Reviewer: ashon13 (Signed) · Date: 17/11/08 03:09 PM · On: Chapter 3
God, I just gotta say before I continue, that I love this story! :P
Author's Response: Hey!! :D Welcome to the story. Glad to know you're enjoying so far and thank you so much for your review. And feel free to ask if you have any questions along the way :):)
Reviewer: vonnie836 (Signed) · Date: 20/08/08 07:56 AM · On: Chapter 14
Wow, this is so exciting. I can't wait to see how you are going to resolve this. So like Sam, that he wouldn't go without the others. Dean to the rescue, hope he gets to Sammy in time. Hugs, Vonnie
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review and for showing an interest... and for the stars:D Hope the interest lasts...
Reviewer: supernatfem76 (Signed) · Date: 19/08/08 08:24 PM · On: Chapter 1
Good beginning! I liked Sam and Dean singing along to the Aerosmith Song. I liked the bartender's descriptions of Sam and Dean. I can't wait to find out more about the others.
Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review and for the stars. Hope you like the rest of the story as well :D
Reviewer: punkin (Signed) · Date: 19/08/08 11:16 AM · On: Chapter 14
Ahhhh, post more!!!!
Author's Response: I will I will...:D Glad you liked. Thank you so much for the review.
Reviewer: vonnie836 (Signed) · Date: 11/08/08 11:54 AM · On: Chapter 13
Great chapter,this is really getting more and more tense, can't wait to see what happens next. Hugs, Vonnie
Author's Response: Glad you're enjoying :D I'll hurry and write it then...
Author's Response: Glad you're enjoying :D I'll hurry and write it then...
Reviewer: vonnie836 (Signed) · Date: 25/07/08 06:18 PM · On: Chapter 12
Wow, great chapter, so Cornelius has Arianna now. And he can't read Sam's mind anymore. Wonder what his plans are now. I have the feeling he is going to get Dean soon. Can't wait for the next chapter. Hugs, Vonnie
Author's Response: The plot is thickening :D Next chapter should be up soon. I'm at 4000 words now sooo not long before I post. Gald to hear you're enjoying :D
Reviewer: vonnie836 (Signed) · Date: 22/07/08 07:35 AM · On: Chapter 11
Wow, this is such an intense story, very well written. It has a great flow to it and the descriptions are awesome. I absolutely adore limp Sam, but like him strong at the same time and you pull this of so great. Protective/worried Dean comes across just as well. I also really like Arianna. Couldn't hardly stop reading and I sure hope you will update this soon. Hugs, Vonnie
Author's Response: Thank you for the huge compliment Vonnie :D Update shoud be soon. I'm hoping to get it in sometime next week and I made the chap extra long:) Just have to finish the re-re-re-editing lol :D Thanks for the review... really appreciate it.
Reviewer: BlackBirdWake (Signed) · Date: 25/06/08 10:56 PM · On: Chapter 11
“No no. Just uh… I kinda’ kicked a tree.” He looked unimpressed. “Well that wasn’t very nice. Did you apologize?” That was amazing right there... I loved it lol. oh and it's manners not manors (a manor is a big house). By the way, if the spelling corrections bother you just let me know. I'm just trying to be helpful.
Author's Response: Correct all you want :D I love your honesty. Keeps me sharp... And reminds me to read the chapters through a few times before posting :D but lately the time just got away. I'm hoping to have some more time and not feel the need to rush with the chapters... And hey anytime you're offering to beta my chapters let me know :D
Reviewer: BlackBirdWake (Signed) · Date: 25/06/08 10:33 PM · On: Chapter 9
Okay I got to say it, "lungs" not "lounges." Otherwise so far so good. I'm surprised i'm enjoying a story with a MarySue type character. Also Kudos on the Abaddon research and the Balthory references.
Author's Response: So sorry. English NOT my first language and the computer is not helping sorry, but thank you for correcting that very embarressing mistake :) Glad to know your enjoying and that you seem to know who Abbadon is (well what he was in the mythology at least...). Was beginning to wonder if I was the only one with that particular weid interest :)
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 25/06/08 11:35 AM · On: Chapter 4
"I'm right beside you Sammy, don't ever worry." Dean's words plucked at my heartstrings. Arianna's power is cool! Suspending the Impala in the air was a fantastic trick!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your reviews. Glad you liked the trick and I only hope the description was as good... thank you again :D
Author's Response: Also I know the line is pretty corny and somewhat unlike Dean. But I figured if faced with that stuation for the first time, his heart would have been pumping a little faster. Sorry for the PS. :D
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 19/06/08 02:28 PM · On: Chapter 3
"No scratch that; it wanted out." Very powerful statement! Good fight scene! Lots of action!
Author's Response: Hope you like character-devealopement as much as you do action, because that is what i'm trying to in the following chapters. Thanks for the great reviews :D Keep 'em up!
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 19/06/08 02:13 PM · On: Chapter 2
Arianna---that's my youngest's name! Whee! I think I'm going to luuuuvvv this story. Geez! Nothing like turning Sam into raw meat. Not much you haven't done to him.
Author's Response: I'm gonna put Sam through the meatgrinder before you reach chapter ten :D This is just getting freaky. All the coincedences are surely trying to tell you something. I love that name... Keep up the great reviews :D makes my day..
