Reviewer: Nill (Signed) · Date: 26/09/08 09:37 PM · On: Little Things
Not yet read the new chapter, but I was very pleased to see an update after you think that not there would be continuation , unfortunately as some fanfic I read and walked more than a month not there was an update , not even a line, but thanks to God, you thought about the poor addicted to fanfic, because it was what I became a junkie in fanfic. I created courage to write because my English is bad, so I am really sorry for the mistakes, but I could not stop writing, and thank you for more this new chapter. I love their fanfic.Now I go read this new chapter. Hope that the ARD's Dean is well serious. I love see the suffering and hurt Dean. he suffers more. please! I am really sorry for my English and very, very compelled by new chapter
Author's Response: Yes, this story is continuing, just been in the middle of some real life problems that make it either hard to find time to write OR make it hard to find the motivation as I don't write well under stress. But I have every intention of getting this finished! Thank you so much for reading and I'm glad to hear you are enjoying it. No worries about your English, I understood what you were saying!
Reviewer: Phoenix_Song778 (Signed) · Date: 25/09/08 09:06 PM · On: Little Things
Yay! It's here, it's here!! A great chapter and well worth the wait! I, too, am under the impression that there is more going on with Dean than meets the eye...hmmm...I'm thinking that the boys little mission to the apartment may prove to be revealing in more ways than one... As always, looking forward to seeing what's in store!
Author's Response: *hugs you* Thank you. I needed to hear that it was worth the wait! I'm just so happy people are reading after such a long dry spell. So, thanks and I hope the next chapter comes much sooner!!!
Reviewer: pranami3 (Signed) · Date: 25/09/08 11:08 AM · On: Little Things
ok this was good. So, guess, the next chapter would be all action? Well, anyways..... keep osting. A well done chapter!!!!
Pranami :)
Author's Response: Hey thanks, I'm extremely happy to hear you enjoyed this chapter. And...well, yeah, I suppose there will be some action in the next chapter...I'll make sure I make it long enough that there is. Again, I appreciate the review and thank you for reading!
Reviewer: tvbatina (Signed) · Date: 25/09/08 09:31 AM · On: Little Things
love the hurt dean. more please!
Author's Response: Your wish is my command *salutes* You do know about the new DamageDean.com website, right? Nothing be hurt dean all the time. Thank you so much for reading and leaving a review. I was really worried people wouldn't give a rip anymore. *hugs*
Reviewer: adder574 (Signed) · Date: 25/09/08 06:00 AM · On: Little Things
I wonder if Sam is right? Is something physical going on with Dean, or is it all the stress of the ghost. Whatever is happening I can't wait to find out. Loved the chapter.
Author's Response: I like that I have created some doubt in your mind about what's up with Dean. I feel so transparent sometimes, like I'm laying out too much too fast and people aren't wondering about things. Thank you so much for reading, I know its slow going right now, but I want to build up from a simmer to a boil ;) *hugs you*
Reviewer: TuckerCat (Signed) · Date: 24/09/08 02:20 PM · On: Little Things
It was worth the wait. I love this story and the way you write the brothers. I am hooked! Just waiting on you, however long it takes it will be worth it!
Author's Response: I'm relieved and gladdened that it was worth the wait. It feels good to know you like how I write the brothers because I'm very aware that everyone has their own way of presenting them. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. I needed to know people were still out there. *hugs*
Reviewer: pranami3 (Signed) · Date: 20/07/08 11:38 PM · On: Foreplay
ok well, this story was way too long and worth. Never mind, but i am not willing to wait for it to end. i did rather wait fpr every chapter to be updated even once in a month. This story keeps ketting more and more interesting....... I loved it. Also eager to know what is happening with dean and how serious is his ARD's. Also want to know who the person is in the first chapter who was doing some witchcraft or whatever the hell it was with obviously dean's photograph. And more about sam. REALLY LOVE SUPERNATURAL!!!! Good Job, keep it up and looking for more out of this story.....
Pranami :)
Author's Response: Oh awesome!!! Another review! Thank you so much. And, hey, I just sent chapter three off to be betaed! Thank you so much for reading, I really appreciate it. Sorry it took me so long to say so!
Reviewer: impalamedean1 (Signed) · Date: 18/05/08 02:07 AM · On: Foreplay
I love this story!! Thank you soo much for finally updating it!! update soon!!!
Author's Response: Well, you're welcome. I'm sorry it took me so long. :( Thank you for taking time to leave feedback...I'm happy to hear you enjoyed it :D.
