Reviewer: supernatfem76 (Signed) · Date: 22/07/08 07:14 PM · On: Chapter 10

I loved this chapter.  I loved the scene between with Sam and Dean.  The dialogue was phenomenal. I liked the cliffhanger at the end.  Please update soon.  I am really enjoying this story.

Reviewer: ReccaF (Signed) · Date: 22/07/08 12:04 PM · On: Chapter 10

OH.. come on now..... that's not fair....Robbie is shooting Sam and you leave us there??????????AWESOME writing!!!!

I REALLY hate Gordon and Robbie....where the hell is Dean?????

Suspense, angst, timing, hurt Sam-all the elements needed to drive all your readers nuts until you update!!!!!!! OUTSTANDING  job!!!

MORE PLEASE .....

BRAVO!!!!!!!!

 

Reviewer: calUK (Signed) · Date: 22/07/08 03:42 AM · On: Chapter 10

oh, you black-eyed tease! Friday had better hurry the hell up!

Reviewer: nurple_girl (Signed) · Date: 21/07/08 08:54 PM · On: Chapter 10

Yep - you're evil!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Don't keep us waiting too long, please!

Reviewer: supernatfem76 (Signed) · Date: 19/07/08 08:02 PM · On: Chapter 9

I liked the verbal sparring between Dean and Robbie.  This chapter had me on the edge of my seat from the beginning.  Excellent chapter!  

Author's Response:

Thanks supernatfem76!

I'm really glad you liked the scene with Dean and Robbie and that I have you on the edge of your seat!

Just hold on a little tighter because the next update will be up Monday night!

Reviewer: vonnie836 (Signed) · Date: 19/07/08 04:20 PM · On: Chapter 9

Great job with this one, really like this chapter. The way the boys try to protect one another is so much them. Can't wait for the next chapter to find out how Sam's attempt to get away turns out. Hugs, Vonnie 

Author's Response:

Thanks Vonnie836!

I'm really glad you liked this chapter and all I'll say about the next chapter is that it's not gonna be good for our Sammy...

Update coming on Monday night!

Reviewer: calUK (Signed) · Date: 19/07/08 01:51 AM · On: Chapter 9

Oh now that's an evil cliffie!

bad guys galore, crashing cars - at least Dean's out of jail but somehow i think it might seem like a nice place to be by the time you're done!

QUICK - next update tomorrow? Go on, ya know ya want to...!

(Think I might turn as nuts as Gordon and Robbie combined if you make us wait a week!)

Author's Response:

Thanks CalUK!

You think that's an evil cliffie, wait until you get to chapter 10...oh, did I just give a little teaser?

Update coming on Monday night!

Oh, and please don't go as nuts as those two...I don't think my fragile mind can take it after writing these two together...lol

Reviewer: supernatfem76 (Signed) · Date: 15/07/08 07:00 PM · On: Chapter 8

Thanks for the update.  I loved the scene with Dean and the two detectives, Miller and Gattis.  Robbie going to see Dean that can't be good.  Another excellent chapter!

Reviewer: HauntMe42 (Signed) · Date: 15/07/08 01:20 PM · On: Chapter 8

OOoooo Suspense....Ah i want an update now! lol. Great story

Reviewer: ReccaF (Signed) · Date: 15/07/08 08:18 AM · On: Chapter 8

OK... this is toooooooo much-Dean in jail?????????

That foul stentch that is Gordon Walker gloating on killing Peterson!!! Boy, do I hate that Man.

Now Sammy's alone and too vulnerable-I don't like this. AWESOME writing!!!!!!!!!

Robbie having the nerve to go see Dean in jail???????What's up with that??

OUTSTANDING job - suspense, terror ,psychos, vivid verbage and timing-perfect ,  just perfect.

I can't wait for Friday to come.!!!!!

MORE PLEASE!!!!!

BRAVO!!!!!

Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 14/07/08 09:21 PM · On: Chapter 8

Oh no! You are so evil for that cliffie! I can't wait until Friday for the update! It's getting really intense! I don't know if I can stand waiting a whole five days!

~Kayla

Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 13/07/08 03:47 PM · On: Chapter 7

Things don't look great for Dean and Sam. Gordon succeeded to split the brothers. Dean arrested, Sam is going to have Gordon and Robbie after him. Can't wait to know what'll happen next. Stephanie, I'm glad that you'd a great time during you vacation.

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 12/07/08 08:43 AM · On: Chapter 7

Another great update.

Looking forward to more, i can't wait to see what happens next.