Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 12/04/08 03:31 PM · On: Chapter 1
Two things...great snark, and great choice of song...oh and fantastic brawl...ok, three things...and great cliffhanger...OK so four things...lol Excellent start moving on to next chapter...
Author's Response: I wasn't sure how well written and imagery-minded the fight scene was, so it's good you like...
Reviewer: ReccaF (Signed) · Date: 11/04/08 12:58 PM · On: Chapter 1
OMG the boys never get any rest. They have got to learn to skip the creepy small towns-nothing good ever comes of stopping there.. your vivid verbage has painted a suspenseful picyure - more please!!!!!!!! OUTSTANDING beginning. BRAVO!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks for your review... I hope you like the rest of it as much :D
Reviewer: beth9874 (Signed) · Date: 10/04/08 01:58 AM · On: Chapter 1
okay, i like it more soon please =]
Author's Response: Thank you for your reviwe... Glad you like... Will update soon...
Reviewer: Cookie6 (Signed) · Date: 09/04/08 10:34 PM · On: Chapter 1
Awesome bar room brawl girl! Winchester-a$$-kicking even in a drug induced stupor! Very creepy plot line, I'm all anxious now. I so get the time factor needed to update (yeah, yeah, I'm the biggest culprit here!) but I'm gunna be hanging out for this one! Great job!
Author's Response: Thank you So much for that: it's the first time i've ever written anything even remotely resembling a fight scene, so any pointers or constructive critsicm is very much appreciated. Thanks for voicing your intrest in my story... makes me wanna dance:D
Reviewer: Silvertayl (Signed) · Date: 09/04/08 07:11 PM · On: Chapter 1
Love it, love it, love it. Wating impatiently for more. Love hurt, hurts good.
Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review... will try to update as soon as possible...
Reviewer: Janger (Signed) · Date: 09/04/08 05:38 PM · On: Chapter 1
Oh, those boys never catch a break do they. That creepy backwoods diner just spelt trouble but it would be no fun if they just drove past. I loved them singing away to Aerosmith, can't beat a bit of headbanging on a long drive! Looking forward to the next one. Thanks. Jane
Author's Response: Even when they are supposed to be relaxing... Love in the elevator i my FAVORTE, Aerosmith rules... i'm a geek, i know this:D update might be a while sorry...
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