Reviewer: ashon13 (Signed) · Date: 09/01/09 03:04 PM · On: Chapter 12
Aw come on....*stalks around the big rock you're hiding behind* Come out come out wherever you are.. :P
Reviewer: ashon13 (Signed) · Date: 09/01/09 02:16 PM · On: Chapter 4
Oh crap...:P
Reviewer: ashon13 (Signed) · Date: 09/01/09 01:55 PM · On: Chapter 1
Oh man..once again, the stupid men mess with the wrong boys..:P
Reviewer: lillelouis (Signed) · Date: 07/06/08 06:10 AM · On: Chapter 12
Damn you are evil woman! Evil I say! But very good chapter... Guess you couldn't quit the cliffies huh? Well why bother...? It works wonders for the story.... makes us crave more and more :D Good writing. Great job. :D
Reviewer: lillelouis (Signed) · Date: 13/05/08 03:32 PM · On: Chapter 11
Sorry for the PS, but I just thought about something else I wanted to say. (If you haven't guessed it yet, I'm BIG on monologues) At first this story felt like "just" (using it very lightly because this is anything but) another small scale story, but now it kinda' feels like it could swell and expand into a grand scale war epic. I can just see it now: Sam and Dean Winchester, caught in the battle of judgement day! Demons on one side. Hunters on the other. Both sworn enemies... :D I'm a geek I know... Sorry for the long/endless babble. I'm done...
Author's Response: That's great news. I'm glad to hear the scale of what's happening to the boys is reaching the readers of this story. Thanks once again for being such an awesome reviewer. You've made my day. Liz x PS: RL has got in the way and I'm going on holiday so there's going to be a slight delay with the next chapter. I really do want to take my laptop on holiday but the hubby would play hell with me. I'll get back to this asap, there's a lot to come for the boys and I don't want to leave you hanging any longer than necessary.
Reviewer: lillelouis (Signed) · Date: 13/05/08 03:21 PM · On: Chapter 11
Oh. My. God! Sorry for pulling a 'Janice', but I felt it was appropriate. I LOVED! the reversed psychology! Sam thinking that Dean had suddenly turned against him was amazing and so intense. And the hug... Aaaawwww... Sorry for the 'Aawww' too, but again; felt it was appropriate. Great work, but alas no more chapters to read... Please hurry...
Author's Response: Very happy that you liked the reversed psychology. This chapter was a worry beacause of it and because of the lighter tone - as the earlier chapters had been nothing but angst. Liz x
Reviewer: lillelouis (Signed) · Date: 13/05/08 03:09 PM · On: Chapter 10
HAHAAAAAAAAA! I KNEW IT! He killed himself! Eeeexellent... His character was never strong enough to last. Doc was the one I was referring too before by the way. Remember? Doc? With gun? Gunshot? Yes? Anyway... Stupid question, don't laugh: What's MILF?
Author's Response: MILF is a touch naughty, it stands for Mom I'd Like to F***. See naughty and very Dean (at least I think so). Liz x
Reviewer: lillelouis (Signed) · Date: 13/05/08 02:53 PM · On: Chapter 9
Got the "repeat" in the beginning. It's nice to use those little liguistical twists to frame the story and give it a more circular feel. And now you mention it, yeah, you must have an addiction or something. I don't think I have ever counted that many cliffies in one story, but it's alright 'cause the rest of the story is as mesmorizing as a lavalamp... (That's a compliment in case you are a ll-hater :?)
Author's Response: : ) Awww lavalamps rule! Cheers hun, Liz x
Reviewer: lillelouis (Signed) · Date: 13/05/08 02:39 PM · On: Chapter 8
HE KILLS HIMSELF!!!??? Holy crap! Well on the other hand the bastard deserved it for being a jerk! I'm getting too caught up? Sorry, but your writing is wildly mesmorizing. I can't stop reading... Definately not at all bothered by the mini-chappies. Not f it means getting the writing quicker :D
Author's Response: : ) Good guess! I got a few PMs after this chapter with people asking if it was Ben or the Doc who ate the bullet. Loving your reviews, thank you for taking the time out to leave them. Liz x
Reviewer: lillelouis (Signed) · Date: 13/05/08 02:21 PM · On: Chapter 6
“I find that delightful, like calling Hitler ‘little moustache’... Love it. Love your story and I think it's great that you have time to juggle a baby and this great story. Great job so far. Sorry I haven't reviewed at the end of each chapter, but Ohmygodareyoufreakingkiddingme! this story is encaptivating as hell...
Author's Response: Oh thank you so much and welcome to the story - very happy to have you along for the ride, it's been a bumpy one so far. lol Liz x
Reviewer: PropGal (Signed) · Date: 09/05/08 11:22 PM · On: Chapter 11
well...not a cliffy. i almost miss the good ol' days. lol. can't wait for the rest
Author's Response: I know - I'm spoiling you guys with all the cliffy breaks but things are set to hot up next chapter. Please forgive me for the delay though as I'm going on holiday but I will get back to this asap. Liz x
Reviewer: Rosilee (Signed) · Date: 09/05/08 07:58 PM · On: Chapter 11
good chapter!! i loved how dean got sam to not look so defeated!! it was sad but brilliantly written!!
