Reviewer: winchester chick 666 (Signed) · Date: 04/07/08 02:32 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Pretty in Pink
LOL!!!!!!! And I thought they were bad in Hell House!!!
Author's Response: Hey, they had to start somewhere. I imagine with just each other a lot of the time they did amuse themselves how they could, especially Dean. Glad you enjoyed it. Take care, B.J.
Reviewer: PropGal (Signed) · Date: 16/04/08 08:30 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Pretty in Pink
well, i'd say you pretty much whumped the challenge's ass. hilarious. ridiculous. loved it
Author's Response: Thanks, it was fun writing to a prompt for a change. Take care,B.J.
Reviewer: Swellison (Signed) · Date: 15/04/08 10:13 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Pretty in Pink
This is a wonderfully descriptive, funny read. I was laughing my head off reading this! The dialogue and the pranks sounded very teenage boy to me. And I love that John and Bobby got into the act at the end! Fabulous!! Sue
Author's Response: Thanks, Sue, I love writing the teenage Winchesters and then it is always great fun to have John and Bobby in a story too. Take care, B.J.
Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 15/04/08 07:36 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Pretty in Pink
lol, gotta say I loved this and think it's one of the best I've read. The pranks were perfect, and Bobby, well who doesn't love Bobby- Thanks. Oh, nice touch with the princess bride reference.. funniest movie ever - thanks Kel
Author's Response: Thanks, Kel, I really appreciate that. It is so strange having a story that is so similar to other stories, just ratchets up the expectations and pressures. Glad I didn't fall short. Yeah, I always love having Bobby in a story and I love referencing movies. Thanks for such a lovely review. Take care, B.J.
Reviewer: eye4u (Signed) · Date: 14/04/08 04:24 AM · On: Chapter 1 - Pretty in Pink
Nice ending! John and Bobby in the prank wars! Dean in a pink bathrobe, walking so menacing and threatening to anyone who would look at him wrong! Hahaha.
Author's Response: Yeah, love me some John and Bobby. Oh, what I wouldn't give to see a menacing 16 yr old Dean wearing a pink, fuzzy robe! LOL Thanks for reviewing. Later, B.J.
Reviewer: fantasycatcher (Signed) · Date: 13/04/08 10:04 AM · On: Chapter 1 - Pretty in Pink
BJ. That was hilarious!!! I was laughing straight away. "Your younger son looks like Kojak with a defective razor." - LMAO Sam enjoying the cold shoulder john was giving Dean. Just what the jerk deserves... "A boy who looks like he just went chemo isn't in the best position to be laughing at someone else." Loved all the pranks... Paste that tasted like ass, the sex books, and poor Bobby. Oh and gotta love the pink robe with the matching slippers. "Sammy I don't wear those, cute, little pink briefs..I'm a boxer man." You're killing me!! The ultimate prank...Bobby and John, what a team. lol Very enjoyable read hun x Schelz x
Author's Response: Thanks, Schelz, this whole challenge turned out fun, didn't it? Just finally got to reading yours and you are the Queen of Comedy! Good job there. Oh, how I love Dean and Sammy as teenagers and then gotta love seeing Bobby and John in on the action. Thanks for a lovely review. We'll talk... Later, B.J.
Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 13/04/08 07:43 AM · On: Chapter 1 - Pretty in Pink
BJ. Cool and crazy hunny! Loved the John/Bobby payback at the end. Wicked and yup how hard is that writing to order thuing! bev xx
Author's Response: Hey, Bev, yeah, this writing to specs is HARD! I know what you mean about wanting to hide and not show your work... It is really hard to have a story that is in direct competition with others. Normally I write what I want to write and no one else is writing the same thing to compare it to. This was a daunting challenge, but I think it turned out okay. Your story certainly was original and fun. Funny, but a guy at work offered me a M & M and it was the red one... I laughed and thanked him and mentioned that it was ballistically superior and he just grinned at me. Oh, good times! Thanks for reading. Take care, B.J.
Reviewer: Vanessa (Signed) · Date: 13/04/08 07:21 AM · On: Chapter 1 - Pretty in Pink
Another great entry! I couldn't stop laughing for all the wonderful pranks. And again Bobby and John put the boys in their places in remarkable fashion. Great work!
Author's Response: Thanks, Vanessa, Glad you liked it and found it funny. I do like that the boys were punked in the end, the old guys still got it in 'em! Take care, B.J.
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 13/04/08 07:00 AM · On: Chapter 1 - Pretty in Pink
wow,well done,very funny.nice to see john and bobby joining in the fun.
Author's Response: Thanks, glad you enjoyed. It is nice to see John and Bobby have a little fun amid the horrors of the hunting life. Take care, B.J.
Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 13/04/08 05:00 AM · On: Chapter 1 - Pretty in Pink
Winchester War III funny
Author's Response: Thanks! Knowing them, they are probably long past that by now. Later, B.J.
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 13/04/08 03:34 AM · On: Chapter 1 - Pretty in Pink
Tough but incredibly good and in my opinion one of the best I've read so far. Can't believe you're not a challenge veteran...lol Great work BJ and I love that it was Bobby and John who taught both boys a lesson in the end.
Author's Response: Thanks, Louy, you are too kind. Nope, never had to write to any specs before, always just let my own muse guide me. This was a learning experience and that is what we are all looking for in this writing endeavor, right? Loved your story too, very original. Later, B.J.
Reviewer: Cookie6 (Signed) · Date: 13/04/08 02:02 AM · On: Chapter 1 - Pretty in Pink
I laughed my head off from beginning to end! Non-stop prank action all the way! I loved the snark from everyone, all four of them! "How's it comin'?" You're killing me girl, I nearly choked laughing so much!! Loved WWIII and Sam's quip about mucking with science A-student. And Bobby on the loo all night, very harsh! but very funny...And yeah, Bobby and John style payback the biggest bitch of all! Touche!! Fantastic work, you are the reigning queen of description BJ.
Author's Response: Thanks, hun, you are too kind. I'm glad you liked the "how's it comin'?" line, I worried it was too risque. You know how it is, trying not to rattle any cages right now, but boys being boys it seemed to be exactly what Dean would say. This was great fun, once I got past the challenge of writing to spec. And I loved having Bobby in there, even if he did bear the brunt of a prank gone wild. Take care, B.J.
Reviewer: nightchills (Signed) · Date: 12/04/08 10:32 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Pretty in Pink
I really enjoyed this story, very cute and boy-like.
Author's Response: Thanks a lot! I love writing the younger Winchesters and being in the midst of a prank war gave them the chance to be all-boy. Take care, B.J.
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