Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 12/05/08 06:27 PM · On: Chapter 12 There is still time
Ilka baby! well this chapter has a great start as Dean is crumpled and battered! OK yeah perv! Don't like the doc one bit! Some docs are lovely but Harrington? I'm with Cal on this one he's a GIT! So longer chappies huh? Umm beta shine up my beta skills a bit more huh?? bev xx
Author's Response: Hey Bev. Thx for everything: ideas, fun, corrections, prezzies... you name it! Well, the doc definitely is a pain in the ass. Next chapter is gonna be even longer, as you know full well having beta-ed it yesterday! Hugs and snogs, Ilka
Reviewer: _Psych_ (Signed) · Date: 12/05/08 05:20 PM · On: Chapter 12 There is still time
sad. i love it!
Author's Response: Ah, hey there. You're a new one. Nice to meet ya. Like sad stuff? So keep reading. Will update around Wednesday with more sadness... hehe. Thanks for leavin a review, dear. Always good to hear people's ideas on my story. Cheers, Ilka/RoweenaC
Reviewer: Vanessa (Signed) · Date: 12/05/08 05:05 PM · On: Chapter 12 There is still time
Loved it! I always enjoy the medical stuff and Dean is in dire straights. Boy, that mean ol' doctor sure lit into Sam, didn't he? Grrrr. Very nice update. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: Hey Vanessa. Thanks for your review, babe. Chapter 13 is as good as ready. Will update Wednesday. Hopefully, the next and last chapter 14 will be done by then, too. Glad you liked it... Cheers, Ilka
Reviewer: calUK (Signed) · Date: 12/05/08 01:03 PM · On: Chapter 12 There is still time
LOVED IT! Not sure who i feel more sorry for, Dean, Sam, Amy or evil Dr Harrington (I know, I know, only doing his job, but still...) when Big Bro wakes up and kicks his ass for being such a git. I love the way your writing is really simple, very clean, precise story-telling, then you go and hammer us with pure poetry like 'an icy hand wrapped around Sam's rapidly beating heart' and 'a sensation of suffocation tightened his lungs as panic rose and squeezed at his heart with overpowering, relentless fists.' Beautiful! Can't wait for the next chappie...
Author's Response: Hey Cal, thanks for leaving me another most welcomed review. I'm glad you're still reading. Somehow the read counts have gone down the drain lately. Guess (PRETEND) it's because the show is on again and people get their weekly fix there. That makes me hope for the long summer... Well, as for my writing skills. I told you before (haven't I?) it's all accidental. English isn't my first language and I would write extremely drippier in German than I do now. Kinda makes me wonder if it isn't a blessing for you guys that I can't express what I want to say properly. Hugs and thanks again. Chapter 13's been sent to my betas already and 14 is currently in the making (should be the last one!). Ilka/RoweenaC
Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 05/05/08 04:52 PM · On: Chapter 11 Trappers
Ilka. OK so now you are so gonna have to go back on your meds because the freaky big giant pink cockroachy things are peeping from the back seat of the Impala again! Heehee, and be warned I've just bought me some smurf PJ's! bev xx
Author's Response: Hey sweetie. Thanks for leavin' the review. Although I would 've flewn over and clubbed you if ya hadn't... ehem. Time for my meds again... Smurf PJ's huh? Got bedcovers with all 100 smurfs on them. Can't beat that! Hugs and snogs, Ilka
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 05/05/08 04:47 PM · On: Chapter 11 Trappers
Hah, Ilka you're turning into a freaky chick, you know that right??? And what a great chapter...I'm VERY worried about Dean right now...He's falling apart, the poor boy, which is just the way I like him...hehehe Great story and fantastic cliffy...roll on next update!
Author's Response: Hey babe, thanks for the stars and the review. Me freaky? Always been, wouldn't love the show and write about it if I weren't! So right back atcha! Falling apart. Yeah, I always said I wouldn't do a deathfic concerning the boys. Other characters are fair game though! Hehe, wait and see Hugs, Ilka PS: Have fun at the Asylum... wish I could come too...
Reviewer: WICKY987 (Signed) · Date: 05/05/08 04:35 PM · On: Chapter 11 Trappers
thanks enjoying very much next please!!!!
