Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 25/10/08 02:37 PM · On: Chapter 1
This story is " PRICELESS ", and I want more. Thank you !!!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm so glad my own cat bite let to this story! Hugs, Muffy
Reviewer: Crash and Burn (Signed) · Date: 24/07/08 01:41 PM · On: Chapter 9
This was a really good read!! The ending was cute even if Dean wasn't a fan...
Author's Response: Oh thank you so much! I'm so glad you liked this one. It's lovely what a cate bite and a title can get. Thank you again!
Hugs
Muffy
Reviewer: CricketBee (Signed) · Date: 12/07/08 01:19 AM · On: Chapter 9
Wonderful story Muffy, I really enjoyed it start to finish. I liked how the flashback part helped Sam figure out how to help poor delirious Dean. Talking trees (a little Lord of the Rings influence?) It's lines like these that I love cause they really show the close bond our boys have: Sam was talking. Dean listened, letting his brother’s voice calm the panic stirring in his chest. He could peg most of his brother’s moods and this one looked a lot like “guilt is killing me” Sam. And then I have to say: EWWWWW As he waited, he pulled strips of skin off his hand. “That’s just gross,” Sam said, walking in. “It itches.” Dean heard the whine in his voice. “And it’s peeling.” What a fantastic story Muffy, I thoroughly enjoyed this one. Thanks for the ride. -- cricket
Author's Response: Thank you so much, Cricket. Sorry about the ewww factor. I was assured that was a guy thing to do LOL. (Not that I did it, nope). I'm so glad you liked this one! I love it when a story comes together this well, and I'm so please about it. A cat bite got it started ('cause when you're in the ER what else do you think of but the boys?) and then the story title from Dennis and Feral was born! Hugs
Muffy
Author's Response: Thank you so much, Cricket. Sorry about the ewww factor. I was assured that was a guy thing to do LOL. (Not that I did it, nope). I'm so glad you liked this one! I love it when a story comes together this well, and I'm so please about it. A cat bite got it started ('cause when you're in the ER what else do you think of but the boys?) and then the story title from Dennis and Feral was born! Hugs
Muffy
Reviewer: CricketBee (Signed) · Date: 12/07/08 01:11 AM · On: Chapter 8
Oh you cruel woman. I got behind on writing reviews and I come back to this! I could practically hear you in the background cackling "Mwahahahaha..." as you left me clinging to the keyboard. Another great emotional roller coaster Muffy. You really make our two boys come to life, your characterizations are so vivid and intense. I really loved this passage, it's so descriptive and really draws you in: A soft coolness spread through his body. Dean let his eyes close again. Sam’s hand was still on his forehead. He could feel his brother’s hand trembling. The voice was still there, screaming, demanding that he finish what he’d started, telling him over and over that he’d failed. Pain flared in his hand. He moaned, the coolness spread again, the light was fading, the voice, the other screams, filling his head. Dean could hear bits of conversation around him. Sam’s voice, panicked, full of tears, another voice, deep, with a slight accent. The owner of that voice was consoling his brother. Pain flared again. Quiet anxious voices, darkness crept a little closer. OK, on to the last bit. --cricket
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Sorry about sneaking stories in one you *evil chuckle* but this way you got it all at once :D Thank you so much for your kind words., Characterization is always so important, and I do worry that I've missed something. Hearing I have them right is one of the absolute highest compliments I can think of! Hugs
Muffy
Reviewer: mustang (Signed) · Date: 05/07/08 09:53 AM · On: Chapter 9
That was an awesome story..So glad Dean is okay, I could see him getting bit by a cat..lol..Thanks so much for writing..
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Poor Dean, a cat bite starting all that and it seemed so simple at first! LOL Cat bites are bad...and worse when I help LOL LOL Hugs, Muffy
Reviewer: _Psych_ (Signed) · Date: 10/06/08 01:17 PM · On: Chapter 9
Bite me....looooove it Awesome story!
Author's Response: Oh thank you so much! I'm so glad my cat bite turned out so well. :D Thanks again
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 10/06/08 08:18 AM · On: Chapter 9
Great ending to a fantastic story.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm so glad the end worked, I do panic just a bit...
Reviewer: mymuseandi (Signed) · Date: 10/06/08 05:16 AM · On: Chapter 9
Oh i love your ending.....and i'm glad you made Sam tease Dean!!! i think he needs a little teasing once in a while..... I love the cat's name!!! Fluffer Nufter Tuffkins!!! LOL it sounds so posh and aristocratic and i can't believe Dean is sick because of a cat named like that!! :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I just knew Sam would tease Dean, if for no other reason than he would need to--to release a bit of tension. And I had to put the whole name in, Fluffers would have been annoyed. He's (the real Fluffers) very please he could have so much fun!
