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Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 14/05/08 09:13 AM · On: Chapter 2: There's A Storm Coming Pt2

wow,the deal was for all of mankind.can't wait for more of this story.

Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 10/05/08 06:30 PM · On: Chapter 2: There's A Storm Coming Pt2

Gripping chapter Kittsbud. OMG!The deal is for all mankind's soul. How three men can fight and win against demonic power. Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: Phoenix_Song778 (Signed) · Date: 07/05/08 08:37 PM · On: Chapter 2: There's A Storm Coming Pt2

Great chapter. Loved Sam's fight with the terminator.
So...the deal was for the immortal soul of all mankind eh...that's an interesting twist!

Reviewer: Tangled up in blue (Signed) · Date: 09/04/08 12:09 PM · On: Chapter Two: There’s A Storm Coming pt 1

Oh my gosh - it was the Terminator! What a cool concept! I have never put them together although they fit fantatically. Eagerly waiting the next installment!

Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 08/04/08 08:35 PM · On: Chapter Two: There’s A Storm Coming pt 1

Loved the twist with Connor. Riveting story so far, can't wait to know what'll happen next.

Reviewer: Phoenix_Song778 (Signed) · Date: 07/04/08 05:45 PM · On: Chapter Two: There’s A Storm Coming pt 1

Cool! I was wondering when we were going to meet dear ol'John! Machines possessed by demons...I'm lovin it!

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 07/04/08 04:51 PM · On: Chapter Two: There’s A Storm Coming pt 1

fantastic chapter,it's getting very exciting.

Reviewer: mtee (Signed) · Date: 07/04/08 02:25 PM · On: Chapter Two: There’s A Storm Coming pt 1

Wow - great chapter! Love it - can't wait to see where you go next.

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 05/04/08 09:17 AM · On: Chapter 1: Antebelum Part 2

wow,brilliant chapter.

Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 01/04/08 07:51 PM · On: Chapter 1: Antebelum Part 2

Gripping chapter. Not a nightmare but a vision becoming reality, so not good. So much suspense, I can't wait for more. Great work Dawn.

Reviewer: gater91 (Signed) · Date: 01/04/08 05:21 PM · On: Chapter 1: Antebelum Part 2

great job! loved it!

Reviewer: Phoenix_Song778 (Signed) · Date: 31/03/08 06:03 PM · On: Chapter 1: Antebelum Part 2

*rubs hands together gleefully* That was awesome! Can't believe that whole encounter was just a dream....although not for much longer by the looks of things. Somehow I'm thinking Hell didn't send the Terminator to collect Dean's soul...there's gotta be something else...
Oh and this line:"I had to spend the night watching your gangly butt instead of playing with hers". Best. Line. Ever. Seriously, almost sprayed my monitor with the pie I was eating when I read that!

Reviewer: Vanessa (Signed) · Date: 31/03/08 02:21 PM · On: Chapter 1: Antebelum Part 2

Freaky. You pull off the Terminator aspect quite well. Two of my favorite things in one place. By any chance, did you watch Terminator: The Sarah Conner Chronicles? Every time I watch the kid who plays John, I think of a teenaged Sam. He could sooooooo play him.

Author's Response:
We've only had a few of The Sarah Connor Chronicles here in the UK, yet, and I confess to having missed a couple. I won't knowingly cross anything in that with this story as I haven't seen enough. :)
Thankies for the reviews, folks!

Reviewer: mtee (Signed) · Date: 31/03/08 02:09 PM · On: Chapter 1: Antebelum Part 2

Wow - we get action twice!! You threw me with Sam waking up in the room.

Love it.

Reviewer: Tangled up in blue (Signed) · Date: 25/03/08 10:28 AM · On: Chapter 1 Antebellum

Fantastic start! The imagery of hell is realistic and personal to Dean, which I think hell would be. My only suggestion would be to make sure that the demon visiting Dean isn't actually the Terminator like, unless of course, that's really who he is.

Reviewer: mtee (Signed) · Date: 25/03/08 09:47 AM · On: Chapter 1 Antebellum

Well, that was an interesting first chapter. Yep, I need to read more.

Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 24/03/08 09:32 PM · On: Chapter 1 Antebellum

What a start. You got me already hooked Dawn. Cindy's death was gory like hell. I'm so looking forward for more.

Reviewer: CherryTootsiePop (Signed) · Date: 24/03/08 09:29 PM · On: Chapter 1 Antebellum

come with me if you want to live... *grins* i keep hearing arnold's voice i swear... *shakes head* anywho, very interesting more soon please :)

Reviewer: supernaturalsam (Signed) · Date: 24/03/08 08:41 PM · On: Chapter 1 Antebellum

Dude, I am so happy you finally put this up here! You'd been talking about it for days and I've been waiting patiently...okay, maybe that's a stretch of the truth...
And what a kick ass way to start it off. You certainly know how to begin with a bang (pardon the pun) and the gore was right on. I cringed, but I'm a weenie...go ahead, ask Tree...she'll confirm that for ya!
Great job and I can't wait to see where you take this!

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 24/03/08 05:15 PM · On: Chapter 1 Antebellum

wow, this is amazing,please update soon,

Reviewer: Tree66 (Signed) · Date: 24/03/08 05:13 PM · On: Chapter 1 Antebellum

The bullet had been a clean shot right to the center of Cindy’s skull – a skull that was now stuck to the wall behind Dean in several hundred tiny bloody fragments intermixed with the remains of Cindy’s obliterated brain matter and beautiful blonde hair. ----- Heeheee - You soooo get me with the gore.... I'm handing over my crown and scepter!

Author's Response: The Sammy "drill" scene is complete, you'll be pleased to hear. I've handed it off to iris for checking hahaha ;)

Reviewer: Phoenix_Song778 (Signed) · Date: 24/03/08 05:00 PM · On: Chapter 1 Antebellum

I usually don't read crossovers, but it's you, so naturally I had to read it! Very cool start! I have the distinct feeling Dean is soon to learn that demons are not the only things with red eyes. Hasta la vista baby!

Author's Response: Thankies! It's true "other" things have red eyes too, but you have to ask yourself why? Muhahaha! I'm really having fun with this, and hopefully as it eventually unfolds it will make perfect sense in the Winchester world - or I'm just a very deluded SN fan lol!

Reviewer: gater91 (Signed) · Date: 24/03/08 04:04 PM · On: Chapter 1 Antebellum

nice job! update soon please!! =)

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