Reviewer: CdeWinter78 (Signed) · Date: 14/03/08 01:40 PM · On: Chapter 4
Ok - I am back, I've read and reviewed to the end, I know the flat line turned out Ok... how scary that I actually had to check!!!! LOL! I found this chapter very touching (minus the TOD thing of course... that was just uncomfortable!) The fact that Sam had the flash back of Dean's life - nice touch. Each of the glimpses into their lives growing up actually topped the last one. It was so charming to see the trip from WeeChesters to the hunters they turned into. Sam's ever growing needs met by Dean's unshakable desire to look out for his brother. You also see so clearly, that as time goes on the sacrifices Dean makes become bigger and more costly. This spells out quite clearly where the depth of Sam's guilt comes from.... how could he turn his back on that kind of devotion? Of course he wasn't running from Dean but from that life, but when your brother is lying in a coma... I don't think the finer points matter. You really bring that point to the front, you write it simply, powerfully and in a way that brings a lump to the throat. Beautiful job, so very well done and such an original angle to it all. Loved this whole story, you did an amazing job on it, capturing all three characters in a very different setting but in an all too real light. Thanks for the read. PS. This is my 100th review - where else would I use that ?!!!!! LOL!
Author's Response: OMG...ABI...AS IN THREE DAYS OF NORMAL ABI BAHAHHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHA OMGG i was so wrapped up in how awesome of a reviewer you were that i didn't even really put two and two together. WOW LOL I'M LIKE ACTUALLY LMAO RIGHT NOW LOL give me a moment to stop laughing..... hahahaha shit i can't lol for some reason cdewinter78 didn't click right away but then i saw you signed your name and i was like hmm abi sounds familiar then i was like wait cdiwinter78 isn't that from...OMG IT'S THREE DAYS OF NORMAL ABI HAHHAHAHAHAHA yes i'm slow i know loll Well since you thought i spoiled you in that story (which you totally deserved by the way) thank you for spoiling me in this one:D!!! so ok...now that i've officially stopped laughing at my slowness lol here we are...at the final review *sigh* ahhaha k but seriously you are the freaking coolest reviewer ever Abi...LIKE EVER!!!!!! :D as for this chapter, I'm glad that you found it really touching because this was prob. my favourite chapter, only because of all the flashbacks (i absolutely love love love the show but i wish they'd have a few more flashbacks like in "Something Wicked" and "A Very Supernatural Christmas") so idecided to throw some in here:D. The fact that each flashbacked topped the last one for you is awesome and such a compliment!! I definitely agree with you that as they got older the sacrifices Dean made got bigger and more costly. I figured it only made sense since as they got older their lives got even more dangerous which meant that Dean's sacrifices would have to be bigger and badder in order for him to always protect Sammy. This statement that you made "You also see so clearly, that as time goes on the sacrifices Dean makes become bigger and more costly. This spells out quite clearly where the depth of Sam's guilt comes from.... how could he turn his back on that kind of devotion?"....is precisely what i was trying to acheive with the flashbacks! So thats totally awesome that you noticed that! I wanted Sam to realize everything Dean had done for him over the years because i think sometimes it may float in the back of his mind and not really come to bay. I am so so so glad that you really liked this story:D and your words and your reviews say it all and as you know as a fellow writer, it's the best when readers not only take the time to read your work but actually voice their opinions about it and say whcih parts really struck them. It's an awesome feeling, as you know well, when your work actually evokes emotions in the readers and grabs their attention. And to be honest this was the first story i ever wrote, and when i read back on it there's so much i would fix up because my writing style has evolved from when i first started. I like to add in minor details in my stories now, like the movements of the characters, even if it's them