Reviewer: yankeefan87 (Signed) · Date: 10/05/08 11:37 AM · On: Foreplay
i loved it!! great so far, review soon : )
Author's Response: Thank you! This has been the best day. I have so enjoyed everyone's reviews. *beams happily*
Reviewer: adder574 (Signed) · Date: 10/05/08 11:08 AM · On: Foreplay
Another great chapter. I love hurt Dean. How typical of him to rather faint than use his inhaler in front of someone. Glad Sam saw through him and made his brother use it. Poor Dean and Sam. This is so hard on both of them. Can't wait to see what happens next. Don't pull out your last hair. We your ready to post chapter three I'll be her waiting for it.
Author's Response: Yeah, I really need to keep my hair--little league is getting ready to start so there'll be lots of sitting out in the sun. Especially this year, both of my kids are playing (ugh, which means I'll be gone FOUR nights a week here pretty soon). Yeah, that's pretty funny when you look at it like that. Dean rather faint than use an inhaler--ha, ha! I love Dean so much. And, Sam knows his brother pretty well, all that sitting and staring, ya know. Thanks adder. Not only for your wonderfully kind words, but also for your double reviewing :). (((HUGS))) You SO deserve that vid I still haven't made. See? Still remember, lol!
Reviewer: Scanilla (Signed) · Date: 10/05/08 10:46 AM · On: Foreplay
What are you talking about? Of course a story that's written with obvious passion and true talent deserves us and our reviews. I'm sorry if I have been too demanding and made you feel stressed... Please keep your hair :) I'm glad Sam's not completely wrapped up in his own issues and that he's worried about Dean. Because stubborn Dean keeps going even when he shouldn't and can get himself more hurt than he already is. It's good that Sam's aware of it, so he can be there to catch Dean before the big brother falls. I'm very worried about Dean right now and felt bad for him when he got embarrassed. I'm worried about Sam too... But they'll be alright as long as they are together. You wrote all the different emotions so well and you also introduced the new characters very nicely. Lovely job!
Author's Response: I didn't know it was possible to become tongue-tied on a keyboard--but I totally don't know what to say, except thank you. Nope, you haven't been demanding--no one really has--but I know people like regular weekly to bi-weekly updates and I'm so far beyond that. Anyway, thank you for this, I enjoyed your comments, because, yeah, if Sam doesn't keep his eye on Dean it won't be a good thing...and that'll be hard considering what's distracting him is so very deeply personal for him. (((HUGS)))
Reviewer: Vanessa (Signed) · Date: 10/05/08 07:48 AM · On: Foreplay
Lovely chapter. You can just feel the tension building. I'm worried about Dean. And really about Sam too. I'm definitely looking forward to the next update.
Author's Response: Yay! Duel brother worry is a good thing ;) I really wanted to capture the conflict within Sam as well as Dean because this would be such a hard, hard thing for both for different reasons. Thanks for reading and I'm glad you enjoyed it! Also, huge thanks for reviewing :)
Reviewer: Phoenix_Song778 (Signed) · Date: 09/05/08 06:23 PM · On: Foreplay
Awesome chapter! I was really excited to see this posted! I like the idea of having Sam back with his college buddies(aside from the ones we meet in Skin)...I've always wondered how they would react to meeting Dean and vice versa. I'm also thinking that Dean's worsening condition may have something to do with the fact that he's kind of at the epicenter of this whole Jess thing... Oh yeah, that Chris guy...what a friggin jerk :) Looking foward to more!
Author's Response: Well, you and me both! I've always been fascinated with having Sam and Dean interacting with Sam's old friends. I've thought a lot about it over the few years...and I still find I'm intrigued by the idea. And, me thinks you are a very smart woman ;). Thank you for commenting...I'm beyond thrilled to get it and enjoyed reading your thoughts!
