Reviewer: BoojieGirl (Signed) · Date: 29/06/08 09:30 AM · On: Chapter 8
That was fast. And good too. Thanks.
Author's Response: Thanks BoojieGirl. I'm glad you liked it and I'm glad you stuck the needle in my but to move me along to write it.
Reviewer: amethyst (Signed) · Date: 28/06/08 07:57 PM · On: Chapter 8
whats with the "Bodies"? Am I missing something? Love the flashbacks. Great chapter
Author's Response: No, you're not missing something. Saving that little piece of info for chapter 9. Thanks a million and glad you live the flashbacks. I hope my take on the silent two years makes sense once it's all said and done and someday I really hope the show addresses it too.
Reviewer: GotTheShining (Signed) · Date: 28/06/08 06:50 PM · On: Chapter 8
OK, I'll admt it, I was a little bored with this story. Don't know why, maybe because it felt like it was going to be a Desperately Seeking Sammy Redux but this chapter has me sitting on the edge of my seat. I LOVE the flashback story. I kept waiting for Sam to figure out that Dean was hurt or for Dean to pass out......then just the spot of blood. Excellent! !!Keep going with the back stories!
Author's Response: Yikes! I never want to bore anyone, so thanks for the warning!! There's still a lot more flashbacks coming and the events of the flashback will dictate where the rest goes. That's about as close as the rest will get to DSS, at least I think, but you keep telling me because I really need to know. Thanks so much for the input, I do greatly appreciate it and please keep it coming.
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 28/06/08 06:00 PM · On: Chapter 8
Dean is in top emotional defense which means good writing and reading. I'm hurrying on to the next chapter.
Author's Response: That's our Dean, always hiding everything until he just can't hide it anymore! God, you gotta love it when he finally breaks, don't you.
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 28/06/08 05:35 PM · On: Chapter 7
I hoped you'd tell us about the time to which Penny keeps referring. Obviously, something has already gone wrong and it's going to get worse once Sam is involved. Can't wait!
Author's Response: I promise to explain everything by the end, and if I don't... well, just tell me I didn't. When it comes to me, doesn't every thing eventually get worse? That's just the way I like it.
Reviewer: Live1970 (Signed) · Date: 28/06/08 04:27 PM · On: Chapter 8
Correct me if I'm wrong, but Dean say not once but twice 'bodies'? I'm pretty sure that's what I read. In fact, I can go and find it if I have to. Loved the update, even if it was late in coming. Next one soon please because I really need to know where the blood is coming from (Besides the obvious)
Author's Response: I will not even try to correct you on that one and I'm pretty sure you can quote me on the whole 'bodies' issue. Guess that' just part of the mystery that I promise I will not take another entire month to reveal. As for where the blood is coming from... where do you think? Or do you mean specifically what body part?
Reviewer: supernatfem76 (Signed) · Date: 28/06/08 02:58 PM · On: Chapter 8
I was kind of offended by Dean's mentally challenged comment since my brother is mentally challenged but other than that good update.
Author's Response: I am sorry to have offended at that comment. It wasn't meant in a mean spirited way, just in a 'Dean, I'm trying to make a point' way. My apologies.
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 28/06/08 02:21 PM · On: Chapter 6
"She was a Winchester just as much as he and Sam." Loved that line! It's so true. I very much enjoy Penny! She's one wicked woman and the havoc and pain she causes id delicious. Now I wouldn't like it if Sam and Dean were to be killed or never recover from her actions, but I have faith in happy endings. She'll get hers in the end.
Author's Response: Sometimes I think she's more of a Winchester than Sam. (Ok, that's stretching it a little maybe) I think you're the first person that's said that about Penny. I'm glad someone out there doesn't totally hate her. As for the happy ending... well, we'll see about that. (It may not be too happy for Penny)
Reviewer: Vanessa (Signed) · Date: 28/06/08 01:38 PM · On: Chapter 8
Hmmm, quite the mystery you've built as to what "mistake" Dean made (in his mind anyway) resulting in him being hurt. And of course he's hiding it from Sam. Very nicely done, Helen.
Author's Response: Aw, come on Vanessa. Doesn't Dean always hide when he's hurt from Sam? I can assure you that Dean's mistake...well... let's just say it's gonna end up being a life changer. (at least in my little world it will be)
Reviewer: BoojieGirl (Signed) · Date: 26/06/08 10:38 PM · On: Chapter 7
Sorry to be a pest, but is this going to be updated soon? Just curious because I really like it and I've been dying to know what the heck is going to happen.
Author's Response: It's ok, pest away! I need the fire under my but sometimes.
Reviewer: pranami3 (Signed) · Date: 03/06/08 11:07 AM · On: Chapter 7
This is so very nice, A past story from Stanford......coool!!!! Keep it going, Its really nice to hear about Sam going on a hunt while his stay in Stanford with dean...... really exciting.
Pranami
Author's Response: Ok, where the heck have I been that I missed responding to this one? (Probably with my head up my butt, that's where!) Sorry for the delayed response and I'm happy to hear you are liking this story so far!!
Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 01/06/08 08:11 PM · On: Chapter 7
Dean came to Sam for help and Dean hid to his brother that he was in pain. What happened. I'm so hooked, I want more already. Great work Strigo.
Author's Response: When doesn't Dean hide that he's in pain? That's just Dean, right? One thing is true though, he can't show pain and ask for help at the same time. That would be way too much for him at one time...too bad it's probably going to bury him too. Ok, on that note...thanks, as always! I always love hearing how the updates make you feel!!
