Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 17/04/08 02:56 AM · On: Chapter 7 Weaknesses and Whereabouts
Damn, Ilka this story is going from strength to strength...I absolutely loved the whole description at the start, beautifully written and Dean's pain and discomfort were tangible...and the creepy dream (or is it a vision???) The way you laid it out on the page was original and made me sit up straight away...liked that a lot! Great work my friend, more please.
Author's Response: Oh, I forgot you hadn't had the privilege of reading it before the posting. So, you liked it? Glad you did. And you beat Bev again, she won't like that... hehe. Thanks for the review, Hugs, Ilka
Reviewer: calUK (Signed) · Date: 15/04/08 10:53 AM · On: Chapter 1 (Not) An Everyday Occurence
Right - mad reviewing session called for - haven't been able to post anything of any sort for a while, but I've been reading and it's been amazing! Love the way Sam and Dean both try so hard to hide their pain/worry from each other, and fail so miserably at it; and your descriptions - of all the hurt and angst as well as the more everyday stuff - are so vivid it makes the story play out like a film in my head. Loving every minute of this story, and can't wait for more (and hopefully I'll be able to review quickly next time...!)
Author's Response: Hey cal, thanks for reviewing. I'm glad and as always honoured to hear you still like it. Haven't gotten around to reviewing anything lately, caught up in writing and posting. So, you experience the same thing I do while reading you story then, hehe (The Devil in You), like an epi on TV, yeah, that's how I feel, too, when I'm writing... I'll finish your story tomorrow and then will review every little bit chap for chap... Hugs, Ilka
Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 14/04/08 05:07 PM · On: Chapter 6 Rescue
Ilka Hey Hun! well i had a blast playing doctors and nurses with poor Dean so thanks for the opportunity. Oh and Lou, race ya for the next one! Bev xx
Author's Response: Hehe, again a shoulder and an additional hand injury to take care of, field day for you and me... Love hurting Dean and then taking care of him, you know I'm a perv... Hugs and Kisses to the best beta ever, Ilka
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 14/04/08 04:58 PM · On: Chapter 6 Rescue
Damn, am I first reviewer? Bev's gonna kill me...lol Great chapter Ilka, and that hand injury...ouch. Lots of hurt Dean, protective Sam in this one and it is a wining combination...hehehe Keep it coming, this is getting better and better. Umm, please try to read Bev's review first or she may not talk to me...lol Great work my friend!
Author's Response: Louy, thanx for the review. Always a pleasure to hurt Dean, ain't it? I read birdies review first because it's above yours in the list, so no harm done.... Hugs, Ilka
Reviewer: Vanessa (Signed) · Date: 12/04/08 04:04 PM · On: Chapter 5 Hurt Again
Ohhh, I loved it. I'm one of those Hurt!Dean lovers. I love the "bit gory" part. Twas wonderful to me. :-) Another nice part was the end where Dean was asking for Sam's help. (((sigh)))
Author's Response: Hey Vanessa, glad you still reading! Yeah I loved writing it. Never knew that writing this would be even better than reading or watching Dean get hurt. Guess I'm a little sadist, huh? SIGH, yeah, right... let's do it in unison
Ilka
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 12/04/08 03:54 PM · On: Chapter 5 Hurt Again
Wonderful Ilka, loved the creepy librarian and I wouldn't be surprised if this experience hasn't put Dean off research for life and great cliffhanger...hurry Sammy...lol Keep up the great work my friend!
Author's Response: Hello Louy, I'm glad you liked the chap. As you are such a skilled fighter, I was kinda worried you'd be a harsh critic when it comes to the fighting... Yeah, no more libraries for Dean anymore, he's the muscle, Sam's the brain. XX; Ilka
Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 12/04/08 01:46 PM · On: Chapter 5 Hurt Again
Ilka. The librarian is a freaky weirdy piece of work but I kinda like her! heehee Owh and isn't the sound of fracturing metacarpals sweet? Gosh as I said gory but nice! bev xxxx
Author's Response: Hey Bev, poor Dean huh? But it was actually fun to write this chapter - as you know, I'm a little perv, hehe. Might be the librarian comes back, don't know yet, depends on the reviews about her. Thanks for reviewing, Ilka
Reviewer: calUK (Signed) · Date: 08/04/08 12:52 PM · On: Chapter 4 Old Fashioned Research
Oh oh... poor Dean, think things are about to get twisted! Can't wait...
Author's Response: Hey again, on second thought, keep leaving reviews or I might take leaf out of your book and keep chappies hostage ;)). Gonna read on with Devil in You and then leave a review, huh? xx Ilka
Reviewer: calUK (Signed) · Date: 08/04/08 12:45 PM · On: Chapter 2 Seen and Foreseen
Don't you dare stop! Reading on...