Reviewer: Janger (Signed) · Date: 31/05/08 03:27 AM · On: Chapter 8
Oh no, Dean, please don't die. Muffy, I know you don't do death fics but our boy's not looking good here!! Great plot, I'm pleased Sam figured it all out with a bit of help from Stan - so plesed he's survived. Lots of lovely twists going on. All we need now is for Dean to get better so Sam can give him stick for falling foul of a fluffy little pussy cat!! Great update as always. Jane
Author's Response: Thank you so much Jane. Nope, don't do death fics, and I couldn't really have him go through all this and just hop up, could I? I need a little comfort. Oh, and the whole "You got taken down by Fluffers" thing LOL. Poor Dean, he might wish he'd never rrecovered. I'll have the last bit up soon. I hit a deadline for my novel and I had to hack out the last three chapters.
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 30/05/08 05:20 AM · On: Chapter 8
Poor Dean,after all that he's still not better.Looking forward to more.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Yeah, poor Dean, but I thought, what with teh infection and the bullet wounds--and everything else--it would have been a bit of a cheat to have him all better in this chapter. Besides, I need a little Sam taking care of Dean!
Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 29/05/08 02:29 PM · On: Chapter 8
Muffy. Bloomin heck! We finally nail the nasty kitty and the witchy-bitchy and her hubby (gee their names sound so familiar! Zoot!!) and then you smack us with Dean - turn for the worse! You're evil Muffy. Liked Stan, good guy. Finish it babe and remember you not a murderer! Bev xx
Author's Response: Oh thank you so much! *hugs* I know I'm not a murderer, except of bad guys! Dean will pull through, although I expect he'll be a mess for awhile. Bad injuries mean long recovery and enough time to make Sam a basket case! More very soon!
Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 29/05/08 06:39 AM · On: Chapter 8
Great chapter, eagerly awaiting the next one, hope your busy writing.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm madly writing and should have the new chapter up very soon! Promise
Reviewer: Soennelchen (Signed) · Date: 29/05/08 02:23 AM · On: Chapter 8
Oh Muffy, what is it with all these cliffhangers??? But I love the tension you build up. Awesome chapter. Can't wait for the next one.
Author's Response: Oh, so sorry about the cliffhangers--didn't I tell you? I'm possessed by the most evil cliffie demon eer--and he enjoys Latin so exorcism is not an option. I'll have more very soon!
Reviewer: mymuseandi (Signed) · Date: 29/05/08 12:48 AM · On: Chapter 8
You know, the thing that gets to me each time is when Dean keeps "telling" Sam that he doesn't like the nightmare and wanted it all to end....and that's so close to him begging that i can't stand it!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! It's starting to get to me too, so Ineed to wrap t up and hve Dean awke and talking to his brother! More vey soon, promise.
Reviewer: mymuseandi (Signed) · Date: 22/05/08 06:16 AM · On: Chapter 7
Your cliffies are evil!!!! i don't think i have any nails left......and i don't think i can reach my toenails to chew on, NOT that i want to.... I love it that in your stories you try to make Sam face the more difficult choices; in the series he's let off very easily at times, and there's always Dean for him to bounce ideans off from...but in your stories you make him make the decisions alone, without Dean, and i think that it's about time the writers for Spn follow your lead and make Sam choose!!!! LOL all's said and done, i hope your next update won't be long!
Author's Response: Oh thank you so much! And I'm so sorry about your nails. LOL. I like knowing Sam can make difficult choices for himself and for Dean. I agree that he is let off in the series. Maybe the writers don't have the same trust in Sam that we do. I think he has such strength and if needed can make the hard call. I'm working on the chapter today and should have it up later.
