Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 17/11/09 08:26 PM · On: Chapter 5 Hurt Again
Oooohh! Very action-packed! It had a touch of comedy with Dean fighting an old lady. I felt Dean's pain when his hand was crushed. Ouch!
Author's Response: Hun, I feel so honored. Now you're even going back to Links. However, I noticed over the months that it needed re-editing. I've done that and posted the versions to ff.net (under the same penname as here) and it can be found on calUK's and my community on LJ (here: http://community.livejournal.com/winchester_hell/ ) So if you care for a little more evolved and less mistake ridden version you might just wanna stick to ffnet or the community. If you dont just be my guest on the next 10 chappies.... Lots of hurtDean and angstySam... Enjoy and thanks again! Ilka
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 17/11/09 08:17 PM · On: Chapter 4 Old Fashioned Research
Great chapter! I like when writers let readers know what's happening to both Winchesters.
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 17/11/09 08:09 PM · On: Chapter 3 A Psychic's Mind
Yay, another clue about the little girl! Each chapter answers part of one question but brings up several more questions that need answers. Like, where's Dean?
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 17/11/09 07:57 PM · On: Chapter 2 Seen and Foreseen
Sorry it's taken me so long to get back to your story. I forgot the name and had to do some searching. Fabulous second chapter! I'm intrigued that Sam is having visions once again. I wonder how the girl Sam sees is connected tot he woman Dean sees. I'll just have to read on to find out.
Reviewer: calUK (Signed) · Date: 13/07/08 05:15 PM · On: Chapter 15 Saviour of the Unjustly Suffering
I know I'm a little late, but START NOW!!!!!!!! Okay? And as for this one - scary, and somehow you just knew poor Amy wasn't going to make it, read that last chapter waiting to see the look in Dean's eyes when he realised what had happened - though the way you wrote it was amazing - enough to tell us what happened without using a sledgehammer to drive the point home. He was crying silently, face averted, shadowed by the half-light around him - that is probably one of the most beautiful things I've ever read. So I'll leave it there, since I'm gonna drown the keyboard in a minute.
Author's Response: OH? I made you cry? REALLY?
Never happened to me before the memorable toy thing. But on Links? Nobody cried (apart from myself that is...) Well, I have started something that might turn out to be the sequel. But it doesn't feel right so far. Might have to do another. Thanks for reviewing Cal. And I am so counting the days until Halloween. Hugs and here - have a tissue. Ilka
Reviewer: calUK (Signed) · Date: 13/07/08 05:01 PM · On: Chapter 14 To Die Would Be An Awfully Big Adventure
Wow - you ain't pulling any punches are ya? Beautiful - fire burning around her like petals of a rose, and a myriad of stars exploding in front of his tear blurred eyes A touch of humour to give us a break - Murphy's Law. If things wer bad, you could count on them to turn evil if the Winchester's were involved. - loved that - so true! And oh the hurt and the drama - ain't gonna quote this, cuase that entire last paragraph just blew me away and I can't pick anything out! say again - Wow - and onto the next - and last! chappie...
Author's Response: And again. You picked the best parts to quote. The rose bit was a description I thought of when I first watched Home. And I really quote Murphy s law quite often. In real life. Oh, yeah. I needed some humour to brighten my spirits when I wrote it. Hope to catch you there then. Waiting for your final review. Ilka
Reviewer: calUK (Signed) · Date: 13/07/08 04:44 PM · On: Chapter 13 Picking up the Pieces
OMG - eek! Evil Doc Harrison alright, hurt and in-turmoil Dean - fantastic! Would leave more, but I promised to finish it and I don't wanna stop anyway!
Author's Response: Hey. You really seem to like it then Cal. That's cool. I only discovered while writing this chapter that I could do turmoil decently well. AND I enjoy doing it... Thanks for the review then. Will respond to the next one now... Hugs, Ilka
Reviewer: SNholic (Signed) · Date: 03/06/08 11:40 PM · On: Chapter 15 Saviour of the Unjustly Suffering
its the end???im gonna miss it!!! love the story!!