Author's Response: Hey cal, thanks for the review. I said I would stop if the readers told me to. So far none of them has, so no way I'm stopping. Chapter 5 is my favourite, wait till you read... Cheers Ilka
Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 08/04/08 07:11 AM · On: Chapter 4 Old Fashioned Research
ilka. Poor Dean and his hangover, Ugg what a grotty feeling! the Librarian is a cool character but she's not gonna make reasearch any less of a chore for our poor boy so no wonder he's off to sleep! And more strange dreams huh? that's gonna freak Dean out even more! I see trouble in his immediate future ( no not psychic hunny but beta priveledge!) bev xx
Author's Response: Yeah you bet, He's gonna pay for his little rest... BIG TIME... Thank you love, you make a great beta!!! Luv ya, Ilka
Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 08/04/08 07:03 AM · On: Chapter 3 A Psychic's Mind
Ilka me Hun! I'm sneeking on at work to review ya! So not bad going for a new writer that you already have a shower scene going on! Like the fact that you are beginning to fill us in on the detail of who the dream and vision characters are now. Worried about where Dean is tho! (and gee I know cause I'm beta-ing!) bev xx
Author's Response: Bev, don't you loose your job over me and my pestering you! Anyway it's the second shower scene, first Dean and then Sam! HAHA... Hugs and Kisses, Ilka
Reviewer: Vanessa (Signed) · Date: 08/04/08 06:25 AM · On: Chapter 4 Old Fashioned Research
Ooohh, great update! I can't wait to see what's going to happen next.
Author's Response: Hey, good to know I haven't lost you! Chappie five will be on around friday, so keep writing those nice little reviews, maybe I'll write no 6 and post 5 sooner! Thanks, Ilka
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 08/04/08 05:53 AM · On: Chapter 4 Old Fashioned Research
Although Dean in a library just makes me smile...I love the idea that both boys are as competent at the research and the fighting sides of their work...and nice description of that 'hunters sixth sense' coming into play...gave me goosebumps... Keep up the great work Ilka X Louy
Author's Response: Well, Louy, Dean had to do research that way when Sammy was at college. So he might not like it and he might be slow but he can do it. C ya, Ilka
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 08/04/08 05:50 AM · On: Chapter 3 A Psychic's Mind
Beautifully written Ilka and as soon as the car turned up, I was just as worried as Sam was about his brother...if he didn't go check on the car there must be something WAY wrong...lol Great work, moving on to the next chapter straight away.
Author's Response: Lou, thank you for leaving a review. Well read on and you'll know ;)) Cheers, Ilka
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 05/04/08 01:52 PM · On: Chapter 2 Seen and Foreseen
Y'know...ANY other man running to the bathroom and throwing up in the morning would be such a turn off, but somehow Dean manages to even make that sexy...yeah, I know I'm a sick sick puppy...can't help it. Just makes me want to look after him...ehem! Another fantastic chapter Ilka and this story is going from strength to strength...keep it coming! X Louy
Author's Response: Louy, don't we all have a soft spot for a hero in distress, especially after he's been punched and cut and you name it. It sounds a bit pervie, but it's so true. Where else do those Dean-fans and their stories come from. Thank you for the review... Ilka
Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 05/04/08 01:11 PM · On: Chapter 2 Seen and Foreseen
Ilka. You know how is it that even cranky hungover Dean manages to be adorable? I loved Sam's "Morning Sunshine" gee bet Dean just wanted to punch his lights out! Well heck now Sammy's visions rear their ugly head, so we have Dean and his dreams and Sam with visions - they should be able to solve anything with all this imaging going on! Loving it Ilka, still lots of unanswered questions which is exciting and cool! See ya for the next chappie! Bev xx
Author's Response: Bev, thank you for everything, not just the review. Your help and encouragement made it possible. Anyway, you'll know the answers to everything in due time ;;)) Hugs, Ilka
Reviewer: Cookie6 (Signed) · Date: 05/04/08 04:16 AM · On: Chapter 2 Seen and Foreseen
I've just read both your great chapters back to back and you have me hooked in your story. Loved your description of Dean's reaction to seeing the damaged impala, very cool. And a demonic bullet? how original! You story has a nice flow and you have the boys dialogue down pat. Congrats on your first posting - I know EXACTLY what that feels like, scary and exciting at the same time! And the UnGen friends guding you are the best in the business. Well done and welcome aboard!
