Reviewer: Fenrees (Signed) · Date: 14/10/08 01:47 PM · On: Chapter 1
Good one...Can't get enough of the brothers pulling pranks on each other:)
Author's Response: Hey hunny. It was a bit of a giggle wasn't it! bev xx
Reviewer: mymuseandi (Signed) · Date: 01/06/08 07:25 AM · On: Chapter 1
Hahahahahaha........the thought of the boys without clothes is positively yummy!! and man, they are so childish sometimes!!! Great story! :)
Author's Response: Hey Lyn. Childish? our serious, demon hunting green and hazel eyed Gods childish? Yup! Sure are and hell are they cute with it! Heehee - silly story i know but it was fun to write. thanks for review babe bev xx
Reviewer: StrigoiVii (Signed) · Date: 13/05/08 08:44 PM · On: Chapter 1
Oh Bev...just finally found time to read and let me say that I totally loved that! The banter was almost audible in my ears as the boys argued back and forth and the vision of Dean's rock hard abs...ahh, to die for!! Loved it, loved it!!!
Author's Response: Helen. Hey knocked out that you came to read it, and content that it was a proud runner up to a fabulous winner, I laughed my socks of Hunny! Your stories rock! Bev xxxx
Reviewer: eye4u (Signed) · Date: 14/04/08 12:53 PM · On: Chapter 1
Nice story! I like the style you did, starting from near the end of the story then telling on how it happened!! I like how you made the brothers squirm in front of Bobby! hahaha Hilarious! Cheers!
Author's Response: Hey Carmina (beautiful name) Thanks hun, glad it floated ya boats and thanks for your kind words. bev xx
Reviewer: rbliss1969 (Signed) · Date: 13/04/08 11:12 PM · On: Chapter 1
Bev, loved it. Bobby is great at being the Dad; "Boys! Enough." i laughed at that; to funny. Dean and Sam pranking each other great. i gotta say Sam nailing Dean's boots to the floor priceless but nether less Dean wins by shaving the eyebrow. great pranks Renee
Author's Response: Renee. Hey sweety, Bobby is just the best isn't he? Glad you liked it, I found it quite hard to write to order and vowed never to do it agian but now all the kind reviews have me thinking it wasn't so bad! haha, I am easily swayed by a kind word. thanks as always for your kind review. bev xxxx
Reviewer: fantasycatcher (Signed) · Date: 13/04/08 07:44 PM · On: Chapter 1
Aba you totally rock! This is absolutely hilarious!!! -- “God, you boys stink!” Love Sam with the shaved eyebrow, that's an image that will stay with me for a while. He raised his T, showing rock hard abs to his brother --- getting a little bit hot over here... Freakin' loved 'Friday night' Awful witch goop, filling Dean's boots...thanks Sam.... “My boots are full of this foul muck, Sam. I’m gonna get trench foot of something.” “Don’t be such a wuss, Dean. No one will notice over the usual stink of your feet...” --- Some classic lines, brilliant dialogue hun. And for my favorite part... “Strip.” I love when Bobby said shower now or sleep in the shed.. (love the guy) Great read. Bebgx
Author's Response: Hey baby! So glad you enjoyed the rock hard abs and know you would have delicately averted your eyes when they stripped off! you being a sweet Bebg! Hummmmmmm! And I would add they are still here stinking up MY shed waiting for ya to come and hose them down, Hurry up the smells terrible. loves ya hunny Ur Aba xxxxx
Reviewer: bjxmas (Signed) · Date: 13/04/08 05:20 PM · On: Chapter 1
I'd say this is one of the best ones! I never knew the red M & M's had more ballistic merit, but I trust Dean's opinion so I'll keep it in mind for future reference. I'd love to see Dean in his hippie chick garment with his panther-like agility stalking.... hmm, I don't know... me? LOL And we mustn't forget them warming their hands, amongst other bits, over the fire. ROFLMAO So many clever images, but Dean and Sammy in a sludge-filled Witch grave... with all those nasty bodily fluids that they like to spew was just creepy... but so funny! Well done, Bev, I loved it. Later, B.J.
