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Reviewer: nightchills (Signed) · Date: 19/04/08 05:25 PM · On: The First Two Rounds

I meant "Too cute!" in a very good way, by the way, case it was misinterpreted.

Reviewer: nightchills (Signed) · Date: 19/04/08 05:24 PM · On: The First Two Rounds

Too cute!

Reviewer: WanderingWolf (Signed) · Date: 16/04/08 10:22 PM · On: The First Two Rounds

You're freaking amazing my friend. How on earth does this hilarious (to use an overly used term) dialogue grace your head?! Jealous to the max! I loved how the brothers stooped to their childish ways in a heart beat. It's refreshing to imagine them easily removed from the tragic things that happen to them. (or they happen to)
I'm elated to have read this story never having to ever think about whether the dialogue betrays the characters for one second because its just so gosh darn good! You've got them down to a tee my dear friend, and a hilarious tee at that.
40 Kudos to you!

Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 14/04/08 09:43 PM · On: The First Two Rounds

lol, gotta say, I'll be on the lookout for Day Three...thanks for the laugh - kel

Reviewer: fantasycatcher (Signed) · Date: 13/04/08 11:31 AM · On: The First Two Rounds

Hey passerby,
Loved the instant name calling for an opening scene it was hilarious.
The male stripper, soo soo funny, Sammy was out of there before the cop could do his lap dance. LMAO
Then the birthday cake... "Happy birthday DEAR GAYLORD" -- Hahahahaha.. hold on, it's not done yet... "Happy fortieth birthday Gaylord." - Great stuff, and then finished it off with some nice green paint. Great read.
Schelz

Reviewer: PropGal (Signed) · Date: 13/04/08 11:15 AM · On: The First Two Rounds

love it. absolutely hysterical. one of my favorite moments were the rules of the game. very nice. can't wait for the "final battle"

Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 13/04/08 10:39 AM · On: The First Two Rounds

definitely ready! Nice read girl, the opening dialogue was just hilarious.

Reviewer: Cookie6 (Signed) · Date: 13/04/08 05:35 AM · On: The First Two Rounds

I LOVED everything about your challenge entry!
I loved the bickering, I loved the name calling, I loved the rules. I loved the whinging and the indignation. I loved the gloating.
I loved the pranks themselves. A stripper-gram!! Pleeeeeaasse! You killed me with that one!
And Happy Fortieth Gaylord!!!! Just so freaking funny! My son actually came in to see what I was laughing at!!
I so totally think Sammy has this in the bag, such quality pranks, such meticulous planning, such fun to read!! Although the green paint in the water balloon trick after a painfilled scream at close to midnight is one hell of a pay back!!
This is one of the picks for me. Awesome work!
And am I ready for Day Three? Damn straight!!! Bring it on!!

Reviewer: Swellison (Signed) · Date: 13/04/08 01:32 AM · On: The First Two Rounds

Loved the opening dialogue, setting up the War, it just crackled with rapid-pace Winchester-speak. And the rest...what a hoot! Eagerly awaiting the Final Battle! Sue

Reviewer: gypsywoman1 (Signed) · Date: 12/04/08 07:14 PM · On: The First Two Rounds

I could just imagine the prank on Sam with the male stripper. LMAO! Hilarious! Great job.

Tori =D

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 12/04/08 05:38 PM · On: The First Two Rounds

i enjoyed that,very funny.i'm looking forward to the sequel.

Reviewer: Vanessa (Signed) · Date: 12/04/08 05:25 PM · On: The First Two Rounds

hahahaha Happy 40th Birthday, Gaylord. ROFLOL Funny! And Dean was soooooo horrified. hehehe (Appropriately so since I just celebrated my 41st. UGH).
Nice work. Looking forward to the sequel. It's gonna be some battle.

Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 12/04/08 03:48 PM · On: The First Two Rounds

THIS IS HIFREAKINGLARIOUS and I'm so glad you already have a sequel planned cos I need one...Fabulous.

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