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Reviewer: CdeWinter78 (Signed) · Date: 18/03/08 08:04 PM · On: Part 2

Great ending, this whole side-trip into the Vampire world was VERY funny! Love your style of writing that combines off the wall humorous descriptive, with winning dialogue and some touching moments that don't go too far into the Chick Flick zone.
Dean got the best lines here (though Drunken Sammy's comic actions were a riot - especially the whole double take thing when Dean asked for the machete!!!!), and very in character. My favorites;
"I should have known you couldn’t handle all those Leprechaun shots you were knocking back. I only wanted you to taste one not pickle yourself in the stuff.” And enjoyed Sam's use of "incy, wincy" with the cross eyed twist!!!!
Your comic timing is perfect and love the surreal slants you go off on, like the sock and sandal wearing guy and Boris admiring Sam's prowess as a green Leprechaun drinker (more than a hunter?!!!LOL). Really superb job. Thanks for the read!!!!

Author's Response:
lol - Ahhh I'm really pleased to read that you enjoyed the story. Got to fess up, I've been writing fic for around 3-4 months now (though it bloody feels like longer) but this was my first fic posted on this site. I'm still learning where fic writing is concerned and definately miss more than I hit.
This is such a great site, I'm going to try and only post my stories which I'm really happy with - save you reading any of my earlier pap. Thanks so much for the lovely review, it made my day. Liz x

Reviewer: CdeWinter78 (Signed) · Date: 18/03/08 07:45 PM · On: Part 1

Loved this - and it's only your first attempt? The confident grasp you seem to have on Sam's character, does not give this away at all! LOL at drunken prissy Sam getting snotty with the Vampire!!! Very funny - Sam's habit of pointing out the 'obviously not sooo important right now', really worked well here. The fact that he is about to be bitten and takes offense at being called a runt was priceless!
Your portrayal of Dean was right on the money too - loved this line;
" Get the hell off him, my brother look like a Slurpee to you?”
There is a sharp edge to your writing that is witty and in keeping with the shows humor. Some of your narration just had me smirking;"After a few tinkle filled seconds" and "his knife wasn’t being very trusty at that moment as Sam quickly remembered he’d left it by his bed back at the motel."
Good start - amazing how you managed to squeeze in a tender brotherly moment between the two of them, the Vampires and that bacteria filled floor!!!!LOL!

Reviewer: vonnie836 (Signed) · Date: 17/03/08 07:34 PM · On: Part 1

Really good story, loved the fun of drunk Sam and not very happy Dean. The two vampires were also nicely written and I could picture them. Nice horror comedy. Made me laugh. Hugs, Vonnie

Author's Response: Glad you liked drunk Sam and unamused Dean. Sam has got drunk on the show a couple of times now and whilst Dean's always trying to get Sam to unwind - Sam just never seems to choose the right moment. Liz x

Reviewer: buttercup (Signed) · Date: 17/03/08 04:40 PM · On: Part 2

WOW! That was a really good fic. It had just the riht feel to it, and definitely lifted my foul mood and put a big smile on my face.
You should definitely think of writing more in the future if its all as good as that.
great job =]

Author's Response: Awwww I'm chuffed it made you smile. I've a couple of other fics where I've 'tried' to inject a little humour so I'll post them soon. Liz x

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 17/03/08 02:10 PM · On: Part 2

that was great,really funny,well done.

Author's Response: Thank you very much for taking the time to review. So relieved someone else found it funny and it wasn't just a case of poor me laughing at my own jokes : ) Liz x

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