Author's Response: Hey Jane. Thanks for leaving a review. And I am glad you liked the whole story. If you're gonna miss it rest assured that there's gonna be a sequel. I only need time to start writing. So: patience! Cheers, Ilka/RoweenaC
Reviewer: zuimar (Signed) · Date: 27/05/08 11:10 AM · On: Chapter 15 Saviour of the Unjustly Suffering
Loved this story from start to finish! Really, really good! I was afraid you were going to kill Amy, too bad really. I would have liked to see her and Dean have a fling. Oh, and I'm definitely in for a sequel!
Author's Response: Hey there. Thank you for your kind words. Killing Amy wasn't my first intention, but it was Dean or her. After watching the final epi of season 3, I couldn't bear the thought of sending Dean to hell so soon. So Amy had to die. The deal will be my main theme in the sequel. So be ready for it. Yeah, Amy and Dean could have been together, but oly for one night. I don't think Dean is ready for a real relationship, what do you think? Thanks for the review, see you on the sequel. Ilka
Reviewer: Vanessa (Signed) · Date: 27/05/08 09:20 AM · On: Chapter 15 Saviour of the Unjustly Suffering
Wow--this was a good ending. But I'd like to see a sequel--at least a bit of a follow up with the aftermath--both boys seem so shattered. I was just blown away by the scenes inside Dean's head/soul. They were truly just heartbreaking. Like Amy, I just wanted to gather young Dean up in my arms and assure him he was well-loved and ultimately safe. Nice work!
Author's Response: Hey Vanessa. Always a pleasure to read your reviews. The parts about Dean as a kid and his inner battle, they were especially hurtful to write. Crushed my hard and my sight was blurred by tears most of the time. Amy... to kill her wasn't the original plan, but it turned out to be either her or Dean. So not a real question there, is there? Will start with the sequel mid-summer. Still have to do the deal-breaker, which will be the main theme. Thank you for your neverending support. You nearly reviewed every chapter. Great! Hugs, Ilka
Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 27/05/08 08:45 AM · On: Chapter 15 Saviour of the Unjustly Suffering
Brilliant ending. Would look forward to a sequel. Thanks to your imagination.
Author's Response: Hey again. 5 stars, great! My sky has just gone bright as day! Great, will start on the sequel in June/July. Need some time to work in real life for a change... hehe. Thanks for the review. Cheers, Ilka
Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 27/05/08 08:43 AM · On: Chapter 14 To Die Would Be An Awfully Big Adventure
Excellent chapter, have enjoyed your story especially as I'm a big Dean fan, love hurt Dean but not dead in hell Dean
Author's Response: Hey Maureeen. Thanks for the review. I sometimes ask myself if there are any Sam-girls out there... But I totally concur, hurt, angst, inner turmoil, eyes, body, lips DEAN IS PERFECT! Glad you like the story. First attempts are weird. And English isn't my first language. So I am really nervous about this whole writing thing... Cheers, Ilka
Reviewer: Winchester_Warriors (Signed) · Date: 27/05/08 02:13 AM · On: Chapter 1 (Not) An Everyday Occurence
Very good! There better be a sequel! Looking forward to more!
Author's Response: Ah, you guys again. Glad to see you read the multichapters too. And those stars are always welcome to join my nightly skies. Be starting in a month to write the sequel. Gimme some time please! Cheers, Ilka
Reviewer: justannanow (Signed) · Date: 27/05/08 12:14 AM · On: Chapter 15 Saviour of the Unjustly Suffering
Keep going!!! This was good and I'm looking forward to a sequel.
Author's Response: Hey Anna, Thank you for leaving a review. Good to see that there are people out there who actually read my stuff AND like it. Looks good about the sequel. But it will take time to write. Will start in June/July. Too much work to do till then. Cheers, Ilka/RoweenaC
Reviewer: tomash (Signed) · Date: 26/05/08 11:38 PM · On: Chapter 15 Saviour of the Unjustly Suffering
Awesome, love your writing. Sequel - yes please.
