:: Supernaturalville

Reviewer: jensengal3 (Signed) · Date: 09/04/08 04:13 PM · On: Chapter 1

a really beautiful piece of writing. Especially for your first and everything!

Reviewer: Cookie6 (Signed) · Date: 09/04/08 07:06 AM · On: Chapter 1

Damn, just...damn...
That was awesome. Sad, poignant, in fact it was actually quite peaceful. The more I read, the more my tummy clenched, so I was hardly breathing by the end. So Sam found a way to save him...
The line that really to me - "It took a helluva long time, but i finally accepted that you weren't coming back, and for the first time in my life, I'm okay with that." OMG!! *sob* And Sam's gunna wait for him and he knows it *bigger sob*
So clever the way you had both pov's parallel and in sync, it was beautiful to read cos it flowed as we got both sides.
First fic? It's a ripper. Well done.

Reviewer: gengen0776 (Signed) · Date: 08/04/08 11:06 PM · On: Chapter 1

Very nice! Got me all teary...I like how they both realised the same things in the end...Very sweet! Nicely done!

Reviewer: bambers2 (Signed) · Date: 08/04/08 11:04 PM · On: Chapter 1

that was awesome...sad, i got a little teary-eyed at the end. really loved how you used both pov's and made them in sync. Also liked how at first i didn't really know who was speaking, and then it was slowly revealed...nicely done!! bambers;)

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 08/04/08 04:48 PM · On: Chapter 1

oh wow,well done.very moving,i needed lots of tissues.

Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 08/04/08 02:07 PM · On: Chapter 1

Wow, I really liked this. The idea that in the end Sam made the final sacrifice for Dean is really very cool (other than he dies that is..lol)
I also like that though Dean was lost for awhile (him and Jack) he finally made his peace.
Very well done and congrats on your first story - Kel

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