simpling standing up and walking over to the coffee machine to pour in some coffee...you get what i mean, like just adding more of a picture to the story, so that the reader can actually visualize what they're reading. But the fact that i don;t think that i did it that much with this story but you still loved it says a lot:D Your 100th review on me:O:O:O I'm honoured:):)!!! Thanks so much for all your reviews Abi, you know as well as i do, it's when readers really understand and like your work and voice that, that's what keeps a writer writing and makes you wanna keep doing it for a long long time. So from your two-time reviewer, i'd like to thank you for putting this fat ass smile on my face LOL i'm glad that we could both be the type of reviewers that we love:D writers sometimes make the best reviewers:D thanks again:D P.S....i still can't believe that i was replying to you this whole time LMAO o man 2 funny lol
Author's Response: holy shit...i didn't even realize how long my review reply was HAHAHHAHA
Reviewer: CdeWinter78 (Signed) · Date: 14/03/08 01:26 PM · On: Chapter 6
Wow what a great ending - So satisfying, especially with that brotherly chat and THE HUG - *huge grin*. I think that in this chapter, and really your whole story you give the reader exactly what they want - a repenting John, a moment where Dean is truly, honestly and sincerely thanked and appreciated by both his Father and his brother. Just golden, everything, I have put on my Supernatural 'If Only' wish list!!! So thanks for ticking those off!!!! LOL. Loved that you made John so self aware, and willing to lay aside his obsession for a while to ensure both his son's well being. This was my favorite part - so very true; "he almost felt like an outsider…an intruder. That was his own fault, he knew that for a fact." I think John does get this in the show, but there is something unrelenting about his grief that seems to limit how much of a Father he can be. He believes pushing his sons is preparing them - and that makes IMTOD all the more tragic. There are definite tones of that in your story, and I loved that episode. Also the humor element really came through here. Loved the Dr's response to Dean coming back; “Holy shit!” replied two of the doctors in unison " Also this truism; "you knew Dean was back when sarcasm ruled conversations with him". LOL!! Finishing on the classic Jerk/Bitch was very fitting. This 'Not so-Happy Reunion' had some very realistic elements to it. You made both Sam and Dean very human in places - and Dean's reasoning behind all the sacrificing was spot on and very true to character. But there were some VERY happy moments in this story too, especially the end chapter and the trip down memory lane for Sam in the previous chapter (4). It is kind of every Chick Flick moment I have ever wanted and all the angst in the world alongside each other - well balanced piece that doesn't get too sweet or too sour. Sorry it has taken me this long to get to reviewing this, but I definitely enjoyed where you went with it, thanks for the great read!!!! Abi.
Author's Response: ok so now that i have readjusted my sitting position and stretched a bit i am ready to continue hahahaha First off, you have nothinggg to apologize for...like seriously...NOTHING!!! It doesn't matter how long you took, the fact that you reviewed at all is all the thanks i need!!! so the last chapter of my story. I'm glad that the ending worked for you. I didn't want it to get too chick flicky but i had to put somechick flick moments in there, i mean cmon after everything that just happend and after eveyrthing Sam had just done...Sam was bound to crack lol and i am more than happy to tick off things from your "if only" wish list!!! the part about john feeling like an intruder...soooo glad that this stuck out for you cuz it really stuck out to me when i wrote it. I mean to be honest that's sort of exactly what he is, they love him they do, but he doesn't have the kind of connections and bond that they have, he lost any chance of it when he stopped being their father and started being their drill sergeant. I'm glad that you enjoyed the humour in this chapt and i absolutely had to end it off with the bitch/jerk, just had too hahaha I'm glad that you found some happy parts in this story, it's great as a writer when you have happy parts that you can put into the mix so that the story isn't completely and utterly depressing hahahah I'm glad the chick flicks worked for you:D and to say that they were every chick flick moment you have ever wanted and all the angst in the world alongside each other:O:O:O woww what a compliment!!! thank u so much onto the last and final review:( wow that's a lil depressing, i was on a role here with the review replies hahahaa
