Reviewer: badaiwind (Signed)
12/04/08 05:10 AM · On:
Author's Response: Thank you.
Reviewer: buttercup (Signed)
01/04/08 09:23 AM · On:
Great fic, even more so as its your first.
It was a really enjoyable read.
A v. small piece of advice though. In the future, try splitting the fic into chapters of 2,000 to 3,500 words approx, as it makes it much easier to read than one long block of text.
other than that - FAB!!
hope you write more soon xx
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad that you really enjoyed the story! In the future, I will try to break long stories, into chapters. Since this was my first fanfic and also my first attempt at posting a story, I really had no idea what I was doing. But, now that I'm an experienced writer, I will create chapters, in my longer stories, ;) I appreciate you taking the time to leave a comment and am grateful for the advice.
Reviewer: Winchester_Warriors (Signed)
27/03/08 11:55 PM · On:
I really loved it! You seem to have the same problem I have when I write longer stories--get the basics down and let the reader fill in the gaps. ;) No worries though. Well done and we'll look forward to more!
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it. What "gaps" did I leave? I tried to cover everything; but as I saw how long the story became, I feared that I was getting too wordy and tried to focus on the main points. Please let me know what I can do to avoid leaving gaps. Since I may be writing more fanfic, I would like to avoid making the same mistake twice. I appreciate you taking the time to leave a review.
Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed)
27/03/08 07:31 PM · On:
Cool story. It was a bit choppy in places, but I love the idea. You did great! I hope to read more of your stories soon! :0)
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing it. What areas were choppy? Since this is my first fanfic, I want to learn from my mistakes. I'm glad there's no pressure on me to write more. LOL. I had thought that I would write only one story. But, I will admit that it was kinda fun, and I may land up writing some more. Thanks again for reviewing it and please let me know what areas that I need to improve.
Reviewer: justannanow (Signed)
27/03/08 05:17 PM · On:
Wow, for a first fanfic, this was impressive. LOL, even for a 2nd, 3rd fanfic this is impressive. Good job!
Author's Response: **blushing and jumping for joy** Thank you so much! My first fanfic and you're my first review. I'm glad you liked it. I worked really hard at this and am happy that, despite it being my first attempt at fanfic, it didn't come across as being raw and inexperienced. Thank you again, for reviewing it.