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Reviews For Fearsome Loyalty.
Reviewer: Taliena (Signed) · Date: 06/04/08 04:56 AM · On: Chapter 1

Great start!  I am intrigued as to where this journey will take us... Looking forward to your next chapter.

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review and the thumbs up on the first chapter, I am glad you are enjoying it so far!:-) Although I have the outline for this story, it is still "freely-forming" - still I hope not to keep you waiting too long between postings. Glad to have you along for the ride and would love to hear your opinions on the route I'm taking. (Don't worry I am done with that metaphor now!!! LOL)

Abi.

Reviewer: GotTheShining (Signed) · Date: 04/04/08 05:18 PM · On: Chapter 1

wonderful language and imagery from the onset. It drew me right in. I was a litle confused about what was happening with the mock wedding but eventually I caught on.  I love the idea of Dean's secret can't wait to read more.

Author's Response:

* Blush* Thanks for the compliments on the writing - I am flattered that the beginning "drew you in". I do love to play with words and sometimes worry that I get a little carried away. I was trying a 'thing' with the Wedding rehearsal scene and am glad it wasn't too confusing. Dean's secret is outlining itself in my head right now - it keeps shifting slightly but I am hoping once I get further in, all the little knots will unravel!! LoL!

Looking forward to what you make of the next chapter.

Abi.

Reviewer: Lucy (Signed) · Date: 04/04/08 04:06 PM · On: Chapter 1

Great story! Soooo looking forward to next chapter ! :)

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and taking time to review. I am really pleased that you enjoyed this piece. I am trying my hand at writing as I post - kind of without net (nervous times!!!) but I hope I don't keep you waiting for updates too long. Feel free to let me know how you think it's going.

Abi.

Reviewer: CatzEye (Signed) · Date: 04/04/08 03:43 PM · On: Chapter 1

An excellent beginning, I must say! The writing flows nicely, and I look forward to the mystery unfolding--

Author's Response:

Your so kind, I am really happy you enjoyed the beginning. The compliments about the flow of my writing gave me quite a little boost too!!!! :-) I really do hope that this continues to keep you entertained. Thanks for reading and taking the time to review.

Abi.

P.S. Shiny stars are my new favorite thing!!!! I am more addicted than to chocolate - thanks for feeding my habit!!! LOL.

Reviewer: Little_angel_666 (Signed) · Date: 04/04/08 01:51 PM · On: Chapter 1

This looks to be a very interesting fic, cant wait for the next update keep up the good work!!

 



Author's Response:

Thank you for your kind review. I am glad it has caught your interest and would love to know what you make of the next chapter. This is my second multi chapter and I have jumped in at the deep end (writing as I am going along) so I hope not to keep you waiting too long.

Abi.

Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 04/04/08 01:41 PM · On: Chapter 1

yo, Abi!  a new delight - groovy!

"his patented smart-alecky grin"  gee Abi, how I like those words!  What a pretty image to get us started off!

Whoa this is intriguing, jim is cool and Dean getting married?  that's just so wrong! and to a hobbling zimmer bound girly?  you are so freaky Hunny!

Loved the dreams! Don't profess to understand them but am with ya for the duration as Iwanna know what the heck it all means.  Seems ya know ya bible stories Abi - Dad a pastor sweety?

Loving it

Bev xx



Author's Response:

Bev!!!!

Honoured to have you along for the duration! This one is a bit more ambitious for me than the last one (content - when I write it!!!- makes it so but also the fact that I have less written ahead of posting... *bites all fingernails!*). Would be grateful for any and all observations from you as your experience and awesome (Jedi-like) skills will be a real benefit. So please feel free to tell me (good or bad) what you are making of it?

The 'smart- alecky grin' is my favorite Dean move... Sam may have the dimples, but Dean has the Knee buckler of a smile doesn't he?!!! Don't worry about the married thing - just my evil streak coming out.....Bwhaaa!!!! Once I started seeing the sweat rolling down Dean's forehead, even though he knew it was only a rehearsal and he was just standing in - couldn't help myself!!!!!!

My religious influence probably comes from my upbringing - Catholic school girl!!! No my Daddy is not a Pastor... he definitely has gone into bat for the other side !!!! LOL!!!! 

Thanks for the review Bev, very happy to see you are enjoying it.

Abi  

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