Author's Response: BJ hunny. Awh that's very kind of you, and means a lot coming from you. I found it really hard to write to order (and did the whole it's a pile of poo thing! I'm not even gonna post, yes hard to believe a grown up like me can be so childish huh!!)so I'm glad it worked out alright for ya. I'll mention to Dean that you'd like for him to stalk ya, and then keep your eyes open hunny because it will happen when you are least expecting it! And boy is it fun when it does! Warms all the bits that need warming without the need for a fire. And I'll send ya a supply of the red m&m's they defo have the superior ballistic merit! thanks BJ for your sweet words. Bev xx
Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 13/04/08 02:45 PM · On: Chapter 1
"Well, bro, I had to check out that lump on your head. I mean after your near fatal fall over my carelessly placed and, I might add, ruined boots. I hadda make sure it didn’t need suturing and your eyebrow was in the way so...” Dean weighed the remaining yellow against the red and decided the red had more ballistic merit. He sighted and launched the little candy bullet right onto the keyboard. Great lines! Loved it, though as a proud french citizen i may have been offended by your reference to our delicious and tasty cheese... Lol, nice read.
Author's Response: Oops Pardon Fredo! Mea Culpa! but ya gotta admit nice as it tastes some of it has Le Pong about it! Vive La Francais! and Merci pour le review! Tres Bonne! Bev xx
Reviewer: Cookie6 (Signed) · Date: 13/04/08 07:32 AM · On: Chapter 1
A hunt and a prank war in one! One-upmanship at its best until Bobby finds them stripped, freezing, smelly, near-naked…and no keys!! It was hilarious and well told, a prank war at its Winchester best with Bobby left to search and rescue, and adjudicate!! Love it! I giggled and smirked all the way through. “So boys.” Hee, Hee, loved Bobby’s opening. What else to say!?! You had Bobby’s dialogue absolutely nailed throughout this whole fic, from “Idjits” (gotta love that!) to “Don’t tell me; it’s gotta be another of the legendary and puerile Winchester Prank Wars huh?” So funny, I can just hear Bobby’s voice clear as a bell in my head. Your pranks were awesome. Loved how one thing just led to another. The boots taking the rap for the drunkard tumble, the boots getting nailed to the floor, the missing eyebrow in the name of medical intervention… I laughed out loud at Dean driven to pegging M&M’s in his boredom. This description was such fun, so Dean “Dean weighed the remaining yellow against the red and decided the red had more ballistic merit. He sighted and launched the little candy bullet right onto the keyboard. “Yahtzee!” Fantastic work girl! Oh yeah, and Dean ripping up his T and showing us why he’s the muscle? Please accept my heartfelt thanks and undying gratitude. I LOVED the psychedelic 60’s jeans thing!!! Well, maybe not on Dean, but gotta get me a pair!!! That was very creative Birdie! I so laughed at Dean’s reaction, you wrote it SO well! Just adored Sammy’s “Just wanted you to be safe, Dean...” Priceless, hilarious!! And Dean squeezing into Sam’s jeans?!?! No way! What a picture you painted with your exceptional description, I had tears running down my face! I can visualise that “petulant child in Papa’s clothes” *big silly grin* But your scene stealer was that graphic description of the grave digging. My nose wrinkled and my eyes bugged as I read. It was so gross. “Soupy grave liquor” Eeeeeoooo!! My toes curled at he thought of that “thick browny green organic ‘gravy” squishing into Dean’s boots. Such powerful imagery like this one “Dean waved his agitated hands in the direction of the psychedelic snot fest that was his own and Sam’s attempt at Winchester sartorial elegance, and Sam had to admit Dean had a point. They smelled suspiciously like a cross between road-kill and over-ripe French cheese!” just made this story as fascinating as it was humorous. This description also caught my eye, graphic detail with a mastery of expression “…and eye a look of horror on his pale face, slide unceremoniously feet first into the putrid, foot deep bath of mud and organic detritus” Just Wow! And this was an absolute crack up - “And don’t raise your eyebrows at me! Oh, I forgot; its eyebrow, singular, isn’t it?” Snark at its best, loved it – both Sam wagging his not-eyebrow and Dean’s smirky face and voice I had so clearly in my head with your word painting. But, wait! “Don’t be such a wuss, Dean. No one will notice over the usual stink of your feet...” touché Sam! Go Bev, wit and intelligence pitted against each other, each brother having equal shares locked and loaded and aimed at the other. Fantastic! And this is one kicka$$ of a sentence - “the air between them crackling with a week’s worth of ‘prank war‘ passion” yep, that passion just about leapt out and bit your readers on the pasquita! No surprises here “Yeah, but not ‘the baby’, Sam. She’s locked down tighter than Fort Knox. Can’t have any freakster who fancies her getting in. She’s a no bust, Sam.” Damn straight! Said like it is Biride!! Thanks for the entertaining read, I had a ball!
