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Reviews For Goodnight, Moon
Reviewer: Janger (Signed) · Date: 13/04/08 05:06 PM · On: Chapter 2: The Man in the Mirror

Oh, there are just so many delightful images here, this has had me smiling all over the place.  Sam is just so p***ed off and Dean is covering his fear and worry with a beautiful mixture of trademark humour and gentle support.  You've also shown the part of Dean that truly misses the baby boy that was his brother.

Loved the "Superdad by day.  Batman by night." line, Dean always is one to make the best of an opportunity!!  I found the images of four year old Sam, sitting on the floor surrounded by ancient, arcane tomes, with his beer bottle, swearing like a trooper, to be totally outstanding, they left me grinning like a fool.

Loving the story, please update soon.  Thanks. Jane



Author's Response: Hi Jane! So happy you're liking it so far! Thank you so much for commenting!

Reviewer: bayre (Signed) · Date: 13/04/08 01:27 PM · On: Chapter 2: The Man in the Mirror

Great update!

Author's Response: Thank you!!

Reviewer: bayre (Signed) · Date: 13/04/08 01:13 PM · On: Chapter 1

Ha!  This is great!

Reviewer: aripagetx_uk (Signed) · Date: 13/04/08 04:35 AM · On: Chapter 2: The Man in the Mirror

loving this story... just found it but the thought of Sammy... at 4.... just too cute... but funniest is Dean finding a 4yr old Sammy drinking beer...

Author's Response: lol Thank you!

Reviewer: gater91 (Signed) · Date: 12/04/08 04:04 PM · On: Chapter 2: The Man in the Mirror

can't wait for more! update soon!

Author's Response: Thanks! Hope you enjoy the next part!

Reviewer: Vanessa (Signed) · Date: 12/04/08 03:51 PM · On: Chapter 2: The Man in the Mirror

Ahhh, I'm still loving this.  It's cute but very, very poignant at the same time.  I actually found myself getting choked up a time or two in between chuckling at other things.

Author's Response: *bg* Thank you! Umm...better get the tissues out. lol

Reviewer: kika (Signed) · Date: 12/04/08 01:51 PM · On: Chapter 2: The Man in the Mirror

 Absolutely terrific!! Keep going



Author's Response: Thanks!! *bg*

Reviewer: sandy (Signed) · Date: 12/04/08 12:31 PM · On: Chapter 2: The Man in the Mirror

great 2nd chapter. it was really funny....please update soon!

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: beth9874 (Signed) · Date: 07/04/08 10:29 AM · On: Chapter 1

lil sammy, awww update soon,please

Author's Response: *bg* Updating right now;) Thanks!

Reviewer: sandy (Signed) · Date: 07/04/08 08:25 AM · On: Chapter 1

this story is soo cute- keep going!

Author's Response: Thanks! Hope you continue to like!

Reviewer: gater91 (Signed) · Date: 06/04/08 06:50 PM · On: Chapter 1

great idea! loved it!

Author's Response: Thank you!! *bg*

Reviewer: Vanessa (Signed) · Date: 06/04/08 06:09 PM · On: Chapter 1

This is a great start.  Little Sammy is so cute.  But what's even funnier is he still has the adult personality.  This makes the story unique from others I've read and I like it very much.  When you described how his typically normal clothes were weighed so much and were dragging him down--that was great!

As I kept reading, I suddenly kept thinking--what would the boys do if they were BOTH temporarily turned into kids (but kept their adult personalities).  hehehe

Of course, we have the dramatic opening scene which lets us know this isn't gonna be all sweetness and light.

Anyway, nice opening chapter.  Looking forward to more.



Author's Response: Hi Vanessa! Thank you! OMG BOTH of them downsized?! *eg* lol

Reviewer: Janger (Signed) · Date: 06/04/08 01:27 PM · On: Chapter 1

Scary opening paras, I don't like the sound of Dean in the back of the Impala with Sam lying/dying in his arms. 

I love the idea of 'little Sammy' and Dean getting all nostalgic, and 'instinctively wrapping his arms and legs around Dean' was very sweet.  So what on earth has happened between the leshii and the back of the Impala a week later??

Please update soon, I'm hooked already.  Thanks.  Jane



Author's Response: Hi Jane!! I'm glad you're liking it so far! Thank you so much for reviewing!

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