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Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 18/05/10 09:08 PM · On: Chapter 9

Great story!  Thanks for sharing it with me.  I'm glad you tied up all the loose ends.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 18/05/10 08:38 PM · On: Chapter 8

"... the sound of the wind full with the cries of injured, dying people."  Cool!  I also loved the swirling grains of sand like dried blood.

It's funny to hear of this horrible power threatening Dean's life called Fluffers, especially now that we know he's an evil sorcerer from hundreds of years in the past.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 18/05/10 08:13 PM · On: Chapter 7

You keep the suspense level high and I'm on the edge of my seat.  You keep giving me part of the answer and the solution but I'm still in the dark.  I'm rushing off to the next chapter.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 18/05/10 07:51 PM · On: Chapter 6

What action!  So suspenseful!

What book is on the shelf and what does it mean?

Is Jeff really related to the family and if so, is he in danger? 

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 16/05/10 10:13 PM · On: Chapter 5

This sounds very intriguing!  The one hundred year old cat, the locket, the deaths in Europe... all add up to a great supernatural entity that I can't wait to find out more about!

I really like Gayle!  The banter between she and Sam (or rather Bogie and Clash) was clever. 

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 16/05/10 09:49 PM · On: Chapter 4

Gee!  The doctor was so gentle telling Sam that his brother is in a coma.  Basically she said he's no trouble now because he's closer to death.  

This Charlie Allnut sounds like a character I'm going to like.  Sam's going to have a hard time fooling her. 

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 16/05/10 09:31 PM · On: Chapter 3

Hopefully, Sam will catch on that this illness has a touch of the supernatural attached to it.  I'm surprised he didn't listen to Dean when he told him there was something different about this fever but that would take some of the tension from the story.

Wow!  Dean is super delusional and dangerous when he has a fever.  Going after people with a real .45 is a bit drastic.  Love when Sam gives Dean the soup and mentions that it tastes good because he left the blood out of it.   Hee!

 

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 16/05/10 08:59 PM · On: Chapter 2

I like Dean's request for morphine.  it brought some brotherly Winchester humor to a troubling situation.  And it continued when Dean told Sam he was holding onto his hand to keep from falling off the spinning bed.

Hee!  A cat named Fluffers and a teddy bear named Snuggle.  Dean has a weird aversion to cute and fluffy.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 11/05/10 08:53 PM · On: Chapter 1

The silent exchange at the door was a perfect example of how close they are as brothers and partners. "Dean!"  It was the frantic tone reserved solely for him, and only when Sam was pretty sure he was going to find a corpse when he got to his brother.   We've all heard that tone so it wasn't difficult to imagine it. When you mentioned cat scratch fever did you mean the real thing or the song?  Or is that part of the funny?  Did they forget the cat's been chewing on a decomposing hand for the last few days?    

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 30/03/09 04:41 AM · On: Chapter 9

Fluffer Nufter Tuffkins . . . how can anyone be any happier then maybe wearing a chapion scratch to a ring of somesort.

To bad DEAN that it wasn't the cat woman that would probably be wearing a bootylish top.

Thank you.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 30/03/09 12:31 AM · On: Chapter 8

This is a very powerful story thanks for placing all the vivid images of the mystic characters.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 29/03/09 10:30 PM · On: Chapter 7

This can not happen. you have a very wicked mind and that is cool, keen, bad, aggressivly swirling with that brain of yours, and I like it.

It shows your demented mind when certain images pop up that is very thrilling to me whom is eternaly a reader. It captivates the senses along with the feelings.

That is a very clever way of writing.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 29/03/09 09:31 PM · On: Chapter 6

The images that are playing through my mind are . . . their is no word for.

I do see the image of terror in Deans eyes, not being aware of anything, sweat dripping down his forhead one can even see the evaporation as it hits his hand.

SAM is scared as hell at this moment.

u are good.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 29/03/09 06:13 AM · On: Chapter 5

This one keeps getting creeper as HELL was in a form of Heaven in a bad day.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 29/03/09 03:06 AM · On: Chapter 4

I think there is a double standered in this . . . she has been hiding something and probly DEAN is okay,but that bitch did something or gave him something. Not good Sammy.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 29/03/09 12:56 AM · On: Chapter 3

This even makes me scared to the point maybe he is not getting delusional at all.

I feel like I'm witnessing this misshap. You are good. Thanks.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 28/03/09 11:36 PM · On: Chapter 2

So, this is a bit funny to the fact that its a stupid cat that bit him and the SNUGGLY BEAR that he wants to un-Demonize.

I do like how you supported the intens unity of the brothers.

I do realy hate the damn DR. she seems to be a real BITCH, but its ur story and I do like it.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 27/03/09 07:50 AM · On: Chapter 1

and many say that they are friendly that they are better than dogs . . . I guess not.

 Funny though!!

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 29/10/08 08:04 AM · On: Chapter 8

This story is trully killing me, but it feels that I am witnessing it. I can feel pain in my head, probably because I cant sleep. Thank YUOU

Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I'm thrilled I managed to capture that sense of witnessing it! I hope it worked, but I wasn't sure! THANK YOU

hugs, Muffy

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 28/10/08 06:32 AM · On: Chapter 7

This is really scary, but great writing at the same time.

Author's Response:

Oh thank you so much! I'm so glad you're liking this one!

Hugs, Muffy

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 28/10/08 03:05 AM · On: Chapter 6

This is to tramatic and tramtizing, but your visual effects of writing are doing a hell of a job. I feel that I am witnessing this incedent. I like it.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I know this one is a little disturbing in places! Thank you for sticking with me!

Hugs, Muffy

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 28/10/08 12:40 AM · On: Chapter 5

This is getting to my nerves, I always thought that DEMONS where to go after SAM not DEAN, but then again he is also a beckon to his brother like wise being this is very confusing.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much! Sometimes I think things go after Dean, they find something there they like and go for it!

Hugs, Muffy

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 26/10/08 06:57 AM · On: Chapter 4

This is getting out of hand, and if their father does not answer. I will personaly kick his sorry ass. I do find this a liking to me.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I want to kick John's ass now and then too!

Hugs, Muffy

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 26/10/08 04:26 AM · On: Chapter 3

Okay now you are scaring me and this is getting a bit out of hand too. But I like it. NOT FUNNY!!!!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much! It is getting a bit out of hand. I'm glad you like it!

Hugs, Muffy

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 26/10/08 03:43 AM · On: Chapter 2

AAAGGGGHHHHH!!!!! the way you have written this piece. IS gracefull. Now it makes me want to make sure my cats are well taken care of in that situation.

Author's Response:

Oh thank you so much! At least I assume the scream was good!

Hugs, Muffy

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