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 19/06/08 09:41 AM · On: Chapter 1
Funny thing---I started reading this about two weeks ago, but didn't have time to finish before I went on vacation. Everytime I'd get in the car and turn on the radio "Love in an Elevator" would play. Now how's that for karma? I'd crank it up and laugh as I recalled Sam and Dean singing at the tops of their lungs. I also think it's bizarre that Kripke has the boys singing loud and off-key in NRFTW. You reading his mind? The bar fight was great! I'm glad the boys picked up on the strange vibes. I'd seriously wonder about them if they hadn't. And the hint that the daughter and mother share a unique "special" something is a fantatic tease!
Author's Response: Leeeeaaaaarrrrrnnnnnn...! Karma will kick your ass, but you saved it by leaving me this lovely review. Thank you so much for that. And yes, Kripke and I do share a secret telepathic connection, but i was sworn to secrecy :D... I was as surprised and delighted as you probably were when i saw Dean crank up Bon Jovi and luring Sam on a little sing-along :D Favorite scene in that episode by far.... Glad you liked the barfight. Was very nervous about that. There might be more on Arianna's past if everything goes to plan, but we'll see :D Thank you for reading and for reviewing.
Reviewer: rbliss1969 (Signed) · Date: 04/06/08 11:20 PM · On: Chapter 9
Andrea, great chapter very powerful. love Sam's defiance and Dean's need to find him. Renee
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Good to know you liked the chap.
Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 22/05/08 07:29 PM · On: Chapter 8
This is for the whole story up till now, It's Great!!!!! would like more Dean though. can't wait for the next update
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review... I'm trying to make room for both Sam and Dean and Arianna in this story.. To say the pages are getting crowded is an understatement :D
Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 22/05/08 02:17 PM · On: Chapter 2
Great chapter, Really enjoying this so far.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading Maureen. Thank you very much for reviewing. Love to hear what you all think...
Reviewer: rbliss1969 (Signed) · Date: 20/05/08 11:39 PM · On: Chapter 7
Andrea, i am liking this story and how you are handling Dean and Anna as well as Sam and his captures. can't wait to read what is next. Renee
Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review. Glad to know you're enjoying...
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 19/05/08 01:08 PM · On: Chapter 7
OUCH, poor Sam, glad he's not alone at least and that water torture sounds like a hell on earth. Great chapter though, and great read. XX Louy
Author's Response: Thanks for your reviews... The hell on earth thing was what I was aiming for... And remember if you have or know of any funny quirks I would love to hear them :D
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 19/05/08 12:53 PM · On: Chapter 6
Great chapter and fantastic banter...again...lol. But I have to rush to move on, I sooo need to know what's happening with our boy Sammy...
Author's Response: Thank you... Glad you liked the banter... Hope you won't be dissapointed with Sam's version.
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 16/05/08 12:43 PM · On: Chapter 5
Arghh how could you leave poor Sammy drowning, as though things weren't bad enough for him already... Great chapter though and I'll be looking out for the next one...great work.
Author's Response: A bit of a cliffie there... sorry, but rest assured. I have a plan to make it aaaaall better...
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 16/05/08 12:27 PM · On: Chapter 4
OUCH and I mean OUCH!!!! My arms and ankles are still twitching now, this was way too realistic...and very well written... Enjoying a lot, moving on to the next chapter...
Author's Response: Sorry for the emotional distress. But i'm glad the chapter worked :D
Reviewer: Supernatural24 (Signed) · Date: 15/05/08 05:17 PM · On: Chapter 5
WOW AMAZING STORY ! Really it's good. I just can't wait to read the rest. Keep up the great work !
Author's Response: Hey thanks for the review :D Already got the next chap half-finished. Hope it will be a crowdpleaser too...
Reviewer: rbliss1969 (Signed) · Date: 17/04/08 11:52 PM · On: Chapter 3
Andrea, so far this story is great. Poor Sam his powers are always getting him into trouble one way or another. Dean to the rescue but i am sure he will encounter difficulties. wouldn't be a great story is he just walked through the door now would it. i am so far liking Arianna and am wondering if you are going to keep her as a helper to Dean. hope to read chapter 4 soon. Renee
Author's Response: Thank you SO much... love all the great reviews I'm getting... and yes I actually plan on using Arianna in some of my future stories...
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 17/04/08 03:16 AM · On: Chapter 3
Nothing wrong with bending the truth in the world of fanfic...lol This is shaping up to be a fantastic read, and I'm on the edge of my seat worried about what's happening with Sam...and not sur all is as it seems with Arianna but I'm going to wait and see about that one... Great update, don't keep us waiting too long...
Author's Response: Thank you very much... I'll try to update as soon as possible. And I plan on exploring Arianna's charcter more....
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 12/04/08 03:38 PM · On: Chapter 2
Damn, Sam is in big trouble. This is great writing, your descriptions are vivid and very beautiful, and this plot has me on the edge of my seat...adding this story to my fave list, don't want to miss an update when it comes...Thanks for the read
Author's Response: Oh thank you so much... wow... i'm on someones favorite list... hope to update soon...
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