Reviewer: jennie81 (Signed) · Date: 12/07/10 09:53 PM · On: Chapter 2
good story clap clap
Reviewer: Midge (Signed) · Date: 26/11/08 03:55 PM · On: Chapter 2
Whatever your original plans for this story, I think this ending works well. And its a great take on a possible outcome for Dean's deal.
Author's Response: Thank you. It did have a different ending but I really can't stand the character of Ruby. The want to just tear her apart becomes overwhelming and inappropriate at times and I need to step away. Thanks for reading and leaving a review. I really appreciate it.
Reviewer: mustang (Signed) · Date: 17/09/08 06:19 PM · On: Chapter 2
That was an awesome story..I liked your version of Dean getting out of hell..Are you still thinking about continuing with this story? Thanks for writing.
Author's Response: Thank you so much. Dante's Inferno was my inspiration. I don't plan to revisit it. Can't remember why now but I got annoyed with something and couldn't go back. Likely it was a Kripke interview, that guy can really get to me sometimes. Thanks for the review.
Reviewer: jdsreignsupreme (Signed) · Date: 04/04/08 05:56 AM · On: Chapter 1
Once again you have caused me to feel scared to death and to cry for Dean......Thank you for your love of Dean..... I don't think i could have handled anymore than what you wrote in those two chapters. You break my heart..... Vicki
Author's Response: Vicki, I do love Dean. Does it show? Kidding, I know it shows. I try to write Sam but he just come across as strongly as Dean does. Sorry I made you cry and that I broke your heart. Hopefully at the end you could see the beginnings of healing. If not I'll have to write more. Thanks for the review and for reading my story. Kim
Reviewer: Birdy (Signed) · Date: 02/04/08 10:57 AM · On: Chapter 2
Blimey, now I'm intrigued ... what have you heard from the convention? But, back to the review. You always pack a lot into your chapters, and whether it is action or more character development your writing style is equally engaging. I felt for poor Dean struggling to separate the tortures of hell from the continuing tortures of his medical predicament: helpless in his blindness and restraints and unable to fully trust the one person he had always relied on before. Thank goodness for St Bobby! Do you think 25 and 29 is too old to be officially adopted? I’m sure Dean would like that, despite his sarcastic "Will you please call me Dean, my dad’s Mr. Singer." Which I loved! But let us not forget poor Sam: Isn’t there some saying about it being worse to watch someone you love suffer than to suffer yourself? Of course, when your loved one has literally gone through hell, I’m not sure that would be accurate. Anyway, you wrote Sam’s hurt, anger, frustration and eventual epiphany very well. I agree it was a good place to end, a nice nod to the pilot and AHBL2, but it is a shame you cut this short and I hope you come back to it in the future and write the hunt for Malphas and Ruby and their subsequent ass kicking. Ruby definitely has a good slap coming for being such a manipulative bitch! And for always posing like Daphne from Scooby Doo (hip out, arms crossed.) But I digress again ... This was a thoroughly enjoyable read, as I have come to expect from you, and I look forward to following whatever you come up with next. Kirsty x
Author's Response: Kirsty I figured redeeming poor Bobby was necessary after my last story - made a lot of enemies after that one. I really do love Bobby and think that he will always be a source of comfort for Dean. Funny enough, my aunt was adopted in her 60's - a very long story involving family secrets. So I guess Bobby could adopt the boys whenever we wanted! Sam is a difficult one. Its hard to tell whether the tears or the anger will manifest. You can thank the Sam we got on Katric....she demanded to know if he REALLY had to cry again. So, angry Sam it was. He did figure it out in the end as I hope he will do in the show before too long. I had not even noticed the Daphne pose....I will never be able to look at her the same way again and I HATED looking at her before. Thank you very much for that. If I can get my head around my frustrations with the show I will continue this story and do what I'd always intended to do with Ruby and Malphas....we'll leave it alone there. Thank you so much. Your long, thoughtout reviews mean so much to me. I am so appreciative of the thought, time and effort that goes into it. Kim
Reviewer: GotTheShining (Signed) · Date: 01/04/08 09:32 PM · On: Chapter 2
Oh, that was really good. I was really into this story im so sad it ended:(
Author's Response: Sorry that I ended it before you were ready. If I get the urge I will come back to this story. Thanks for reading and for the review.
Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 01/04/08 06:33 PM · On: Chapter 2
Great story! I love your version of the deal. So much angst and trust issues. Poor Dean! You did great! ~Kayla
Author's Response: Thank you so much. Its a version of the deal that I wish they'd go with but its doubtful. Thank you for reading and for the review.