Author's Response: Hey ya. This seems to be a day for first-timers on my story. Thanks for leavin a review and I'm glad you liked it. Have just finished the next chapter and sent it to my beta-gals. PATIENCE. I know it's tough especially with that SOB cliffhanger... Updating at Friday, promised. Cheers, Ilka
Reviewer: Vanessa (Signed) · Date: 05/05/08 06:58 AM · On: Chapter 11 Trappers
Ooohh, wonderful update! Poor Dean, you can just feel his body giving out inch by inch, second by second. Definitely looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: Hey Vanessa, nice to see you already read the update and thanks for leavin a review. This chapter was painful to write especially the long hard journey to the car. I twitched and shivered while writing, and when he fell I had to stop and take a deep breath. So it was agony not only for Dean... Cheers, Ilka
Reviewer: zuimar (Signed) · Date: 05/05/08 05:09 AM · On: Chapter 11 Trappers
Wow, what an evil cliffie! Sorry for not reviewing your earlier chapters, been a bad girl, I know. Love this story, it absolutely ROCKS! I do hope you can update soon, can't stand the agony.
Author's Response: Well hello there, always fun to have a new reviewer around. Thank you so much!! I'm thrilled to hear you like the story and at last left me a review! GREAT... Yeah, I know I left you hangin'. Sorry, too much fun. But as a reader I totally understand why you can't wait to get to the next update. I can assure you it will be up aroud friday. Have to add some scences and the I let it get beta-ed and then you'll see the continuation. Cheers, Ilka
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 28/04/08 05:37 PM · On: Chapter 10 Trapped
'The helplessness lacing those words crushed Sam's heart.' 'Dean's voice broke under the stress of regaining control.' Just beautiful, Ilka, in just a few short chapters you are turning into a fantastic wordsmith and not even in your first language!!! You have no idea how impressed I am with your vision and ability...awesome!
Author's Response: Blushing deeply. Hunny you just made my day! Those words coming from you. I feel honoured, really no kiddin. Thanks for the stars. C ya on the next update, huh? Hugs and Kisses, Ilka
Reviewer: calUK (Signed) · Date: 28/04/08 07:44 AM · On: Chapter 10 Trapped
Okay, now you're just teasing! Love the way you use a few simple, powerful words to create beautiful images, sometimes in the most unlikely places - 'Looking up, jade eyes slightly out of focus, Dean confronted his brother and nodded, slowly.' - ouch! Hurt, and the wonderful confusion of confrontation and agreement; beautiful and unexpected! Can't wait for more... Was Sam really supposed to stay where he was? Are they trapped/laying an ambush of their own? Will they save the day, or will it all come crashing down around them? Tell us more!
Author's Response: Well, Cal. Thanks for your review. As for the simple and powerful stuff, dunno it might be just 'cos if I could write like a native speaker, my chapters would be filled with desriptions and other stuff. In German, I tend to blab... Maybe you should be glad I'm not as eloquent in English, HA! Concerning your questions: come on now, where's the fun in telling all of it before the next chappie? You'll just have to wait a couple of days. It might be updated around May 1st. Cheers, Ilka
Reviewer: Vanessa (Signed) · Date: 28/04/08 07:00 AM · On: Chapter 10 Trapped
Wonderful update! Lilith inside the little girl just freaks me out--has done so since Jus in Bello. Loved some more Hurt!Dean, you describe it so believably. The line about his long eyelashes, pale eyes accentuating the dark circles was particularly nice.
