Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 12/08/09 06:24 PM · On: Chapter 15C - One Chapter Ends To A New One Beginning
Intriguing ending!
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 12/08/09 06:22 PM · On: Chapter 15B - One Chapter Ends To A New One Beginning
Cool idea to have alternate endings. I like that they definitely are brothers. I'm interested to see what illness may turn up between them.
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 12/08/09 06:12 PM · On: Chapter 15A - One Chapter Ends To A New One Beginning
You almost had me worried. I totally fell for Dean not being John and Mary's son. Good one!
Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 27/06/08 09:56 PM · On: Chapter 15C - One Chapter Ends To A New One Beginning
Not great news but at least they're half brothers. There're some tension between them now they know the truth. I'm looking forward for the sequel. Great twist, three endings and three new stories to come. Terrific work Bela.
Author's Response: Wow more 5 stars. Thank you, but its not just because they aren't full blood brothers, well i guess it is, but more to do with John and Mary. Yay, glad to know you will be coming back. Thanks. He he. You called me Bela, YAY. I only recently adopted it, and people are still calling me Belinda. lmao. Thanks for the 'terrific work'. I really enjoyed making this.
Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 27/06/08 09:47 PM · On: Chapter 15B - One Chapter Ends To A New One Beginning
How great, Dean and Sam're brothers, bad news, something wrong with their blood but what, can't wait to find out.
Author's Response: Whoot 5 stars. He He, it aint no disease i can tell you that
Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 27/06/08 09:43 PM · On: Chapter 15A - One Chapter Ends To A New One Beginning
Poor Dean and Sam, Dean has been adopted and Sam's father is not John. What's wrong with their blood, the doctor doesn't know but the doctor/demon do. Can't wait to know what'll happen next.
Author's Response: Yeah, I'm totally not one for happy endings, and in this business there never is one. I'm goingto make this epic, its like another arc of Sn. Mwahahahhaha
Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 19/06/08 10:06 PM · On: Chapter 14 - One Step Closer/The Last Stop
Great chapter. Can't wait to know what'll be the test's result.
Author's Response: Here Here. You decide the result that will dramatically change the Winchester;s results. ooooooooooh.
Reviewer: impalamedean1 (Signed) · Date: 19/06/08 05:18 PM · On: Chapter 14 - One Step Closer/The Last Stop
I realy love this story alot!! can't wait to see what happens next update soon!! oh and by the way this story deserves more than a ten!!
Author's Response: Awwww thanks that means alot. Wow that is the greatest compliment I could ever ask for. Thank you so incredibly much and Thanks a million for all the 5 stars.
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 19/06/08 03:45 PM · On: Chapter 14 - One Step Closer/The Last Stop
Two weeks! I hope that isn't in real time. I'll go crazy!
Author's Response: Lol. Does that mean you like my story lol. jk. Oh now its indefinitely lmao. jk
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 19/06/08 03:40 PM · On: Chapter 13 - Deja Vu
The Trickster got a good laugh out of that one!
Author's Response: LOL. I honestly couldn't resist. I just couldn't have this story without a gay moment. even if it was justified. lmao. Don't you just love that trickster
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 19/06/08 03:33 PM · On: Chapter 12 - Aftermath
The part about Sam finally getting to say a proper godd bye was so sad. I hadn't thought of that.
Author's Response: Wow and I don't do sad. lol jk. But didn't you just want to bug the BFG
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 19/06/08 03:24 PM · On: Chapter 11 - Plan B
I was so happy that Mary was going to meet with them, then you had to play the Nov 2nd card. Augghhhh!
Author's Response: Mwahahahahahaha. For every good moment, there's a bittersweet one.
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 19/06/08 03:17 PM · On: Chapter 10 - A Little Bit Of Convincing
When Dean began the whole 'we come in peace' bit I laughed so loud that my daughter gave me the 'should I get your meds' look. And then when Sam smack him upside the head---priceless!
Author's Response: LMAO. THANKS A MILLION. I wasn't sure that i should put that in, but this makes it so worth it and am totally glad you are getting a kick outta it. lol. damn if only i could of seen the face.
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 19/06/08 03:09 PM · On: Chapter 9 - The Meeting
Nothing like ending with a gut punching statement! Cool that the Impala door doesn't creak yet. That's a good detail.