Reviewer: CdeWinter78 (Signed) · Date: 14/03/08 07:01 AM · On: Chapter 5
Soo empathise with Sam and his lack of breath!!!!! This chapter - especially Sam's final "odd" conversation with his dead brother is breathtaking! Truly touching Lib, no matter how long it is - concentrated awesomeness!!! ;-) You start here, with a real gem of a statement, profoundly right and simply beautiful; "They were one, they always had been, and there was no Sam without Dean and no Dean without Sam." Sammy's fear driven desperation to save Dean, to give his brother what he had, had all his life .... an anchor, an unshakable guardian that fought for him no matter what the cost. Sam is heartbreaking here in his refusal to give up on Dean. The way he promises he will die right alongside his big brother had echo's of AHBL 2 - that Winchester bond is scary in it's intensity. But that last paragraph.... stole the show. It's chaotic, clinging and so powerful in the raw need it reveals in Sam. His mind seems to be slipping in front of us even as he seems to be throwing in the towel... he is full of hope. Amazing writing, that twist was almost uncomfortable to read. I saw Sam the way I imagine Dean might see him, so young and fragile and so fearless in his surrender. When he wonders if they will meet their mother OMG!!!! I had to swallow the HUGE lump in my throat that this bought; "We were our family, we lost dad when we lost mom, and all we had was each other....it’s always been okay when we were together. I love you big brother, you lead the way now, wherever you go I’ll follow." Heartbreaking and right on the money!!! In a way this chapter is perfect size... any longer and I am not sure I could have taken it!!!!! Ps. Thanks for the "Beep Beep Beep" LMAO!!!!
Author's Response: HAHAHAH so my eyes immediately darted down to the beep beep beep lmao part LOLLL you're very welcome, i actually said the words out loud and it sounds pretty funny hahahha I'm really glad that the odd convo Sam had with Dean worked, that's the one part in this chapter that i really wanted to stand out...concentrated awesomeness...ahahhaha nice! lol I'm glad that you liked the statement that they were one and that there was no sam without dean and vice versa, i just had to put that in there because that's what's always pounding in my head when i watch the show. And yea i definitely agree with you that their bond is scary in it's intensity...scary and sooo endearing Thank you for mentioning the last paragraph again!!! I know now that it did it's job, because it caught your attention. And yea that twist was just as uncofortable to write as it was for you to read...for someone to want to pass on like that and accepting it...very scary and heartbreaking but heartwarming and pulls you in all at the same time I'm glad that the chapter size worked for you. One thing i was worried about was how short this chapter was, but I'm glad that you thought the content made up for the lack in length:D onto the next review:D ps. i have no idea how you sat there reading and writing these long reviews all at once, my ass is hurting from sitting here writing review replies and mine are like half the length of your reviews!!!! ahahaha you are hands down one of the best freaking reviewers EVER!!!!! lol
Reviewer: CdeWinter78 (Signed) · Date: 14/03/08 06:34 AM · On: Chapter 4
OH HOLY COW!!!!! What do you MEAN .... TIME OF DEATH?!!!!! Ok this will be a shorter review, cause I am going to have to go forward and then come back !!!! Again - thanking all my lucky stars that this one is complete as I think this chapter would have done me IN!!!!! Your not KIDDING it's "a bit different"!!!!!! Really liked it by the way (in case that got lost in all the exclamation marks!!!! ;-) ) OK on to next chapter before I run out of finger nails!!!! You queen of the EVIL cliff hanger you!