Author's Response: Ok. Thanks for a review. Cool. Always nice to get them. Love my writing? eehem. blushing here... About the sequel. I'm still counting the votes, so might be one. Will start writing in June or July. So, please be patient. Cheers, Ilka/RoweenaC
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 26/05/08 05:53 PM · On: Chapter 15 Saviour of the Unjustly Suffering
Gotta say Ilka, even before I read the end notes I was going to say, this is screaming out for a sequel, and even though you killed off Amy (I've forgiven you now) in the world of SPN, nothing is ever as it seems... And who knows what could happen or who could come back from the dead...hint, hint. Awesome story all together Ilka, just fantastic and I've enjoyed every moment of it... Thanks for sharing XXXLouy
Author's Response: Louy, as I just told Bev, if the majority of the readers scream for a sequel, I'll gladly oblige. Have some ideas and it will be about the deal. But I've got other stories to write too. Had some nice ideas on Saturday and already started doing one in Paddington station (20 pages, hand-written, never done that before). Sorry about Amy. But if it is Dean or Amy then there is no way I'll kill him... not yet that is... *wink* Hugs and thanks for the stars... Ilka
Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 26/05/08 05:51 PM · On: Chapter 15 Saviour of the Unjustly Suffering
Ilka. Gee, poor Dean went through the wringer in this chappie hun!I was sad to lose Amy, but she did a good thing. Liked the snarky Dean banter, and Sam's compassion and the nice closure and rounding out of the plotline. So sequel next then? Heehee. Kisses and snogs Bev xx
Author's Response: Oh, hunny. Have to say it again. This is as much your story as it is mine, 'cos if it weren't for your encouragement in the first place and your beta-skills, ideas and support, this story might have never seen the light of day at all. Concerning the sequel. Well, I've got some ideas. Will start writing in June or July. Have so many other ideas and WORK to tend to first... But if readers want it, they'll get it... Loves ya big time Ilka
Reviewer: Birdy (Signed) · Date: 24/05/08 03:17 AM · On: Chapter 14 To Die Would Be An Awfully Big Adventure
Hi Ilka, Yes the finale was evil, wasn't it? What we all need is to get hold of one of those amulets and start sending Dean our well wishes in Hell. And naughty thoughts. You know, just stuff to keep him entertained until Kripke get's him back out again... Nice chapter, m'dear. Hope you have a ball in London. Kirsty x
Author's Response: Kirsty, I wish you'd been there too. Awesome guys, great fun and a lot of inspiration for new stories... Thx for the review btw. And for the quick beta-duties on this nastily long chapter!! Ilka XXX
Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 23/05/08 12:58 PM · On: Chapter 14 To Die Would Be An Awfully Big Adventure
Ilka Glad Bobby's here aren't you? Bobby'll make it all awright, he's a good man! Liking Amy now, she's really grown as a character and the amulet connection is cool. Ohwee its a longy babe, go soak ya little fingers they must be tired..oh ya can't gotta get ya ass on the bus and get over here to Blighty! how amny hours to go now? See ya soon! Bev xx
Author's Response: My lovely Beta Bird! Thank you for reviewing and most of all for the support! It's eight o'clock right now, so 4 hours and 45 minutes till the coach leaves and I'll be in London by 8 in the morning if all goes as planned and then you'll be on the receiving end of a bear-hug rivalling Bobby's!!! Snogs Ilka
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 23/05/08 07:35 AM · On: Chapter 14 To Die Would Be An Awfully Big Adventure
OMG, first dimples and now quivering chin?? You are soooo turning me into a Sammy girl..stop at once. I do love all the detail about the amulet, you've come up with a really compelling plot line for this story and I love every word. Awesome mate. Roll on next chapter, can't wait for the finale! XX Louy
Author's Response: Hey Louy, thx for the stars and the review. Turning you into a Sam girl, am I? All on purpose, my friend. So I can have DEAN for myself (*vicious grin*). Amulet kept bugging me from first episode. And I loved the idea on the Virtual Season, so it had to be in my first ever story... OWH, I'm so excited about tomorrow!! Hugs, Ilka
Reviewer: Vanessa (Signed) · Date: 21/05/08 06:17 PM · On: Chapter 14 To Die Would Be An Awfully Big Adventure
Wow--that was an amazingly intense, and wonderful, chapter! I loved every bit of it. And, dammit, Sam's chin quivering does me in every time and my own eyes filled with tears. Terrific update and I can't wait for the next--and last--chapter.