Reviewer: PropGal (Signed) · Date: 20/05/08 07:51 PM · On: Chapter 7
dear god what a cliff-hanger! i'm lovin' the new characters...the doctor is definatley intriguing. i just want more!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you like the added characters, sometimes OCs are hard. :D I'll have more very soon, promise
Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 15/05/08 05:04 PM · On: Chapter 7
Muffy. " I don’t like this dream. Gentle, trembling hands turned him over, straightening his leg. “Oh god, Dean, I’m so sorry,” Sam whispered.Dean whimpered as something was pressed against his leg. “I don’t like this dream, Sammy,” he said." Oh Muffy that's so heartbreaking, Vulnerable, hurt Dean is so adorable and guilt ridden Sam having shot him is a tour de force! The whole scene where the medics are coming to sedate him just rocks with anguish, Dean's confusion and horror is palpable and Sam's distress all too real. Lovely writing. Wow I like the Doc, he's very wise it seems, so am i right to trust him?? is he a good guy? whay am i so suspicious? My good grief, you woke him in mid surgery? Muffy check your eyes hunny they have am obsidean tinge?? OMG, tremendous! More and soon or else!! Bev xxxx
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I might be a little more Evil Muffy on this one than usual. My eyes might glitter just a bit. Sometimes I wonder how I managed to meet Jensen's eye! The anguish and emotion in this story is so raw, it's killing me at times. I'm glad Sam is beginning to find the answers though, the sense of helplessness is beginning to get to me! More soon *hugs* Muffy
Reviewer: CricketBee (Signed) · Date: 15/05/08 12:52 PM · On: Chapter 7
oh my gawd, i think you're trying to kill me. i swear -- my heart just about stopped with this chapter. i need oxygen! this is going great. i'm so hooked, can't wait to see what comes next. evil cat! great hook. -- cricket
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm not trying to kill you, I promise! Really! *sends oxygen* I'll have more, and I think Fluffers is going to get his comeuppance soon!
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 15/05/08 09:54 AM · On: Chapter 7
i can't wait to find out what's happened to dean.please update soon.
Author's Response: Oh thank you so much! Poor Dean, I'm afraid I've been dreadful him this story. I'll have more very soon!
Reviewer: Soennelchen (Signed) · Date: 15/05/08 02:31 AM · On: Chapter 7
Oh no! What happened??? What a thrillride! Please don't leave us hanging in there too long! I'm at the edge of my seat here!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! What happened? Hmm, you want spoilers? I'll be updating very soon, promise!
Reviewer: calUK (Signed) · Date: 15/05/08 02:05 AM · On: Chapter 7
Oh no oh no oh no oh no! Are they gonna be too late? Weave your wicked web quick girl-need me some more of your fantastic, twisted work!
Author's Response: Oh thank you! My wicked web is getting woven well. Poor Dean, caught in the middle of a Muffy moment. I think I am getting more demented...
Reviewer: calUK (Signed) · Date: 15/05/08 01:46 AM · On: Chapter 5
Very quick review-been waiting til i could read a chunk of this in one go and *wow* you haven't disappointed yet! Next chappie...
Author's Response: Oh thank you so much! Iim glad it's holding together for a read in one go! I always wonder. More very soon, promise!
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 08/05/08 12:41 PM · On: Chapter 6
wow, that was a great update.action packed.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'll be back very soon with an update on this one!
Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 05/05/08 05:21 PM · On: Chapter 6
Muffy. Owh barefoot! Thank you hunny! Loved the action with the hollow points, very cool. and Sam taken by pixies! ha freaking ha! OMG, you shot him! Ah but then I srota knew that huh? Loving it Muffy more soon! bev xx
Author's Response: Thank YOU so much! Your help has been invaluable. And I will get to the Sam taken by pixies in the next chapter. Dean just thought that (I had no idea) and now I want to know more!
Reviewer: Janger (Signed) · Date: 05/05/08 04:28 PM · On: Chapter 6
'No, no, no. Oh god, no.' just about sums it up, poor Dean's on death's doorstep as it is, now Sams' had to shoot him twice to stop him killing a bearhunting child. Blood gushing out onto the floor is never a good sign!! Whatever has a hold of Dean has really got a mean grip on him if he can no longer recognise Sam. Hopefully the Chrism and rock salt might help to break the hold, if only for a short while, ultimately, I reckon Fluffers and the locket need a good salt and burn. I thought Dean was going to come out of it when he sat in the muddy river but obviously Fluffers has other ideas. Now the bit that's really got me thinking is the missing hairbrush/hair, could it be the doctor who's taken it? Oh, so much intrigue, wonderful stuff. I'm no closer to figuring it all out yet but I'm thoroughly enjoying it. I hope the bedrest is doing the trick, are you still on a two hour limit?? Hope you're feeling better soon. Thanks. Jane
Author's Response: Oh thank you so much! I just love how this story if unfolding. I should have dire things happen to me more often, they make such a wonderful stepping off point! Although people have told me I take research too far! I'm glad the mystery is still mysterious, I'm trying to keep things under wraps as long as possible. I think Sam's starting to figure things out... I'm still on bedrest, but have been cleared for FOUR whole hours a day *sighs* I don't feel nearly as rushed as I have...Hopefully if I'm a good girl they'll just let me have my computer.
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