Author's Response: hahahha yea time of death....i think that dropped a few jaws lol I'm glad you liked it though:D i'll respong to this chapter up at the top cuz i saw that you reviewd on this chapter when you got back to it... queen of EVIL cliff hangers *blushes* that is such a nice compliment:D thank u very much:) hahhaha
Reviewer: CdeWinter78 (Signed) · Date: 14/03/08 05:56 AM · On: Chapter 3
Again, your version of John has me misty eyed. So full of regret- wishing he had handled things differently, said something different... who hasn't been there? You depict it all so convincingly- like when he jokes about the acceptance letters "popping out of thin air" allover!!! Lol. But this summed it up beautifully for me; "John didn’t see a point in reliving the fight between him and Sam, the fight that drove Sam away…the fight that smashed Dean’s dreams." How typically Dean to not mention Jon's shaken state to Sam but to give it all up without complaint to ensure the safety of his family. How satisfying that your John sees and admits what the family owes his eldest son collectively... this had me remembering IMTOD after John strikes the deal. Loved this description of Dean; "...his dreams…what he wants…when did that ever matter, it was never about him and he had accepted that fate from the day little Sammy was placed in his arms." Bringing Caleb in to the mix... genius!!!! It was like he was voicing all the concerns and frustrations we have all had with the relationship between Dean and his obsessive family!!!! Liked the way Caleb sees Dean so clearly and knows that John's eavesdropping. Caleb voices his fears that something may happen and his warning to John are spot on and near prophetic; “…I wasn’t talking about walking out John” Exactly!!!!! OMG Dean flat lining - your endings always draw the reader on... this must have been torture to read along with!!!! Lol!!!! *Relieved breath as goes on to next chapter eagerly!!!!*
Author's Response: I'm glad that this version of John worked for you. As messed up as John was and how i sometimes wanted to bash his head in in the show, we all saw how this side of John truely does exist, the side that would do anything for his boys, and loved his boys more than life itself. It's so hard to see that John sometimes behind the hunter that he is, but we all know it's there and we saw it IMTOD, and i just wanted to bring that John back, even if a little, for this story. As for Caleb, I'm glad that worked for you too. I really wanted to bring someone in who was not a Winchester and who knew what was going on with Dean and wanted Dean to want something for himself. Someone to push DEan to follow his dreams since half his family didn't even know what his dream was and the other half ignored it out of selfishness. the quote that you mentioned "..his dreams...what he wants...when did that matter" that one (by the way thank you for mentioning quotes, iabsolutely love when reviewers do this because it's good feedback when trying to write other quotes, because then you know what kinds quotes work and which kind don't) but yea i put that quote in there because i really thought it summed up Dean and everything he was about, never bout him always about Sammy. As for Dean flatling...i do love the cliffies, i'm all about the cliffies, the 3 multichapter stories i have both have them and the future ones i'm going to write will definitely have them hahaha And i know how much people hate them (I as a reader hate them too because you're like dieing until the next chapt is posted) but as a writer they're great:D and EXACTLY for the reason you said...that it draws the reader in...that's why i love doingcliffies because it makes the readers want to come back for more. But because you're ooo soo generous with your reviews i'm glad that you didn't have to go through the torture of having to read along and wait for the next chapt to be posted hahahaha onto review 4:D
Reviewer: CdeWinter78 (Signed) · Date: 14/03/08 05:18 AM · On: Chapter 2
OMG - This chapter had enough angst to sink a ship ... a BIG un-damn-sinkable ship of TITANIC proportions!!!!! LOL! Again, the path you have chosen to take this .... amazing! There is a very odd thing happening here - firstly the way you are painting John is breathtakingly touching... so realistic, the guilt, the dread, I sometimes have major problems sympathizing with his logic, but here, how you paint him, I want to throw my arm round his very broad shoulders and tell him it'll all work out!!! Secondly, although I get Sam, I am a Deanophile, and always think the brotherly balance sheet in the first season was weighted in Sam's favor and the cost ran high for Dean. You have knocked this out of the park - you keep Sam's edge (loved his sarcastic, fearful response at being "asked" and not "ordered" to do something by his Dad) but having him drowning in this seemingly bottomless pit of guilt. You have written this soooo cleverly that it seems that the more Sam gets of the Normal life he thought he wanted (complete with remorseful Dad, who's proud of him) the more he misses the old world he threw away (Dean). Love how you make Sam fully appreciate what Dean has done, there's a weight to what you write and it's 100% realistic. By the way Sam and John's heart to heart about how John is proud of Sam - ughhhh, yes out of clever words... just ughhh!!! This is how strongly your picture comes across - I only usually have that response to angst filled Dean moments - but I am just there with the way you write this Father son moment! It feels, well real - the distracted state of mind Sam is in when he is rushing to see Dean, the way he realizes from John's uncharacteristic responses that things must be BAD and the way John's attempts at comfort bring fresh guilt for Sam, knowing how he treated his brother. What a great twist, that Sam who has spent a lifetime blaming his Father, realises, that here he is MORE to blame for Dean's condition!!!!! Truly Amazing - I am riveted .... ...So spill Johnny... WHAT DID DEAN DO?!!!!!!! (So glad I can skip ahead and find out!!!! LOL!)