Reviewer: Silvertayl (Signed) · Date: 01/04/08 06:27 PM · On: Chapter 2
I love this, love hurt Dean, more, more, more, soon please.
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I don't know if I'll be updating this or not. Right now my muse has checked out....completely.
Reviewer: gater91 (Signed) · Date: 01/04/08 05:56 PM · On: Chapter 2
great job! loved how you used that last line... please update as soon as you can!
Author's Response: You're the only to mention the last line...shameless of me, yes? Thank you.
Reviewer: CricketBee (Signed) · Date: 01/04/08 04:07 PM · On: Chapter 2
Wow, another fantastic story by one of my favorite authors. You made my heart break for Dean, and poor, poor Sammy. The angst and the emotions were overwhelming. I'm going to have to go back and read this again a few times, just to glean every subtle nuance and flavor from your wonderful prose. But had to let you know what I was thinking after the first run-through ... *WOW* yeah, you've reduced me to single syllable words -- again. --cricket
Author's Response: You flatter me - thank you. I'm honored that you would read anything I write more than once, no greater compliment. Thank you.
Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 01/04/08 02:54 PM · On: Chapter 2
Fantastic second chapter, It was just so edge of the seat riveting, I was sorry to see it end. Please give us more.
Author's Response: Thank you so much. Given a little time to regroup I just may revisit this.
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 01/04/08 02:47 PM · On: Chapter 2
Great story! For a moment I thought maybe they'd let Azazel out, but then I remembered he was dead. Whew!
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I would never tread over dead water so no Azazel. Had to look for a new demon to play with.
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 01/04/08 11:02 AM · On: Chapter 1
Wow! Clever idea using Dante's Inferno and the hell gate. Now it's up to Bobby and Sam to help Dean cope with life again. What else do you have in store for our hero? I hope you explain why Ruby is waiting in the greaveyard. Is she waiting for her lover? or her child? a sister maybe?
Author's Response: Thank you! I thought it was rather clever myself. Then I got annoyed with things said at the convention this weekend and my creative juices dried up. I'm hoping that the new episodes will make me feel better about how the show is playing out. Maybe then I'll revist this story and tell the story I intended to tell. Thanks again.
Reviewer: Winchester_Warriors (Signed) · Date: 01/04/08 10:37 AM · On: Chapter 2
I like it! Well done!
Author's Response: Thank you! I appreciate it.
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 01/04/08 09:24 AM · On: Chapter 2
fantastic,i really enjoyed that.
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I really appreciate it.
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 01/04/08 08:59 AM · On: Chapter 2
Well, Kim, you've certainly got me thinking about the comments made at the convention...but whatever they were they clearly didn't upset your muse. Great work, exactly what I've come to expect from every story you post. Beautiful dialogue between the two brothers and Bobby is just fantastic in this. Ready to be continued if you want, but just as good as a two-parter. X Louy
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I really appreciate you reading and reviewing. It worked closing it here for me and when I'm ready I'll think about continuing it.
Reviewer: GotTheShining (Signed) · Date: 25/03/08 07:59 AM · On: Chapter 1
REVIEW REDUX--OK, the story inspired me to dream last night.....I woke up and remembered something so I went back and re-read: When Sam checks Dean's injuries in the cemetery, he said Dean's arm was broken and leg fractured so they wouldn't have been able to restrain his arms and leg to the bed. (and I am so not slamming your medical knowledge:) The restraints are crucial to the story line at this point emphasising Dean's helplessness. When Dean turned away from Sam and Sam just cried I was sniffling away right there with him. I LOVED when Dean admitted to being scared and Bobby telling him "we've got your back". Sam needed to come in at that point--Sam has probably never heard Dean say those words before.
Author's Response: Gads, I hate it when I picture something but don't manage to convey it. I'd pictured that he'd already been casted on both the arm and the foot. So, in my head - pain or no pain - they had to restrain him. I've been pretty liberal with the medical on this one just because hell-injuries are a little hard to research. My story caused you to dream? I think that has to be the biggest compliment (turn on - so impropriate but I can't help myself) that I've ever heard. Sam isn't ready to figure out how broken Dean is yet - or he'd of figured it out a long time ago. Don't worry, I haven't forgotten poor Sammy. Thanks again. I'm all aglow!
Reviewer: GotTheShining (Signed) · Date: 24/03/08 08:55 PM · On: Chapter 1
Excellent---yea, a new story. This is gonna be a good one!