Author's Response: Hey Vanessa, nice of you to drop by and leave a review. Always a pleasure to hurt our emerald-eyed hero, ani't it? Wait for chappie eleven. Even I felt sorry for him and decided he needed a rest ASAP. Hurt me while writing it, can you believe it? Guess, got a bit carried away, hehe. Lilith is a freaky little brat. Though the thought of a demon inside a little girl must be downright terrifying as soon as it comes to killing the demon with the Colt. Kill the demon, kill the host right? Will update around May 1st... Cheers, Ilka
Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 28/04/08 04:50 AM · On: Chapter 10 Trapped
Ilka heehee, me sneaking on at work to review ya! love the re-emergance of the freaky librarian, and lilith? too wierd for words but then that's kids for ya! Strange things altogether! Poor Amy, she's ain't doing so well is she? Come on boys gotta save the girl! bev xx
Author's Response: Hey hunny, don't you loose your job over my story! Thanks anyway. Lots of the early reviewers were very fond of the character. As to how I would bring her back just came to me while writing and researching on Lilith. Kids seem strange sometimes - possessed or not. Wanna come to visit me at work? 125 guniea pigs to try and exorcise... nono. Kidding, love them Hugs, Ilka
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 26/04/08 04:10 AM · On: Chapter 9 A Demon's Trap
Damn, this kid is freak city...and your really getting into your stride with your style. Beautifully descriptive - just the way I like it - and a powerfully developing plot, VERY freaky kid, weird dreams...I am just captivated by this one Ilka, keep up the great work!
Author's Response: Hm, Lilith gave me the creeps too. Thanks for the kind words on my writing. And of course or reviewing and the lovely stars. Hugs and snogs, Ilka
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 26/04/08 03:53 AM · On: Chapter 8 Reverberations
There is some great snark here Ilka, and I knew Lilith was going to make an apearance but you still have me hooked on this plot. Great update and I'm moving straight on...
Author's Response: Hey Lou-babe, nice to have ya back on. You might know that Lilith was in, but you won't know, how it's gonna play out... Hugs Ilka
Reviewer: dangermouse00 (Signed) · Date: 25/04/08 06:31 PM · On: Chapter 9 A Demon's Trap
Please update soon!!!!!! On tenterhooks with this story!!!!!!
Author's Response: Hey again, thanks for reviewing. Hold your horses, gotta keep the tension up. Hehe. No, seriously. Have done 10 and am working on 11, so PLEASE, gimme time. Glad you enjoy it... Cheers, Ilka
Reviewer: blackcatswhiskers (Signed) · Date: 25/04/08 05:02 PM · On: Chapter 9 A Demon's Trap
Great chapter, desperately looking forward to the next one. How are the boys going to rescue Amy now?
Author's Response: Hey ya, a new reviewer! GREAT. Thanks for that review. Well, I haven't written the actual rescue yet, but am very close to it. There are 2 maybe 3 more chappies at bay until you'll know the whole of it (starts in 10 already) and then story will still go on... Keep the patience and reviewing, I might be quicker than the last time. 10 is done and 11 almost done, so just gimme some more time... Cheers, Ilka
Author's Response: Uhm, just noticed, thanks for putting me in your favs alongside so many skilled writers... *blushing deeply*, Ilka/RoweenaC
Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 25/04/08 03:42 PM · On: Chapter 9 A Demon's Trap
Ilka I like the nastily playful nature of Lillith, she's a cow but she has a certain style! "And even if he managed to keep from falling on his sorry ass, how was his one good arm gonna fair against superhuman demon strength? Hell, he wouldn’t even be able to reload without Sam to help him... Crap, this was a stupid idea!" Gee I love him for his stupid ideas! Cool chappie! bev xx
Author's Response: Hunny, you are the best. Thanks for your support especially on this bitchy hapter. Couldn't have done it. Ehem, and I will stay away from M&Ms for a while, too, nasty little killer things. Cheers, Ilka
Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 24/04/08 05:40 PM · On: Chapter 8 Reverberations
ilka. gee i like being a beta-godess very cool especially in the company of my beloved Kirsty Bird! (ok so what if I can't do freaking commas!) " “You done feeling up the goods there, Sam? I know it’s a devastatingly handsome face but if ya lonely, go check out Casa Erotica!”Dean pushed his brother's overgrown hand away and shot him another irritated glance, emerald eyes blazing with impatience and fever. “What?” - like those lines! Very Dean very pissed off, very very cool! Loved the 'don't you dare call me crazy for having dreams when you're psychic' bit. Nice brother bitching! Dean's sweet in his slight embarassment over the visions. I loke my Dean vulnerable! Lovely bev xx
Author's Response: Hey ya, yeah a pissed off Dean's a must have in this story and it was fun to write. Was able to draw on my own sister bitching experiences, haha.