Author's Response: JEEZ U REALLY KNOW HOW TO SPOIL A GIRL:D:D!!! i love this, 7 very lengthy reviews:D (I've got this super moronic wide ass grin on my face right now, good thing i'm at home and not out in public lol) I'm really glad that you liked the father son moment and John's guilt. This whole chapter was mainly devoted to that, and to Sam finding out what happened and feeling guilty as hell of course :) As for John...yea i'm totally with you on his messed up logic, i find it very hard to sympathize with it too, i get he lost the love of his life and wants to protect his boys....but the lives of Dean and Sam...its just so tragic and painful:( in his drive to keep them safe, he sort of hurt them in the worst possible way, by destroying any chance they had at a normal life *damn totally should've put that as a line in my story! hahahahha Anywho, I'm glad that this chapter did for you what it was intended to do:D onto review 3:D
Author's Response: oh and also about the whole Sam blaming himself MORE...i thought that this was a key point that i HAD to put in because he's always blaming John for Dean getting hurt because of hunting (and i can't really blame Sam for this) so this once i wanted to show the depth of his understanding of how badly he messed up when he didn;t give Dean a weekend of his time
Reviewer: CdeWinter78 (Signed) · Date: 14/03/08 04:42 AM · On: Chapter 1
What an evil cliffie!!!!!! I am really impressed with this start and the direction you were brave enough to take this in. What if Sam had said No?!!!!!!! It is totally believable, and all the arguments you have the boys play out are reasonable. Sam went through a lot to get to Stanford - as single minded as Daddy?!!! :-)- so of course he would fight tooth and nail to stay there. Poor Dean caught in the fallout. Speaking of Dean, I loved the way you built up his part in this. At first (when he meets Jess) he is recognisable , hunter mask firmly in place, then as he continues to try (and fail) to convince Sam that mask slips slowly, painfully away. After he got through with reasoning with Sam it just tore my heart how he exposed more of himself to his brother... sadly only making himself a bigger target. Loved this -so raw; "Sammy…Please man. I haven’t bothered you in two years. I’m just asking a simple thing. It’ll be good for us. I miss hanging with you, kiddo" Sam slamming the door in his face must have been devastating, and Dean (and I) yelled the same thing "You’re a selfish bastard you know that" !!! LOL. But you do redeem Sam in the second half. Frankly he appears very human the way you write him. It's ok for us to judge Sam from the safety of our lives, but let's face it hunting is no picnic!!!! Really good start, I love the refusal, it's a great 'what-if' but more than that, although you are pushing the boundaries of the brotherly bond here, you are maintaining the best parts - Dean is still an awesome brother (he doesn't get hurt by the fact that Sam calls him a coward, he reacts to the fact that Sam could believe he would want to cause him harm) and Sam is still the very human, sensitive sort, who will do the right thing eventually. Great start - on to Ch 2!
