Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 04/03/10 12:41 PM · On: Chapter 7
I just finished re-reading this and was struck by how much I wish that Dean and Sam could visit Emily and Sally again and soak up some of that comfort. I'd love to see what Cas made of them and vice versa! I just love these characters and would love to see more of them.... also? The monster in this was sooooo creepy.... and the spell it was able to cast over Dean -- perfect.....
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 14/02/09 06:44 PM · On: Chapter 6
Your wording is terifying. I'm telling you and thank you for being nice with SAMs' current condition. Its your imagery of words that terrify me, and I can't stop reading it; because it will bother me. Its very hypnotizing. The establishe way you imagely placed the cat with the keys to that safe haven house on Deans lap was amazing.
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 13/02/09 01:28 PM · On: Chapter 5
I am glad to have you been so nice to establish the ol' girl to them. The insanity of structure to the imagenary brain of yours. I am now established to tranquility and anceny.
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 13/02/09 12:24 PM · On: Chapter 4
Clever boy he is and very intens imagery. I feel that the kid may have been from RESIDENT EVIL SPAWN!!!!! Your imagery is to intense, but its worth it.
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 13/02/09 11:32 AM · On: Chapter 3
This this is to scary and even like most scary films and I don't know if I should stop or read something else. I can trully feal the adgetation on Dean shoulder and mind. His Iagery of the accedent is still playing in his head and its even makeing me sick. man your imagery is to strong even for me. I feel like passing out. Now that has never happend before. Its like your hypntizing structure of the words to this stotry is doing something. I'm not sure if its because I'm pulling almost a 48 hrs. shift or not but i doought that. thanks, but where is sam and that god forbbind bastered of a demon and runt! I even have uncontrollable shivers.
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 13/02/09 10:57 AM · On: Chapter 2
Holy crap, how can anything just be so pieceful and then be shattered by a creepy child. The image made me feel like viewing once again Pirets Of The Carabiean - Dave Jones Locker. What a concept I do hope the boys are okay just visualizing the extremites of Sam in high shock and Dean worried and Frightened. Are you sure you are by any chance related to Dean Koontz or Stephen King. 'Cause that image scared the living and awakening of the dead.
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 13/02/09 07:40 AM · On: Chapter 1
I can image myself there and relaxing. Imagening where to take my future in art of course. I'm not sure if that was what your reader should feel or say about your piece of literauture art. I feel so at piece in this setting that nothing can courupt it. I do sense that thier is another entity, but not one cat two. and a feel that something is going to happen. I usually don't feel like that about just any modern stories unless it hits me vithin a great vilocity. Its the imagery of worried, scared, and nause. I don't know why!! I feel that the story its just feeling that I can't express. GOOD VACATION THAT IS WHAT I NEED.!!!!
Reviewer: mtee (Signed) · Date: 15/04/08 02:49 PM · On: Chapter 7
Such a good story. Intense and sweet and satisfying. Thank you so much!
Author's Response: Thank you! The next is called Justice--hoping to start posting it soon--
Reviewer: rbliss1969 (Signed) · Date: 15/04/08 02:12 AM · On: Chapter 7
Mal, excellent story. creepy evil little dude; loved how you had it calling Dean's name. can see how Dean would be drawn to help it especially if he felt it was Sam. loved Sally and Emily both strong woman liked how you had Dean and Sam getting close to them. Bobby great as well, renee
Author's Response: Thank you very much. I love writing--never really felt the urge to until I discovered this tantalizing thing called Fanfic.
Reviewer: blackcatswhiskers (Signed) · Date: 12/04/08 04:23 PM · On: Chapter 7
lovely story, look forward to the next one
Author's Response: I appreciate your review. So fun--this writing fanfic thing--even more so knowing people are reading and enjoying it.
Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 12/04/08 01:21 PM · On: Chapter 7
Nice ending! And I was able to enjoy it because I know there is more to come. You will have to bring Dean and Sam back to Sally and Emily at some point... Loved Dean painting the house. So sad that he would be the one to reach out to the spirit - sad but true as they say.... Kids are always his weak spot! I'll be looking out for the next installment!
Author's Response: Thanks! Next in the series is called Justice---soon.
Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 12/04/08 12:48 PM · On: Chapter 6
Great action-packed chapter! Have I mentioned how much I love Bobby. Loving Brown cat to the rescue - and sucking blood off its fingers? Seriously creepy monster!!!