(sorry, Judith, if you come across these line, love ya so much!!) And vulnerable Dean is always a pleasure... Hugs Ilka
Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 24/04/08 05:31 PM · On: Chapter 7 Weaknesses and Whereabouts
Ilka "He closed his eyes briefly and pushed away the sickening memory of bony fingers scratching against his collarbone." owh freaky and gruesome! Well hun that was areal nice suture and bandaging session and thanks for letting me pass ya the scissors and sticking plaster. I enjoyed it! Bev xx
Author's Response: Hello Bev, thanks for the review. was a pleasure doing the nursing back to mere health with such a professional.... hugs and snogs Ilka
Reviewer: Birdy (Signed) · Date: 21/04/08 10:25 AM · On: Chapter 8 Reverberations
Hey Ilka, Oooh, I like being a Goddess. Does it come with a pension and a company car? I love this chapter. I like Sam's incredultiy at Dean having the visions (a bit jealous, you think?) And Dean insisting he is well enough to fight despite barely being able to stand. Stubborn boy! Mostly though, I like Sam & Dean's discomfort at having to fight a Demon in a little girl. I have 2 young daughters and I know how evil they can be, and that's without demonic possession. At least I assume it is. Maybe I should Christo them, just to be sure ... Good work, keep it coming! Kirsty xx
Author's Response: Hey Kirst, thanks for reviewing. Nope, no pension, no car, just my eternal appreciation for your PRO BONO work!! Well, jealous Sam? Dunno, sometimes Sam strikes me as being a bit jealous and selfish, maybe these ideas influenced my writing there. Stubborn and Dean are synonyms, aren't they? Yeah, children sometimes seem a bit demonic, I've got plenty of objects to study at work. I guess, it will be tough for the boys to kill Lilith on the show, too. Can't wait how Kripke and his writers are gonna do it... Anyway, season 3 is about to continue on Thursday, let's wait and see, huh? Hugs and snogs, Ilka
Reviewer: Vanessa (Signed) · Date: 20/04/08 09:09 PM · On: Chapter 8 Reverberations
Another great chapter. I'm glad to see Dean finally opening up to Sam in telling him about the dreams and stuff. I really enjoyed that last little part when they were eating and Dean suddenly knows they have to immediately get to the girl to help her.
Author's Response: Hey Vanessa, thanks for reviewing. I'm glad you liked that bit. Wasn't sure about it as Dean rarely opens up. However, if he's really freaked he usually does. So, glad that bit worked for you. About rescueing the girl, I dunno, I have a hunch that's not such a good idea! Cheers, Ilka
Reviewer: gypsywoman1 (Signed) · Date: 20/04/08 06:31 PM · On: Chapter 1 (Not) An Everyday Occurence
This is a really good story. Can't wait to see where this story goes. Great job. Tori =D
Author's Response: Hey there, thanks for the review and the stars. Nice to hear from you. Well, as to where the story goes, I can only encourage you to go on reading. I usually post a new chappie every 3 to 5 days. Chap 9 and 10 are waiting to be posted... Keep those reviews coming, they are like air to my writer's lungs (Hm sounds awful, maybe I should let my betas check on my responses too, huh?) Cheers, Ilka
Reviewer: dangermouse00 (Signed) · Date: 17/04/08 02:41 PM · On: Chapter 7 Weaknesses and Whereabouts
Aww come on! Don't leave me hangin here, i need to know the next bit! Great writing, desperate to read more!!!!!!
Author's Response: Hey, thanks for the review. Don't worry, will post the next chapter on Saturday. Already written, jus having it betaed now. Hang in there... I usually post every 3 to 5 days at the mo.... Cheers, Ilka
Reviewer: calUK (Signed) · Date: 17/04/08 04:39 AM · On: Chapter 7 Weaknesses and Whereabouts
Yikes! The BIG bad's in town, and it looks like things are about to get really fun for the boys. Or us, at any rate... Love a bit of blood 'n angst, and you write them both so well. Really liked the formatting you used in Dean/Amy's dreams, it made it really easy to read a situation that often gets a little confusing... Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Glad you liked the formatting, came to me while editing, and, yeah it was to underline the confusion... Ehem, still haven't gotten around to do your reviews, SORRY!! Hugs and thx the review. Always a pleasure reading and responding.... Ilka
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