Author's Response: WOW!!! i don't even know what to say, i just saw 7 reviews by you and i was like :O:O:O I'll go through your reviews one by one:D so starting with this one...FIRST OF ALL...thank u so very very much for your reviews, they're lengthy and in depth...my favourite kind to read:D:D As for this chapter yea i really wanted to look into what may have happened if Sam had said no, I know the whole thing with catching close to the demon this early in the series wouldn't have worked but i was like hey...this is a fic...so i'm gonna do it hahaha I'm really glad that you think that this scenerio is believable and that i portrayed the boy's personailities accurately...that is one of the biggest compliments a writer can get:D onto review #2:D
Reviewer: buttercup (Signed) · Date: 04/09/07 10:46 AM · On: Chapter 6
OMG!!! That was such a great story. Not usually one for reviewing, but this definitely deserved one. loads of cookies for you lol B xxxx
Author's Response: awww thanks so much, i'm glad you liked it:D
Reviewer: Magos186 (Signed) · Date: 23/06/07 01:51 PM · On: Chapter 6
Can i just say OMG! This story was amazing. You had me hanging on like every word. So happy that you didn't kill dean and i loved that you made them connected like twins. You totally make me want to write a story now. Yours was really really good and i just wanted to say that. Magos
Author's Response: awww thank u so much for ur review:D i really appreciate it and I'm glad you enjoyed it:D it's people like u who make me wanna write more and more hahah thx again:D
Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 22/04/07 02:58 PM · On: Chapter 6
Awesome ending. Loved the conversation between Dean and Sam, it showed the great bond between them and the love for each other. Nice work with this story.
Author's Response: thanks alot:D I'm really glad you enjoyed itt,,,I'll be posting another story soon hopefully, hope you stay interested:D thanks again for your awesome review
Reviewer: riniedean (Signed) · Date: 16/04/07 01:41 AM · On: Chapter 5
When are you going to post the next chapter
Author's Response: sorry abotu the delay I know it's been awhile but the last part is up now:D...i hope you enjoy itt
Reviewer: jadefire8372 (Signed) · Date: 29/03/07 02:39 PM · On: Chapter 5
Please Continue! Love it1
Author's Response: thanks a lot for your review:D
Reviewer: ciel4 (Signed) · Date: 11/03/07 09:13 PM · On: Chapter 5
Short.... but very sweet! Great work!
Author's Response: thanks a lot i'm glad you enjoyed it:)
Reviewer: ciel4 (Signed) · Date: 11/03/07 09:11 PM · On: Chapter 4
A beautiful job with the flashbacks - I loved them! Dean is the bestest (I know, that's not a word!) brother ever!
Author's Response: ahhah Dean totoally is the BESTEST brother ever:D
and thanks a lot for your wonderful review...I'm really glad you liked the flashbacks...that's one thing I wish they'd have more of in the show, like in the epi "something wicked"...i love the showww and it's awesome but a couple more flashbacks would make it that much better:d
thanks again for your review:)
Reviewer: ciel4 (Signed) · Date: 11/03/07 09:05 PM · On: Chapter 3
Loved the conversation between Caleb and Dean - it would be nice to think that someone in Dean's life cared about his dreams!
Author's Response: yea i knoe eh! I'm really glad you're enjoying it...i really appreciate the reveiws:D
Reviewer: ciel4 (Signed) · Date: 11/03/07 08:59 PM · On: Chapter 2
Poor Dean, this looks bad! And I love the theme of sacrifice, because that's Dean all over. Well done!
Author's Response: yea i really wanted Sam to know of the sacrifices Dean's made for him, and i thought I'd narrow it down to one big one
thx again for your review
Reviewer: ciel4 (Signed) · Date: 11/03/07 08:53 PM · On: Chapter 1
What a great start! I am completely sucked in and I'm going straight on to read chapter 2 right now !
Author's Response: thank you sooo much for your awesome review:D
Reviewer: bopeep (Signed) · Date: 11/03/07 02:51 PM · On: Chapter 5
YAAAAAAAAAY!!! deans alive!! sammy saved his life!!!! awesome story and chapter update soon!!
