wonderful language and imagery from the onset. It drew me right in. I was a litle confused about what was happening with the mock wedding but eventually I caught on.  I love the idea of Dean's secret can't wait to read more.

Author's Response:

* Blush* Thanks for the compliments on the writing - I am flattered that the beginning "drew you in". I do love to play with words and sometimes worry that I get a little carried away. I was trying a 'thing' with the Wedding rehearsal scene and am glad it wasn't too confusing. Dean's secret is outlining itself in my head right now - it keeps shifting slightly but I am hoping once I get further in, all the little knots will unravel!! LoL!

Looking forward to what you make of the next chapter.

Abi.

An excellent beginning, I must say! The writing flows nicely, and I look forward to the mystery unfolding--

Author's Response:

Your so kind, I am really happy you enjoyed the beginning. The compliments about the flow of my writing gave me quite a little boost too!!!! :-) I really do hope that this continues to keep you entertained. Thanks for reading and taking the time to review.

Abi.

P.S. Shiny stars are my new favorite thing!!!! I am more addicted than to chocolate - thanks for feeding my habit!!! LOL.

yo, Abi!  a new delight - groovy!

"his patented smart-alecky grin"  gee Abi, how I like those words!  What a pretty image to get us started off!

Whoa this is intriguing, jim is cool and Dean getting married?  that's just so wrong! and to a hobbling zimmer bound girly?  you are so freaky Hunny!

Loved the dreams! Don't profess to understand them but am with ya for the duration as Iwanna know what the heck it all means.  Seems ya know ya bible stories Abi - Dad a pastor sweety?

Loving it

Bev xx

Author's Response:

Bev!!!!

Honoured to have you along for the duration! This one is a bit more ambitious for me than the last one (content - when I write it!!!- makes it so but also the fact that I have less written ahead of posting... *bites all fingernails!*). Would be grateful for any and all observations from you as your experience and awesome (Jedi-like) skills will be a real benefit. So please feel free to tell me (good or bad) what you are making of it?

The 'smart- alecky grin' is my favorite Dean move... Sam may have the dimples, but Dean has the Knee buckler of a smile doesn't he?!!! Don't worry about the married thing - just my evil streak coming out.....Bwhaaa!!!! Once I started seeing the sweat rolling down Dean's forehead, even though he knew it was only a rehearsal and he was just standing in - couldn't help myself!!!!!!

My religious influence probably comes from my upbringing - Catholic school girl!!! No my Daddy is not a Pastor... he definitely has gone into bat for the other side !!!! LOL!!!! 

Thanks for the review Bev, very happy to see you are enjoying it.

Abi