Author's Response: Thanks again, Iam.
Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 06/04/08 07:36 PM · On: Chapter 5
I'm really, really enjoying this! So cool to have David and Bobby back! I LOVE that you had Bobby bring the Impala back to Dean.... Very cool creature - can't wait to see what happens when they try to get rid of it. I'm thinking that Dean and Bobby are going to have a very hard time ditching Sam...
Author's Response: Thanks! Can't separate Dean from his baby for too long--that'd be cruel.....
Reviewer: danrac1066 (Signed) · Date: 06/04/08 05:44 PM · On: Chapter 5
I'm enjoying this - not sure how they're gonna ditch Sam for that hunt, but at least Dean's got his car, right? Nice chapter and looking forward to more
Author's Response: Thanks--it was almost going to be a beat up gremlin--but I thought the Impala should return....
Reviewer: heather03nmg (Signed) · Date: 06/04/08 05:22 PM · On: Chapter 5
Have I told you lately that I love you. I love your stories, each chapter is better than the last. And normally I hate outside characters but so far all of yours have rocked. Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thanks! --feel free to keep telling me, LOL
Reviewer: Vanessa (Signed) · Date: 03/04/08 06:38 AM · On: Chapter 4
Oooohhh, nice update! Had all the fulfilling little elements to it. When that creature demon boy thingy's mouth curled into a bloody rictus and he whispered Dean's name....very creepy. Love the foreboding.
Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 02/04/08 11:49 PM · On: Chapter 4
That was bloody brilliant! I was on the edge of my seat for almost the entire chapter! I LOVE that cat!!! That is one freaky demon-child.... Can't wait to see Bobby and David again! Thanks for that! And it was kind of you to let Dean be unconscious for the second flight.... Anxiously awaiting your next chapter.... Yeah - we're never satisfied....
Reviewer: ReccaF (Signed) · Date: 01/04/08 03:43 PM · On: Chapter 3
This is great!!!!! I'm hooked on this story. Leave it to the YED to mess up the boys attampt at a vacation. Who's this creepy Lucas???? he needs to leave Sam alone. Horray for Emily and Sally- these are 2 tough ladies- I think they could be a force to recone with Come on Bobby- drive faster -Sam's in deep dew!!!!! AWESOME story!!!!!visually overflowing and suspense filled!!! MORE PLEASE!!!!!! BRAVO!!!!!
Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 01/04/08 11:50 AM · On: Chapter 3
I've been checking and checking to see if you'd updated, so I was VERY happy to see this! Another awesome chapter (with some lovely Dean whump thrown it...). Interesting tactic from old yellow eyes. Who is the creepy kid? Hope Sam has something hidden up his sleeve to protect himself! Just know that as soon as Dean can more or less stand, he's going to want to be off after Sam - this is going to be killing him - hope Bobby gets there fast!
Reviewer: jp123 (Signed) · Date: 01/04/08 10:23 AM · On: Chapter 3
Awsome update, Thank you so much
Reviewer: Laura_jai (Signed) · Date: 01/04/08 10:20 AM · On: Chapter 3
Greay chapter AND HURT DEAN YAY! can't wait for more xxxxx
Reviewer: Vanessa (Signed) · Date: 01/04/08 08:31 AM · On: Chapter 3
Oooh I just loved this chapter! Yep, I'm a hurt!Dean junkie. But I love Sam torment as well--almost as much as I love protective!Sam and awesome little brother Sam taking care of hurt big brother Dean. Boy, that Lukas-monster thing--very creepy. Can't wait for the next update.
Reviewer: blackcatswhiskers (Signed) · Date: 29/03/08 01:54 AM · On: Chapter 2
Intriguing story - looking forward to updates
Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 28/03/08 09:13 PM · On: Chapter 2
Evil, evil cliffie!! But I like it! Love the slow build you are giving this fic... Can't wait to see where all of our ghostly activity is going to lead us. I've got a nasty feeling that Dean is about to meet his gators up close and personal! Are you using word? If you are, set your document to double space and be sure to hit enter every time you want a new paragraph. That might help - I'm not an expert by any stretch of he imagination! I really don't notice the posting quirks but I bet they are driving you crazy....
Reviewer: Vanessa (Signed) · Date: 28/03/08 05:28 PM · On: Chapter 2
Oh, boy--what a cliffhanger. Can't wait to see what happens next! Hope the update comes soon.
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