Author's Response: ahahha i thought people would like that...I couldn't really kill dean off...but remember...he still has to wake up...
thanks for your review and i hope u ennjoy the rest of the story:D
Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 24/02/07 02:32 PM · On: Chapter 4
Nooooo!!!!!Dean can't be dead. Awww...Sam's memories of him and Dean when they're youngers, sweet and sad knowing that now Dean is dead. That was a very emotional chapter and the way it ended...I'm speechless. Can't wait to know what'll happen next.
Author's Response: thx a lot for your review:D and yea I know it was a very emotional chapter, but there's more I promise, and it might be good...might be bad...you'll have to wait and see:D...I'll post chapter 5 in the next couple of days
Reviewer: Kate (Signed) · Date: 21/02/07 05:27 PM · On: Chapter 1
This is awesome. I'm trying to write myself but haven't really had enough inspiration to put down more than a few lame idea's. I really well, enjoy isn't really a good word maybe 'cause Dean's dying and everybody's crying and all that but it has been a great story sofar. Can't wait to read more. Hope you update soon and I'm looking out for your next pieces. Keep up the good work!!
Author's Response: thanks soooo much for your awesome review, i really appreciate it. Chapter 4 is up now, i really hope you enjoy it:) Thanks again for reviewing and I'll be sure to keep and eye out when you decide to post a story:) good luck with writing a story, everyone goes through writer's block and think their ideas are sometimes lame...but what you think is lame may not be lame to the readers. If you have any ideas (lame or not) just write them out.
Good luck and thanks again:)
Reviewer: Little Lottie Brittenden (Signed) · Date: 21/02/07 01:41 PM · On: Chapter 3
Love this chapter. I feel for Sam, who now has to live with the pain. But serves him right.It's been a while hope you update soon. Keep up the good work.
Author's Response: thanks a lot for your review and I know it's been awhile and I apologise for that. I've been in the middle of midterms but after reading your review I sat on the computer and wrote part 4 lol...it's up now, i hope you enjoy it:D...thanks again for the review
Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 15/02/07 08:23 AM · On: Chapter 3
Terrific story so far. Dramatic and so angsty. I hope that Dean'll be ok so Sam'll tell to him how sorry he is. Great work. I'm looking forward for more.
Author's Response: thx a lot:D I hope to write and post the next part soon, so hang tight:D thx again for your awesome review:)
Reviewer: jjackles (Signed) · Date: 13/02/07 04:19 PM · On: Chapter 3
Oh no!! You have to update soon! Love all the angst! Great chapter - now Sam knows what Dean sacrificed for himhe will hopefully appreciate him more.
Author's Response: I'm glad you think its angsty hahah that was the idea of this chapter, i really wanted Sam to react hard when he found out what Dean sacrificed for him. thx for your awesome reviews, i really really appreciate it:D...I'll try to get the next chapter up by this weekend but I can't make any promises because I'm in the midst of a string of midterms for school. But I'll try my hardest to get it up within the next couple of days so hang tight:D
Reviewer: jjackles (Signed) · Date: 13/02/07 03:20 PM · On: Chapter 2
Well done Daddy Winchester! Sam needs to know what Dean sacrificed for him (I can't wait to find out what it is!). Great chapter again.
Author's Response: exactly what i was thinking (Sam needing to know what Dean sacrificed for him) when I wrote this story. In the show they don't go into too much detail about specific things that Dean has sacrificed for Sam, so I thought I'd point one out (even if i did make it up). I wanted this story to be about Sam knowing how much Dean has done for him and what lengths Dean would go to make sure that Sammy's happy. Thx for your awesome review, hope you enjoy the next chapt:D
Reviewer: jjackles (Signed) · Date: 13/02/07 03:08 PM · On: Chapter 1
OMG What has happened to Dean! Damn you Sammy! Couldn't you just have done this one thing for your brother? Great first chapter of your first fic! I love it already.
Author's Response: thx so much:D I'm glad you're enjoying it, chapter 2 and 3 are already posted so you can see what happens after Sam rejects Dean. thanks again for your review...hope you enjoy the rest of the story:D
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