Author's Response: Hey Vanessa Glad you like it. This and the final chap used to be one (very long) chapter. So I split them up. Update will be Monday, so make sure you'll read it.... And the chin, yeah, guess thats what does Dean in every time... Too sad, sad Sam... Cheers, Ilka
Reviewer: Vanessa (Signed) · Date: 16/05/08 05:13 PM · On: Chapter 13 Picking up the Pieces
Fantastic update! All of it was wonderful, but I really liked the little part from Dean's POV and how he felt Sam's presence and it anchors him. It's everything you'd want from our lovely boys.
Author's Response: Hey Vanessa. Thank s for leaving a review. And still glad you're reading... Yeah the dream bit was best part wasn't it? and after the finale, I kinda hope something like the anchor is there for Dean, where ever he may be... Hugs, Ilka
Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 16/05/08 03:44 PM · On: Chapter 13 Picking up the Pieces
Hey Hunny Wow what a longy!! you all tuckered out i bet!! Nice characters but the doc is a beast and if i were Sam i'd have bopped him on the nose early on! Nice chapter hun more soon huh?? bev xx
Author's Response: Hey bev, thanks for the review. Yeah the doc is in for some punches, if Dean ever wakes up. Sam is just too polite sometimes. How the show and my story correlate, huh? Dean in comatose state, trapped and alone. Chapter isn't done yet, might get it done till Friday next week... Hugs, Ilka
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 16/05/08 01:30 PM · On: Chapter 13 Picking up the Pieces
This line was fantastic...'Dean sensed his panic abating a little and gratefully wrapped his whole essence around the small amount of contact to reality. The mental uproar settled down slowly and Dean let himself float again,... ...yet never too far from his anchor.' How true is that - never too far away from his anchor. And this...'Sam forced a smile that did not quite reach to his dimples.' Damn those dimples, and I'm meant to be a Dean girl...lol Great update Ilka and I can't wait to see what the deal is with the amulet , Thank goodness that Bobby knows everything, that's all I can say..lol Update soon XXX Louy
Author's Response: Hey, babe. Thanks for R&R and the lovely stars. Liked the dream sequence? was difficult, but it's my favouriite part of the story so far. Dunno when updates ready. Gotta work for dad and prepare for London. First time posted without next chappie done... and it's gonna be a long one... Ilka xxxx
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 13/05/08 09:52 AM · On: Chapter 12 There is still time
Wow, Dean and hospitals, hospitals and Dean...they just go so well together in fiction don't they...lol Loved your descriptions in this one and the bond you've written into the brothers characters is just beautifull, but I have to say I think Sam would be on solid ground if he wanted to sue that Dr Harrington, I certainly wanted to strangle him for the way he was treating the relative of a sick patient. Hope you have something nasty planned for him..lol Great update my friend. XX Louy
Author's Response: Hey babe! Thanks for the review and the lovely stars! Yeah the doc. He's just nasty! I can assure you Sam's gonna "talk" to him. And if Dean awakes again (not telling! Not saying, hehe) he will throw some punches... no doubt about that. By the way. I LOVE your sequel already... Cheers (and thanks for the necklace!) Ilka
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