Author's Response: Lol. Thanks. I can't even remebered what i wrote lmao. Thank you. ` grins`
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 19/06/08 03:04 PM · On: Chapter 8 - For You
We all knew that sooner or later Dean would cave to Sammy. Now it gets juicy!
Author's Response: `does the mr. Burns excellent thing.'
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 19/06/08 02:52 PM · On: Chapter 7 - Not Where I Went To Sleep
Clever chapter title. I wondered if John would be any match for his boys. Interesting to see John before he trained to be a hunter. The John we know after Azazel, wouldn't have thought twice about fighting multiple assailants.
Author's Response: Thanks. All will be revealed. I am having too much fun` slaps self` Yes Johnos an amateur haha. Thanks for the review
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 17/06/08 07:30 PM · On: Chapter 6 - Denial
Another good chapter! Did you know you don't need parents to do a familial DNA test? There will be commonalities in the structure and chemical compounds. Interesting idea that Azazel's death removed evidence of his blood in Sam.
Author's Response: Cheers. Yes, i did know, but there is a reason for why it is this way. I read somewhere that it was inconclusive of something lol, so i kinda sorta adapted it to the story and also what happens in the following chapters. Plus I not atuned to the subject and i'll go stir crazy if i reseach it too much so its kinda from my perspective. We'll just settle the case as they are prehistoric in their ways. wait that doesn't work either lmao . Yes but it may not be the case. Mwahahhaha
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 17/06/08 07:19 PM · On: Chapter 5 - When Are You Going To Realise?
I can understand Sam wanting answers, especially about their mother and his actual parentage. He and Dean are kind of in the same boat, neither being John's son. I can also understand Dean not wanting to know the truth. If you know something then you have to act on that knowledge.
Author's Response: you find of feel sad for John, that is of course if he knows that, cuz i mean first his wife then his kids not being his own you kinda pity the guy. in my impersonation of Dean's mannerism of which aren't all that good. 'Exactly' lmao. soz i couldnt resist
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 17/06/08 07:12 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Time's A Wasting
Cool trick hiding the Key of Solomon! Shouldn't they have salted and burned Annie's body?
Author's Response: Thank you Yes and no. She's not exactly vengeful spirit material, but then again they should have really done it just in case. Okay so i forgot ROFL
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 17/06/08 07:07 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Appearances
A few posters short of being a stalker---hilarious! Wow! Sam is the flesh-born son of Azazel!
Author's Response: Thank you, i kinda sorts stole it. Shhhh. lmao. hmmm kinda makes me think that when he dies he is going to be the next Azazel
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 17/06/08 07:01 PM · On: Chapter 2 - She's Not Lying, Is She?
Another good chapter! I like the way the demon tells the tale of Dean's adoption.
Author's Response: OOOOH thank you. hahah. aren't all demons a pain in the arse. maybe thats why i love them
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 17/06/08 06:47 PM · On: Chapter 1 - The Truth
Oh my heck! Dean is adopted?! Is he even Mary's child?
Author's Response: Hey, lol, GOTCHA lol, yeah okay so i opened this up and got a whole heap of reviews and im like what the hell people dont give me that many reviews. i thought it was an error but thanks for popping by
Reviewer: impalamedean1 (Signed) · Date: 14/06/08 11:02 PM · On: Chapter 13 - Deja Vu
I loved this chapter!! it was one word.......amazing!!!
Author's Response: Wow thanks. i totally couldn't resist making a gay moment. i was like should i shouldn't i, but temptation gave in and i'm so wrapped you dig it. Hahahaha.
Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 13/06/08 06:27 PM · On: Chapter 13 - Deja Vu
Dean and Sam waking up in the same bed and they're not alone in the room, awkward. They're back in present time and the trickster wants to meet them at the hospital. What the trickster is up to, I'm not so sure it's for the good of Dean and Sam. Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: I love my awkward moments. i really do, it's really bizarre. the trickster's not up to anything. thanks for reading and reviewing
Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 05/06/08 09:25 PM · On: Chapter 12 - Aftermath
Who Sam was talking on the phone, very intriguing. Can't wait to know what'll happen next, great story so far.
Author's Response: WOW WOW WOW you boosted me up to five stars. WHOOHOO. lmao. He's talking to john lmao jk he's not really. It's not overally important but it is revealed in the next chapter
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