Supernaturalville
Reviewer: mustang (Signed) · Date: 04/06/08 03:53 AM · On: Chapter 4

Great Story, Please post more soon..Thanks

Reviewer: mustang (Signed) · Date: 04/06/08 03:29 AM · On: Time Flies

agent Hendrickson is one of my favorite chars, besides Dean..lol..nice story

Reviewer: PropGal (Signed) · Date: 20/05/08 06:39 PM · On: Chapter 4

oooooh....that's not good.  lol. 

Reviewer: Hunter4Life (Signed) · Date: 13/05/08 07:02 PM · On: Chapter 4

omg what got Dean this time update soon =-b

Reviewer: Winchester07 (Signed) · Date: 13/05/08 05:49 PM · On: Time Flies

I like this. Good transitions and your english is very good.

Reviewer: Winchester07 (Signed) · Date: 13/05/08 05:34 PM · On: Chapter 1

Well, I don't think its Rubbish. Nice job. I'm sure if you thought it was so bad you wouldn't of submitted it.

Reviewer: alena (Signed) · Date: 13/05/08 03:36 PM · On: Chapter 4

Hi, I haven't reviewed in a while, but I'm still enjoying your story. I really want to know what's been going on- looking forward to the next chapter

Author's Response: thanks for the review

Reviewer: Hunter4Life (Signed) · Date: 28/04/08 05:56 PM · On: Trumptintion

Oh no! What happened 2 Dean? Update soon! =-b

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 27/04/08 12:15 PM · On: Trumptintion

that was great,i'l be waiting for more.

Reviewer: Rosilee (Signed) · Date: 27/04/08 06:12 AM · On: Trumptintion

wow! well done!! i'm dying for more so please keep it up!!

Reviewer: PropGal (Signed) · Date: 26/04/08 09:53 PM · On: Trumptintion

multiple accounts?  scandalous suggestion! haha.  loved the new chapter.  give me more!

Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 26/04/08 08:16 PM · On: Trumptintion

Great chapter, I;m only saying this because I want more but there a bit short. PLEASE WRITE MORE SOON!!!!

Reviewer: dangermouse00 (Signed) · Date: 26/04/08 06:53 PM · On: Trumptintion

Ooooooh i like where this is going!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 11/04/08 03:41 PM · On: Time Flies

i enjoyed this chapter,i'd like to find out what's going on.

Reviewer: Rosilee (Signed) · Date: 10/04/08 04:53 AM · On: Time Flies

i'm so glad you carried on with this story!! Sam's puppy dog eyes really do work!! :) i really didn't find this chapter all that confusing in fact it was just as good as the last chapter so keep it up!!

Author's Response: well, i found it confusing and i wrote the thing, so you must not get confused easily, thanks for the review

Reviewer: PropGal (Signed) · Date: 09/04/08 11:48 PM · On: Time Flies

huh. (smirking) you're not insistent at all, are you?  just read the first two chapters and i want more.  it's a good set-up. i can't wait for the rest to play out

Author's Response: no i am not inistent at all, you are right *NODs with strange smile on face*

Reviewer: Swellison (Signed) · Date: 09/04/08 11:18 PM · On: Time Flies

Well, I admire your grit in tackling a complex plot with alternating timelines as a first story. I'm not sure where you're going from here. Your birthday may be Feb. 19th, but Dean's is January 24th (if you want to research it, the ep is The Benders) and if you wrote that the boys were celebrating Dean's birthday, then it needs to be the right date.

Ah, and you've got some Britspeak left in this chapter - "he would so be taking the piss out of him".



Author's Response: ok i changed the birthday, thanks and the britspeak lolz, 

Reviewer: Hunter4Life (Signed) · Date: 09/04/08 08:54 PM · On: Time Flies

Good chapter! I always thought Henricksen viewed the boys as cult members. =-b

Reviewer: alena (Signed) · Date: 31/03/08 03:38 PM · On: Chapter 1

I don't think you should be worried- this is a good start and certainly pulled me in. I'd love to know where this is going. you've said this isn't a deathfic, but what have you done to poor Sam! I liked the little flashbacks teasing out the backstory

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 31/03/08 11:09 AM · On: Chapter 1

please,will you stop worrying,i think this is a great first chapter,you've got me hooked.

Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 31/03/08 08:53 AM · On: Chapter 1

I don't know that your comments are justified. I enjoyed it as far as it went, would have loved it to be longer, Please write more,  you can't leave us hanging like this.

Reviewer: Rosilee (Signed) · Date: 31/03/08 03:19 AM · On: Chapter 1

how can you say that stuff about this story??? its so brilliant!! i absolutley love it!! i am dying to know what happens next!! don't you dare stop there because i'm adding it to my favorites!! i LOVE this story!! i have read tonnes of stories in this site and i have to say no first chapter has captured my interest like this one!!!

please *borrows puppy dog eyes from sam* please, keep writing!!

Reviewer: Hunter4Life (Signed) · Date: 30/03/08 09:09 PM · On: Chapter 1

Keep it up. More chapters please! =-b

Reviewer: bambers2 (Signed) · Date: 30/03/08 09:03 PM · On: Chapter 1

Beth, I have to say that i think this story is very good so far, so stop worrying!! you have me very intrigued as to what happened and why Sam is supposedly dead...awesome job!! Keep going, looking forward to reading more!! bambers;)

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