Reviewer: vonnie836 (Signed) · Date: 14/07/08 05:35 PM · On: Finales Infelices
Really great story. It has a nice flow to it, very interesting premises and the ending isn't really happy. I like it. Wonderful description of the action scenes. It sounded so clear, I knew exactly what was going on. The mystery was great too and kept me guessing for the longest time, trying to put things together. Hugs, Vonnie
Author's Response: Thank you! That is the biggest challenge I hold for myself, gettin gthe boy's exactly right. I'm also glad you were scratching your head. Haha I even confused myself this time. Thanks again!
Reviewer: justannanow (Signed) · Date: 13/07/08 09:58 PM · On: Finales Infelices
I rarely read WIP since a lot of them are left unfinished. So I waited until you were done. Anyway, this was a really good story. Great plot, Dean and Sam were in character (unless possessed) and it read like one of the episodes. You did a really good job.
Author's Response: Yeah, let's never hope the boys get into a bitch-slap fest whilst not possessed haha. Oh wait, they did, hahahaha gotta love the fight in Tall Tales. I'm getting to the point that you're at, no longer reading WIP unless I know the author well enough to know they're going to finish. And a lot of times RL just gets in the way. I'm glad you enjoyed! And thanks for letting me know you did. :)
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 13/07/08 01:48 PM · On: Finales Infelices
Oh, what a tragic ending! I liked it, but it's still very sad.
Author's Response: I'm so glad you enjoyed it Shannon! Thank you for leaving me reviews at every chapter, letting me know the parts you enjoyed.
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 13/07/08 01:30 PM · On: Desmentido Crudo
What an exciting chapter! Those poor boys took a pummelling!
Reviewer: cheri (Signed) · Date: 13/07/08 09:52 AM · On: Finales Infelices
Loved the story but hated the ending; but I'm a happy ending type person. Great job with the dialogue between the brothers! I really enjoyed reading this!
Author's Response: As long as that's the only reason you hated the ending. I struggled with it myself, I wanted it to be an unhappy ending, but I still think something's off. Thanks for the review! The dialog is also the toughest part. :) Thanks again!! Kris
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 16/06/08 05:15 PM · On: Ataque de Sorpresa
What an evil little sock puppet! Gave me the heebie-jeebies! Thanks for explaining the doll's significance in other cultures. I enjoy learning new information about superstitions around the world.
Author's Response: I'm glad you've enjoyed! I loved my little doll...my pretty...lol I hope you enjoy the rest of the story, and thank you for leaving me a good number of reviews!! Kris
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 16/06/08 05:04 PM · On: Trastornadas
I got a kick out of Sam making fun of Dean's gut. For the sake of brotherly love, I'll take a gander at his stomach and give them my unbiased opinion. Yay! The Hell hound's Lair boys! What a crack up. I love when they pop up in a story. Although if Chad hadn't stated what a geek Harry was it would have made me wonder what kind of nerd-boy Chad is.
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 16/06/08 04:44 PM · On: Traición
I was expecting another murder but not committed by Mandy's brother. Wow! They can have his and hers jail cells. Hee! Great laugh---Rose telling Dean it was good that he was pretty because he wasn't too smart.
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 16/06/08 04:27 PM · On: Mentiras
Sorry it's taken me so long to get back to your story, but it's been on my mind---crazy mom, crazy daughter, haunted doll. Love the update! The old gossipy woman was a hoot! and Nurse Lacey, never thought Dean would back down from a free ride. I'm off to the next chapter...
Reviewer: rbliss1969 (Signed) · Date: 17/04/08 10:35 PM · On: Traición
Wow what a great first 3 chapters. everyone needs to stay out of that house! i really like Rose and how you have her talking to Dean. hope chapter 4 will be up soon. Renee
Author's Response: Why thank you Renee! I can't hlep myself, I love having poor naive innocent kids go into that house only to be slaughtered and maimed. Wow...did I really just say that? Hahaha glad you're enjoying Rose! She's one of my faves, and I'm hoping she's the grandma everyone wants haha. I hope it will be up soon as well. I'm working on it, so we'll see if I can't have it up in the next week. Thanks again! I hope you continue to enjoy!
Reviewer: CherryTootsiePop (Signed) · Date: 16/04/08 09:15 PM · On: Traición
yikes! that was just.... creepy! i do hope both brothers figure this one out before anyone gets killed again. great update! can't wait for more :)
Author's Response: Now where would the fun be i that for me? Letting innocent people get away...pssssht! Lol... I'm glad you're enjoying it!! I really wanted to up the creepy factor, and hope I don't end up going overboard. Hope you enjoy the next chapter...am currently plugging away and will have it sent to my beta soon! Thanks again. :)
Reviewer: Vanessa (Signed) · Date: 29/03/08 10:37 AM · On: Mentiras
Nice update. You've assembled quite a nice mystery. Definitely looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: Yes, this was quite the mystery to tackle. I think my mind had itself so twisted and confused before it even began haha. Hopefully I can convey it clearly enough, without losing anyone... Thank you Vanessa!!
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 11/03/08 06:53 PM · On: Sangre
Creepy and thrilling (especially the scalp sliding off and splunking onto the floor)! I luuuuuvvv it! The only thing better than a good old fashioned ghost story is a good old fashioned ghost story with the Wincesters in it! (Also love the eerie ghost girl!) I can't wait to find out what it's all about!
Author's Response: The Winchesters are like that extra sprinkle of chocolate at the top of a desert, it just wouldn't be a complete treat. So yes, here come the boys haha. I was hoping to up the creepy factor, and I think I've succeeded. So thank you! I hope you continue to enjoy. :)
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 10/03/08 01:49 PM · On: Sangre
wow, brilliant start,very exciting.really looking forward to reading more of this.
Author's Response: I am so glad you think the first part is exciting, gives my confidence a boost and stops the negative reviews of my own story. :) I hope you enjoy the next part to this!!
Reviewer: Vanessa (Signed) · Date: 10/03/08 06:26 AM · On: Sangre
Very interesting start to this story. Can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter.
Author's Response: I seem to have jumped out of the gate with success, let's just hope I can keep up the speed with the remaining laps. :) Thank you for the review and I hope you enjoy the rest!
Reviewer: adder574 (Signed) · Date: 10/03/08 05:30 AM · On: Sangre
Very good start. You have my attention. Looking forward to the next update.
Author's Response: Yes! Hook line and sinker! Sweet! *starts reeling you back in* I hope you continue to enjoy as I'm probably going to let the pressure slowly build... Thank you! :)
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 10/03/08 04:39 AM · On: Sangre
Enjoyed this chapter a lot. I always like a really good storyline and thought out plot that seems considered, and your writing style allows you to set the scene beautifully. Looking out for more of this one!
Author's Response: Well, that is what I've been aiming for, so I'm really glad I seemed to convey that! In fact, this plot is so thought out I'm starting to overthink it to death...haha. I hope you continue to enjoy! Your review made my day, so thank you!!
Reviewer: CherryTootsiePop (Signed) · Date: 10/03/08 03:21 AM · On: Sangre
very interesting =) hope you'll update soon
Author's Response: I didn't update as soon as I'd wanted to, but here it is haha. Thank you for the review! I hope you continue to enjoy as its going to get more twisted...
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