Author's Response: Hello Petra, Thank you for the support! Well, the thing about the bullet might take some time still to be revealed. And yeah, they are the best of 'em, my betas. So wonderful in their help, couldn't do wthout them. It's always fun to see Dean if anything happens to his babe, isn't it. Those are the TV show's most hilarious scenes, so I took the liberty to invent my own, hah. Next chappie is being betaed at the mo, so stay tuned... Ilka
Author's Response: Hello Petra, Thank you for the support! Well, the thing about the bullet might take some time still to be revealed. And yeah, they are the best of 'em, my betas. So wonderful in their help, couldn't do wthout them. It's always fun to see Dean if anything happens to his babe, isn't it. Those are the TV show's most hilarious scenes, so I took the liberty to invent my own, hah. Next chappie is being betaed at the mo, so stay tuned... Ilka
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 03/04/08 03:41 PM · On: Chapter 1 (Not) An Everyday Occurence
Wonderful job! Congratulations---you posted your first story! Was it as scary as facing a vampire? It was for me! Demonic bullets?! That was a surprising twist. Very clever! I'm eager to find out more about the girl in the road!
Author's Response: Hello Shannon, thank you for leaving the review. Hell, yeah. Posting my first chap really took a lot of nerve. But the reviews are the best thing to recover. I will upload the next chappie at the weekend. So, if you'd like to know more, please be my guest. Ilka
Reviewer: supernatural21 (Signed) · Date: 02/04/08 05:36 PM · On: Chapter 1 (Not) An Everyday Occurence
Awesome so far...can't wait to see what happens next, and who was the person or THING in the middle of the road that caused them to crash? Can't wait for chap 2!!
Author's Response: Pleased to see I got you hooked! Thank you for reviewing. Chapter 2 will be up at the weekend. Chapter 3 is in the making. Well, I'm not gonna tell who or what that was... PATIENCE (not my strong point either;) ) Cheers, Ilka
Reviewer: Scanilla (Signed) · Date: 02/04/08 02:29 PM · On: Chapter 1 (Not) An Everyday Occurence
I know what it's like to write in English when it's not your first language. Great job, this is an interesting start!
Author's Response: Hey there, thank you for the encouraging review. Yeah, it's tough. But at the same time very intriguing. I love it. And I love the reviews, Take care, Ilka
Reviewer: danny (Signed) · Date: 02/04/08 12:25 PM · On: Chapter 1 (Not) An Everyday Occurence
Great chapter please update soon. Danny xx
Author's Response: Hi ya, your wish is granted. Next chap up at the weekend. But so far I'm writing chapter 3, so that may be up the week after. Dunno how many there will be. Anyway, thanks for the review Ilka
Reviewer: Birdy (Signed) · Date: 02/04/08 11:27 AM · On: Chapter 1 (Not) An Everyday Occurence
Hey Ilka, This was great, a really promising start. Sick!Impala - how will Dean cope? Maybe this is his hell already? Have to say - first demon in space? Now there is a story I would love to read! Looking forward to the next chapter. Kirsty x
Author's Response: Hey Kirsty, thanks for leaving he review. I'm sorry but I don't do sci-fi. Maybe you'll pick up that particular story, huh? Be my guest ;)). I can tell you, this isn't hell, yet. Then again, who knows where the story goes... I DO.... and I'll tell ya... Next chapter out at weekend... Ilka
Reviewer: calUK (Signed) · Date: 02/04/08 10:57 AM · On: Chapter 1 (Not) An Everyday Occurence
Oh, now that's one hell of a beginning! Scary teaser, heart-in-my-mouth crash and the promise of a little blood and pain to come... Don't you dare leave us hangin' now, girl!
Author's Response: WOW, I feel deeply honoured. I really love your stuff. Now I'm getting a review back from you... I don't mean to flatter, I'm just honest. I'd never dare to stop now. And yeah, there'll be blood and pain... you just wait. Next chapter up at the weekend... Thx Ilka
Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 02/04/08 06:41 AM · On: Chapter 1 (Not) An Everyday Occurence
Ilka OMG! You're an author! How funky and fab is that! well done you I am so pleased for ya and how gorgeous is that banner! Looking forward to the next chapter and then the sequel and then the next story...Heehee, so much for 'I'm never gonna write'! Bev xxx
Author's Response: Oh, Bev... What can I say. I've been runnin' around grinnin' like the Cheshire Cat ;) all day. People keep eyeing me or ask if there is anything they don't know... Thank you so much for your encouragement. Have never felt this way before. I'm forever in your debt... million hugs to the best beta in the world... Ilka It's as much your story as it is mine...
Reviewer: Vanessa (Signed) · Date: 02/04/08 06:36 AM · On: Chapter 1 (Not) An Everyday Occurence
Yep--Dean's never a happy camper when his beloved Impala is hurt. An intriguing start to this story. I'm looking forward to reading more.
Author's Response: Well, then. Thank you for the review. But rest assured, the gal is gonna be up and running in no time. Or at least, that's what the mechanics said. I trust Dean to hi-jack her if they take too long... Next chap up at the weekend... Thx again, Ilka
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