Reviewer: Janger (Signed) · Date: 24/03/08 08:30 PM · On: Chapter 1
I had tears springing to my eyes all over the place here. Poor Dean, he's just so damaged, but at least he's back, I loved your solution to keeping our boy whole!! Emo/Mean/Guilty Sam, all so perfect, I loved him getting the Colt from Bela. Ruby is just the sweetest Demon going, who was the mystery demon/guide she introduced Dean to? So good to see Bobby arrive, you just know things are going to get better with him around, I loved the medical insurance as his sons, that's one huge problem out of the way. Do we get to find out about Dean's time down below? "I'm scared. I'm so scared." poor darling, he's going to need some serious putting back together..... Love the story, please update soon, you can't leave Dean tied to the bed for too long - then again - that's got my thoughts wandering!!...lol. Thanks. Jane
Author's Response: Your review inspired me to take this a bit slower that I had intended. You will find out more about what happened to Dean in hell but expect it to be a bit vague since I doubt my abilities to describe hell with any skill what so ever. You like Ruby? Sorry, despise her. Not that I'm giving any hints or anything. Don't expect things to go well in that department. I wanted to kill Bela and couldn't because she's human....Ruby may not fair so well - MAY not. Dean tied to a bed....now you've got my thoughts wandering. Thanks again. I really appreciate the time, the effort and the review.
Reviewer: Birdy (Signed) · Date: 24/03/08 04:27 PM · On: Chapter 1
Just did one of my usual longwinded reviews and then my PC ate it - Bum! Oh well, get to start again now ... I have no medical knowledge either, outside of a first aid certificate so wasn't offended. And I do love the whole premise for this. I really want Dean to get himself out of Hell, kinda like John but without the disappearing in a bright light never to be seen again part. And I would much prefer mopey drunkard Sam to emotionless killing machine Sam in the event of Dean's death. I love the way Bobby marched in and took control. Having insurance for them as his 'sons' was very fitting. And the fact he got straight away what was bothering Dean whilst Sam was too caught up in his own guilt was very true to character too. This is a fantastic start and I am looking forward to the next installment (so long as it doesn't hold up 'Choices'!) Kirsty xx ps - in response to your response to my last review of 'Choices' (if you catch my drift!) I can't take the credit there as it is birdie Bevs work that you enjoy. I have the privilige to be her beta, and agree with your sentiments entirely.
Author's Response: Now, be nice, I said stories when I meant story and I HAVE read your story and I loved it. The wildebeast were hilarious! Just peeked and I didn't review...sorry, shameful of me. I agree with you, hence my story, Dean needs to come out hell not a demon and not a ghost and Sam needs to NOT go darkside. Unfortunately, we probably won't get our wish. I like Bobby taking care of them too. And he would get it because he seems to know Dean very well - that's a back story I wish the show would cover. Thanks for reading and for the detailed and kind reviews (especially twice when the computer crashes - I usually just cry then!) My Beta is Betazoiding 'Choices' as we speak. As soon as she is done the final chapter will be up. Thanks again!
Reviewer: Barbara_GER (Signed) · Date: 24/03/08 03:58 PM · On: Chapter 1
Just awesome! I really could see Dean being so broken... – Barbara
Author's Response: Thank you so much. A big part of me hopes that we don't have to see it on the show, I like my carefree, handsome Dean. Thanks for reading and for the review!
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 24/03/08 01:25 PM · On: Chapter 1
brilliant start,i love stories with bobby in them,looking forward to more.
Author's Response: I'll try to be very fair to Bobby. Thank you so much.
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 24/03/08 04:44 AM · On: Chapter 1
Just fantastic, and a very real way of getting Dean out of hell, love the way he still thinks the whole thing is just some new way for them to torture him, and as always..thank God for Bobby, and having insurance in the name of Sam and Dean Singer just made me SMILE... Great job and roll on the next update.
Author's Response: At least I made somebody smile about Bobby, I almost got crucified after my last abuse of the poor man. I like this theory of getting Dean out of hell. It means has as much to do with his salvation as Sam - if not more. Thanks for the review. I'm working on the next chapter hopefully it won't take long.
Reviewer: CricketBee (Signed) · Date: 24/03/08 02:03 AM · On: Chapter 1
oh oh oh oh oh oh oh! goody. another new story by you. i love where this is going. so many questions! can't wait to read the rest.
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I really appreciate you always reading and reviewing! Hope I don't disappoint.
Reviewer: Katric (Signed) · Date: 23/03/08 09:15 PM · On: Chapter 1
Are there no limits to your incredible gifts? Your stories always surprise and challenge the limits of the show's premise. All the directions that the action and the emotion can go in, spread out like a vast landscape before your capable hands. This is a timeless gift that you give and my only hope is that you never stop...
Author's Response: too much fun to ever stop. Thanks, girl. What would I do without you fixing my endless mistakes?
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