Author's Response: Petra. My god you are trying to kill me with pleasure! Your reviews are like a soft smooch with a warm frisky Winchester! need i say more other than THANK YOU, thank you thank you! Loves ya loads bev xx
Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 13/04/08 06:55 AM · On: Chapter 1
Dean weighed the remaining yellow against the red and decided the red had more ballistic merit. He sighted and launched the little candy bullet right onto the keyboard - This just cracked me up, it's such a guy thing...lol. Great story and you have to love any tale that leaves the boys practically naked (despite the smell) Great job - Kel
Author's Response: Hey Kel Heehee, I always think Kripke underplays Dean's serious scientist persona! And perhaps also underplays the opportunities for nakedness! (God, I am such a perv) Loved your too hunny, challenges rule! bev xx
Reviewer: RoweenaC (Signed) · Date: 13/04/08 06:17 AM · On: Chapter 1
Ha, hilarious, stinky grave, urgh... Damned, you cut out the shower scene coming up!!! Rock hard abs, aaah, tha's m boy, yummy... Great, funny, love the prank wars between the oh so loving and hard fighting boys. Thanks! XXX and laughs, Ilka
Author's Response: Hey Chicken. Hey I thought you were coming to help me hose them down? we're waiting and the waters nice a warm. bev xx
Reviewer: PropGal (Signed) · Date: 12/04/08 05:40 PM · On: Chapter 1
hehehe....hilarious. if only there were a filmed version of this.....(smirk)
Author's Response: Anna! Now surely you wouldn't want all ya pretty cranes seeing the poor boys in their pants! Might be too shocking! (Hey, maybe if we asked Kripke...Nah!) Thanks for reviewing Hunny! bev xx
Reviewer: gater91 (Signed) · Date: 12/04/08 05:15 PM · On: Chapter 1
that was hilarious! i loved it! great job!
Author's Response: Hey Gater baby! Thank you and you're very welcome! Roll on next challenge! Bev xx
Reviewer: SupernaturalGeek (Signed) · Date: 12/04/08 04:40 PM · On: Chapter 1
Very good! Only they could end up getting themselves in such a mess over a simple pair of boots left in the middle of the floor! Loved Bobby riding to the rescue, especially him reminding them they're supposed to be adults. LOL! Great job :)
Author's Response: Michaela. Loved yours Hun! and yeah Bobby to the rescue! Love that man nearly as much as I love the boys! Bev xx
Reviewer: TozaBoma (Signed) · Date: 12/04/08 02:35 PM · On: Chapter 1
Stripped down to their shorts? Damn, wish I'd thought of this! nice work!
Author's Response: TozaBoma Hey Hunny, Funny I find my mind often dweling on that pretty picture! And hey one day you gotta explain the derivation of that so cool penname! bev xx
Reviewer: Vanessa (Signed) · Date: 12/04/08 02:30 PM · On: Chapter 1
LOL LOL These stories are just too much fun. Your description of the casket and foul muck associated with it was fantastic. :-) Great job with the pranks!
Author's Response: Ness. Jeeze babe your's had me in stitches, we are so a twisted bunch! And yeah I enjoyed bathing our boys even if it was in stinking goo! Bev xx
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 12/04/08 02:23 PM · On: Chapter 1
that was brilliant,i can't stop laughing.
Author's Response: Hey Lindsay. Gee I'm just doing the entries too, boy they are hysterical! Thanks for reviewing Hunny. bev xx
Reviewer: Swellison (Signed) · Date: 12/04/08 02:07 PM · On: Chapter 1
This was a ton of fun to read, and you worked in a hunt, too. Impressive! I got some hysterical mental pictures, visualizing this while reading;-P Great job! Sue
Author's Response: Sue. Thanks Hunny, it was a bitch trying to write to order but I'm just reading the entries now and boy are they funny. Loved yours, made me giggle - Deany Baby! haha Bev xx
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 12/04/08 01:46 PM · On: Chapter 1
Damn, what's not to love, a naked Dean...wow...lol Adored this on the first read and love it just as much now, great to see Bobby and I get the distinct impression you just want to be able to 'hose those boys down'...hmmmm. Great story mate XX Louy
Author's Response: LouLou. Well its not as if I wouldn't let you bring your scrubbing brush too...For you I'd share! Loves ya Sweety. Bev xx
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