Reviewer: RoweenaC (Signed) · Date: 09/05/08 06:22 PM · On: Foreplay
Hey. GREAT. Update, finally. No, I'm not pushing or anything. Actually have been putting off writing for the last 5 days myself. Can't seem to bring myself to it. So don't worry. I'm just happy the story goes on. I feared you had binned it or something. Like the chappie. Here are some quotes to help me express my feelings and ideas: He’d nearly wrecked the Impala—with Sam in it.... How very out of character. Something really isn't right with Dean. I'm intrigued by his gift and the consequences it has on Dean's poor health and his stubbornness. Hehe, he'll feel like a psychic-geek boy himself for the time being. carried his inhaler.... These things are the devil's invention. I have asthma myself (allergy induced, though). The things are like two sides of a coin. On one hand, you're glad to have it when you need it. On the other, they sorta make you feel insecure if you can't find them if you need them. I absolutely understand why Dean doesn't wanna use it in front of anybody. I try not to myself. When I was a kid, I nearly fainted once because I wouldn't use it. Got told off by my mom. Never done that again, although I try not to use it public or shield myself when I use it. The stares you get! Oh that poor gal... Look at her. Thing is you already feel better after you used it. Takes a few breaths and you're back to normal, yet the stare don't fade as quickly. Pain in the ass... felt naked meeting his friends again—no cloak of pretense to hide behind.... He shouldn't feel naked. They are his friends for crying out loud. Nobody should be forced to pretend when around their friends. Glad Aaron is more accepting than Chris is. Although, I have a feeling that is just a first impression. You might turn that around in chapters to come. I could imagine that Chris will turn out to be the better ally in this hunt than Aaron. All just my own speculation... I'll have to wait and see. full-wattage face-beam set to stun... I love his smile. And this way of describing is really new to me. Great idea!! at the beginning of November... you had to put some November in, hadn't ya? Well, ok. It happened in November, I know. But it just fits... He wanted to take Sam and run like hell. What were they even doing here?... O Oh. Dean always trust your gut. You might not have been psychic before but you're hunches tend to be very accurate. Hurry, take Sam and leave, now! RUN! Oh, ehm. Wait. Better stay or this story will be over much too soon... Stay and let yourself get hurt and battered *drools on her bib* Sam had never seen his brother’s ears so red... hehe. Dean blushing is a rare sight. But, poor Dean. Must be worse torture than having to suffer the YED tellin' lies about his family's feelings for him. Dean slid into the passenger seat of the Impala. Something about that so wrong it made Sam want to punch something.... Awkward. Never a good sign if he does that. Hope he uses the inhaler now. Have a gasp, sweetie. No one will see ya... breathe in! The Impala is about as close to home as it gets for us.... So damn sad and true. Poor guys. *sniffles* Well that's it. I hope I'm still the first to review, hehe. Cheers Ilka/RoweenaC
Author's Response: Yep, you are the first to review!!! And, what a review! That was really cool how you did the play by play action. It was fun to see what parts affected you and why. Still, I wish you didn't feel embarrassed to use your inhaler, but I can understand why. When I see someone with one, I don't think "poor her/him" I just have more of a feeling of, "I hope they're okay" or "Wonder if they have to take those nasty steriods, too?" I have to take prednisone and the like from time to time because I have a hive problems--and I hate taking them because I always, ALWAYS gain weight. HATE that. But, they do help calm my hives down. Again, I enjoyed you're review very much, and I'm just thrilled you read/left some feedback period *smishes*. Thank you. :)
Reviewer: Scanilla (Signed) · Date: 01/05/08 05:50 PM · On: Follow Me Into the Dark
I can't believe I have missed this. One of my fav authors has started a new story and I haven't even noticed. But now I'm hooked and excited! Poor guys, it seems like they both have a hard journey ahead of them. Hopefully Dean will follow Missouri's advice and watch out for Sam and also himself. Sam can do neither if Jessica's ghost is messing with his mind. Your writing has always been worth waiting for, so don't worry about slow updates.
Author's Response: *blushes an insanely bright red* Aww, thank you. How incredibly sweet :D. I'm glad you enjoyed the first and actually, the second is off being beta'ed but she's so busy, its taking a while. I'm really thrilled to get this, though. Thank you. :) Happy New Supernatural Day!!!
Reviewer: impalamedean1 (Signed) · Date: 05/04/08 02:44 PM · On: Follow Me Into the Dark
I love this chapter, san't wait till the next one. Keep up the great work!!
Author's Response: Thank you, sweetie! That makes me feel very encouraged about the whole thing. Okay, and also a little nervous about being able to keep it up. Thank you for reading and leaving feedback :).
Reviewer: mymuseandi (Signed) · Date: 31/03/08 01:50 AM · On: Follow Me Into the Dark
I've read Wake-Up Call before, but i think it's been a while so i did a quick refresher before reading this. it's a great start to the story, and i can't wait to read more. I understood Sam's feelings regarding Jess, although i really wish he wouldn't go around poking inside Dean's head without his permission.. :)
Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you liked it and I'm still amazed that people are re-reading that beast that is WUC...hope I can make it all worth the trouble :D.
Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 30/03/08 10:40 AM · On: Follow Me Into the Dark
Great start to the sequel, hope the next chapters up soon.
Author's Response: Wow, thanks! And, me, too! I'm tired of waiting for that next chapter to show up, lol. I can't stop staring at those new Jensen promos released yesterday. Too hot. I'll do my best to drag my eyes away :).
Reviewer: Danni87 (Signed) · Date: 21/03/08 07:59 PM · On: Follow Me Into the Dark
Wow, I love the idea you have for this. Read WUC before starting this (can't remember if I left a review) and I really love the way you wrote it. Love Dean's new 'gift'. Can't wait to see where you take this hun, and how Sam's college friends will react to big brother Dean.
Author's Response: Aw, thanks Danni! I'm thrilled that you enjoyed WUC and are looking forward to this journey. I hope I didn't miss you before you gave up looking for a response. Thank you SO much for leaving feedback and I sure hope I can make this worthwhile for you :).
Reviewer: RoweenaC (Signed) · Date: 21/03/08 04:48 PM · On: Follow Me Into the Dark
HEY, there. Glad to see you've started on a sequel. Luckily, I only finished WUC today. Helluva story. Can't wait to see it continuated. I liked the idea to go on with the dream about Jessica. And I really like this new ability of Dean. Keep it up. I'd love to read the next chapter. Happy Easter, Ilka
Author's Response: Hi again, Roweena! I'm glad you aren't turned off by either Jessica or Dean's ability...I know it's not everyone's cup of tea. Thank you so much for the Happy Easter wishes and the review--appreciate both very much. Happy Post Easter to you.
Reviewer: adder574 (Signed) · Date: 21/03/08 05:01 AM · On: Follow Me Into the Dark
Since I know you love reviews, I'll leave you one here as well. Great start. Can't wait to see where you take this. I 'm also looking forward to see how Sam's college friends react to Dean.
Author's Response: Hey, Adder! Thanks, sweetie--I also look forward to seeing Sam's friends reacting to Dean. I already fear being predictable :/. But, lets get this thing on ;). Thanks, hugs, Nicole
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 20/03/08 04:16 PM · On: Follow Me Into the Dark
Nicole this is a great start, and I'm completely hooked, but then I don't think I've ever read any of your work that hasn't got me hooked from the first chapter. The whole concept of Dean seeing Jess in his head whils Sam has to sit and watch is such a great premise, I can't wait to see what you're going to do with it... ...and your writing is as beautiful as ever, every chapter is worth the wait if you ask me!
Author's Response: Hello darling! I'm so happy you liked it...I really, really want this story to be good and worthy of your faith in me :). Which, thanks, by the way. I really have to say, though, it wouldn't be nearly as good without Gaelic and Sodakey. Both ladies really, really helped me along. I so appreciate them both. Anyway, I hope you continue to enjoy it and thanks for the kind review.
Reviewer: ReccaF (Signed) · Date: 20/03/08 01:44 PM · On: Follow Me Into the Dark
This was great!!!!! Dean 's being plagued by Jess in dreams-twisted and brilliant. Sam is blinded by the thoughts of Jess-he doesn't see how wrong this is??????????? There is nothing good about her in either of their dreams....AWESOME job!!!!! This first chapter was OUTSTANDING my gutsays it's all wrong and can only lead to trouble-EXCELLENT !! BRAVO!!!!!!
Author's Response: Why thank you! I think you're the first person to tell me I'm TWISTED! I like it! Ha, ha. I'm really glad you enjoyed the first chapter and I hope I can maintain an enjoyable level of suspense. I worry I've already been too obvious with things, lol.
Reviewer: Phoenix_Song778 (Signed) · Date: 20/03/08 11:53 AM · On: Follow Me Into the Dark
Ahh, I've been waiting a long time for this and now it's here! Went back and reread "The Wake-Up Call" so that I'd be back up to speed for this one. A really wonderful start. I liked the description of the ritual...very disturbing. I'm quite curious about this whole situation with Jess...so many questions running through my mind...is it really her spirit...is she being controlled by something/someone else...is she trying to warn them of something--maybe she's telling them she's not alone... I'm looking forward to seeing how it all unfolds...
Author's Response: Wow, re-reading WUC must've been a major undertaking, lol. It's kinda long. But, thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed this. You have very insightful, great questions, btw. ;) Hope you continue to enjoy it! Hope I can keep it suspenseful enough, lol.
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