xx

Reviewer: Tazzy (Signed) · Date: 27/06/08 04:08 PM · On: Into the Sky

wow even better than the last chapter keep it up- xx

Reviewer: Tazzy (Signed) · Date: 27/06/08 04:02 PM · On: Out from the Darkness

wow ur first chapter is the best. it has really pulled me in to read some more xx

Reviewer: Supernaturalfan15 (Signed) · Date: 27/06/08 03:10 PM · On: Caring and Sharing

really gud em one of your best

Author's Response:

Thanks Jen! Although there is something currently in the pipeline that I feel would be a worthy competitor for "my best".

It's coming soon.

Emma

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 27/06/08 03:07 PM · On: Out from the Darkness

Well, its your first and it sounds very convincing of an opening. I like it.

Author's Response: Thanks, it just came to me one boring evening!

Reviewer: caty (Signed) · Date: 27/06/08 02:17 PM · On: Cut Like a Knife

Your doing great. that poor little girl what a horrible father. it brought tears to my eyes. feel soooo sorry for dan who had to watch her sister die lovein the story!

Author's Response: Always like to provoke a reaction! Thanks for the positive review!

Reviewer: caty (Signed) · Date: 27/06/08 02:09 PM · On: Into the Sky

wow good chapter like i said going to review all chapters. hope the girls ok.

Author's Response: Thanks, I'm sure you already know what happens by now!

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