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 01/06/08 02:07 PM · On: Chapter 7
Falling apart would have to wait...? OMG...but in all honesty I have no problem waiting for a really good read...keep it coming mate, I want to see where this story within a story is headed...XXX Louy
Author's Response: Thanks a million Louy!! I do so appreciate your patience and that you're still sticking with this Dean whumpage fest!! Thanks again!! Helen
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 01/06/08 01:59 PM · On: Chapter 6
That rock in your yard sure is getting a lot of exposure...lol Great chapter mate, and I love that Penny isn't a one-dimensional bad guy/girl...it's almost like anything could happen with her... Anyway, moving on...XXX Louy
Author's Response: Yeah, that rock serves me well. It's got a lot of egg on it too, but no fishy smell yet, thank god. I think you're the first person to say something positive about Penny! You are so right, when she's around, all bets are off. Ok, moving on right behind you...
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 01/06/08 01:48 PM · On: Chapter 5
Interesting couple of days????? Are you kidding me? Another awesome instalment from you and you've no idea how happy I am to see a few chapters up and ready to read..lol. Moving on...XXX Louy
Author's Response: Hey Louy!! Happy to hear from you!!! Glad you're still enjoying this one!!
Reviewer: PNutMnM (Signed) · Date: 01/06/08 06:52 AM · On: Chapter 7
Awesome update! In all that though, one line stands out over all the rest...I've heard a lot about you, I thought you'd be taller. That was funny but also sweet because it shows that Sam must have boasted about his big brother to his friends. I can't wait to find out what made him stop talking about Dean entirely. Update soon, I'm biting my nails waiting impatiently. One quick question though...you Dean said six more people are dead because he missed the shot yet the newspaper report only counts five. Do we find out who the sixth is?
Author's Response: Hmm, I did say six people, didn't I? Now, you know I can't answer that question, right? Oh, and I do believe that at one time Sam did talk about his big brother. I sure hope Kripke explains that two year gap someday, I'd really love to hear it. For now though...my theory will just have to do for me.
Reviewer: elizacarp (Signed) · Date: 01/06/08 06:38 AM · On: Chapter 7
When do we get the rest? How does Dean know for sure they're after the same one? Is Sam really that stupid? Oh, the questions keep coming. Please come back and answer them soon.
Author's Response: The rest, probably Friday or Saturday...made a promise and I keep my promises (usually) Don't worry, I'll answer all those questions soon (Oh, but I can answer that second one now...YES, SAM IS THAT STUPID!!)
Reviewer: elizacarp (Signed) · Date: 01/06/08 06:35 AM · On: Chapter 6
I have to agree with everyone else on my feelings for Penny. I'd like to be the one to finish her off too. I sure hope Dean gets to do that in the end, he deserves it. That Penny is one sick being to want to hear that story from Sam just so she can enjoy his pain too...and you wonder why we all hate her.
Author's Response: Ok Liz...end of the line...forms to the left...take a number...ha ha, just kidding!! Now now, that's not the only reason she wants to hear the story, but that's for finding out later.
Reviewer: elizacarp (Signed) · Date: 01/06/08 06:32 AM · On: Chapter 5
I liked it. Poor Dean is so bad off and Sam is out of his mind. What a great combination.
Author's Response: So true...it's like chocolate and peanut butter, isn't it?
Reviewer: mymuseandi (Signed) · Date: 01/06/08 05:10 AM · On: Chapter 7
Dean's hurt isn't he???? And Sam couldn't see it?? He hasn't been bitten by the werewolf has he??? Hmm.....
Author's Response: Now why does everyone assume Dean's hurt? Can't the guy just be a little stiff after a twelve hour drive? (OK, you all know me waaaaayyyyy too well, don't you?)
Reviewer: mymuseandi (Signed) · Date: 01/06/08 04:56 AM · On: Chapter 6
LOL i think i'm one of those people who would cheerfully empty a gun into her without any guilty thoughts whatsoever.... Are you really going to make Penny stay there for the whole of their duration? i don't think i can stand it!!!!
Author's Response: I think there's a line forming to the left for the Penny assassins! Yikes, I think I'm a little scared for her. As for Penny staying for the duration...now, what do you think? Just remember, the more you can't stand her, the better it will feel in the end when she gets hers, right?
Reviewer: Little_angel_666 (Signed) · Date: 01/06/08 12:36 AM · On: Chapter 7
Loved it as usual!!! Sam kinda takes Dean for granted at times don't he. Bless him, my heart goes out to Dean. U'd think that Sam would twig that theres something fishy going on with Penny wen she said she knows what they do. Excellant as usual and i cant wait fot the next update!!!! Claire xXx
Author's Response: Thanks so much Claire!! I love to hear you love it!! You are so right, Sam does totally take Dean for granted, and damn him if he just keeps his mouth shut and let's it eat at him. Yikes...makes me wanna give him a really big hug! I think we need to cut Sam just a little slack though. All that time away has probably made him a little rusty.
Reviewer: Harlech (Signed) · Date: 01/06/08 12:23 AM · On: Chapter 7
MROE MORE MORE MORE MORE!!!!!!
Author's Response: I'm working on it...I swear!!! I swear!!! 
Reviewer: rbliss1969 (Signed) · Date: 01/06/08 12:08 AM · On: Chapter 7
Helen, great as always. Dean going on a hunt injured; not smart. Renee
Author's Response: Aww, come on now Renee, who said Dean was injured? He's just stiff, that's all *evil grin*...honest.
Reviewer: amethyst (Signed) · Date: 31/05/08 08:52 PM · On: Chapter 7
fantastic as always can't wait for the next chapter
Author's Response: Thank you, thank you! Trust me when I say, it's not going to be pretty.
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