Author's Response: Thank you - I always had a feeling that Dean is a tough love kinda guy lol. Very glad you enjoyed it, Liz x
Reviewer: ReccaF (Signed) · Date: 09/05/08 09:38 AM · On: Chapter 11
OK.... WOW!!!!! this is just getting better and better. The visual I have of the boys in hospital gowns , in wheelchairs , rolling along to the Impala-too funny and scary at the same time.AWESOME writing!!!!!!!! excellent job of mixing the humor of the Winchesters with such dire circumstance-OUTSTANDING!!!!! Why do I get the feeling that Ben Waddell is very close...him... More please. BRAVO!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks hun so much. Very glad you liked it I was really worried about Chapter 11 having a light-hearted tone towards the end when previously it's been all angst. Liz x Also just want to let you know I was hoping to get the next chapter done before I go on holiday but I don't think I'll be able to manage - RL getting in the way. I'd take my laptop on holiday (God I really want to) but I reckon my hubby would divorce me lol. So there will be a bit of a wait for Chapter 12 but I promise to make it a good one. Liz x
Reviewer: PropGal (Signed) · Date: 03/05/08 08:44 PM · On: Chapter 10
still lovin' it. sorry such a short review, i'm taking a wee break from packing my apartment.
Author's Response: : ) No worries, I know what it's like to have little spare time. Thanks for reviewing and I'm so happy to know you're still enjoying the story. Liz x
Reviewer: Midge (Signed) · Date: 03/05/08 02:24 PM · On: Chapter 10
This story just gets more and more intriguing. Looking forward to what comes next.
Author's Response: Thanks hun, things are going to start coming to a head over the next few chapters. Liz x
Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 03/05/08 01:57 PM · On: Chapter 10
Thanks for the update it just keeps getting better and better.
Author's Response: Very glad you think so. I'm trying hard to keep things interesting so fingers crossed you'll like what I've got planned. Liz x
Reviewer: marian_dnsg4l (Signed) · Date: 29/04/08 10:15 PM · On: Chapter 9
You.Are.Evil!!!!! OMG! That is cruel, I'm dying here! Hey great chapter, and all the previous ones. I hadn't had time to review before, but now I have enough to tell you that I'm loving EvErY bit of this story, it is sooo interesting and I love (hate) how you leave us dying for more at the end of each chapter! Anyway, awesome job!
Author's Response: : ) Great to have you along for the ride, thank you so very much for reviewing....and I kinda love being evil. But I'll always try and make it up to you with the next chapter, Liz x
Reviewer: ReccaF (Signed) · Date: 29/04/08 08:13 AM · On: Chapter 9
This is a great story!!!!! What aunt????? Dean better get back to Sam - you have totally captured the Winchester way and the boys interaction with one another -AWESOME work!!!! you are a very perceptive writer in that your visual verbage draws perfect picturesOUTSTANDING!!! I have enjoyed everything you have written - EXCELLENT job!!! more please!!! BRAVO!!!
Author's Response: Wow awwwww thank you. I'm really happy you like the story and esp the interaction between the boys. It's important to me to try and stick to how the show presents Sam and Dean. Of course I'll stick in the odd naughty word which would never come out of Dean's mouth on the show....and maybe a few scenes where Sam is hit by a spell where all his clothes fall off...I know, sorry, I just can't help myself : ) Liz x
Reviewer: Midge (Signed) · Date: 29/04/08 06:14 AM · On: Chapter 9
OK Aunt?! I don't recall a woman being involved in this story.... must be time to go back for a reread. Nice description of what Sam felt when he tapped into power. And it just breaks my heart that he can't take Dean's touch at the moment. Keep it coming, you're doing great.
Author's Response: Ooooooooh I won't spoil things for you but you're right, the woman in question hasn't made an appearance before now. So glad you're continuing to read. Thanks for reviewing, Liz x
Reviewer: danrac1066 (Signed) · Date: 27/04/08 01:27 AM · On: Chapter 8
Hey, short updates beat no updates any day - and this is an interesting story - keep it up - Angela
Author's Response: Thanks! Hope you'll like the new chapter. Liz x
Reviewer: bambers2 (Signed) · Date: 25/04/08 01:10 PM · On: Chapter 8
lol...i have to say, and this may only be my opinion, but i really like short chapters so don't worry about it!! so, hopefully Sam is on his way to recovery and Dean as well...but Ben is still alive so I am wonder how long till they come after the boys!! look forward to the next chappy!! bambers;)
Author's Response: So glad to hear it. I always feel guilty about not writing more but unless I quit my job(s) I can't see my chapters ever getting much longer. Thanks for reviewing, Liz x
Reviewer: CherryTootsiePop (Signed) · Date: 25/04/08 03:11 AM · On: Chapter 8
It wasn't as evil as those others but it's still a cliffie =P great update! keep up the good job hun!
Author's Response: Cheers. Dead chuffed you enjoyed it. Liz x
Reviewer: PropGal (Signed) · Date: 24/04/08 12:14 PM · On: Chapter 8
nice. can't wait for more.
Author's Response: : ) I've finally got the new update posted, thank goodness for baby nap times. I'd be lost without them. Liz x
Reviewer: Midge (Signed) · Date: 24/04/08 10:49 AM · On: Chapter 8
Personally I like short chapters, when they come frequently. Keep them coming and I'll keep reading.
Author's Response: Sure thing! Really happy to have you long for the ride. Liz x
Reviewer: ReccaF (Signed) · Date: 24/04/08 10:47 AM · On: Chapter 8
The boys never catch a break. It figures that dumb ass Ben is still after Sam- he's too stupid to breathe. Doc still gets no sympathy from me- he helped them hurt Sam in the first place. OK ...I'm over it now. This is a dynamite story- you have captured all the elements necessary to get your readers totally involved in the story. i love the combinaion of action , suspense and Dean's brand of justice. OUTSTANDING!!!!!!! Your visually complete words draw excellent pictures that so totally get your readers immersed in the story-AWESOME work!!! You are a true anf gifted writer and storyteller. more please. BRAVO!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you! Very happy and glad to know you're enjoying the pace of the story. I'm trying hard to keep it exciting. Liz x
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