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Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 09/03/08 12:37 PM · On: Pyre of Innocence

Oh Cal!

i'm reading this with Bird, my cat, sat on my lap and now I've gone and gotten snot and tears all over him!  He's not happy Hunny and he's got sharp claws!

Nice, sad and sweet use of a very few but well chosen words.

Bev xx  (Meow from Bird)



Author's Response:

Oops, sorry Bird!

(And sorry Bev, know just how sharp feline claws can be - still got the scars to prove it!)

Thanks!

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 07/03/08 11:08 PM · On: Dark Side

Very strong!  It makes me want more.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 07/03/08 11:06 PM · On: In The Cold Eyes

That one made me shiver.  Creepy.  Good job!

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 07/03/08 11:04 PM · On: When Hell Freezes Over

When you said a happier one I wasn't expecting the first words to be, "raging flames, tearing at his skin, dying again and again."  but then it did get happy.  I love the 'when hell freezes over' line.  The whole drabble is a contradiction (hellfire and snow, torment and peace) and I love it

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 07/03/08 11:00 PM · On: The Midday Night

Great!  I love the line "just as lost alone, but it had taken far too long for him to see that."  That one line says so much.

Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 06/03/08 05:45 PM · On: The Pot of Gold at the End of the M&M'bow

Cal

Thanks a sweet one to end on so I may go to bed and sigh softly as i slip into the land of Winchester dreams!

Nice Cal!

bev xx



Author's Response: So I've sacred you, brought tears to your eyes and made you smile. My day is complete! Thanks for all the kind words, ya know just what to say...

Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 06/03/08 05:41 PM · On: Dark Side

Cal.

Oh now that one has scared me a bit.  It's very dark (like good bitter chocolate!) and oozes sadness.  You are very skilled at packing a very few words with huge splodes of terror!

bev xx

Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 06/03/08 05:06 PM · On: In The Cold Eyes

Cal.

A sonnet to the most beautiful, haunting, wonderfully heartbreaking  eyes. Nicely done!

bev x 

Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 06/03/08 05:04 PM · On: When Hell Freezes Over

cal.

F**k lollipops and candy canes when we can have sweet exquisite torture like this!

"It is the warmth of his brother’s hand in his."  This is a badass soul stealer of a last line Cal, tears Hunny!

bev xx

 

 

 

Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 06/03/08 05:00 PM · On: The Midday Night

Cal

Hey my fab freaky weirdster!  I like this it's rather haunting and puts me in mind of that final scene in ButchCassidy and The Sundance Kid, where Butch and Sundance, broken and bleeding, burst out into the hail of Bolivian gunfire.  Determined to go out side by side in a blaze of glory.

I love this bit "They stepped forward together, into the midday night." - midday night?  that's a wonderfully evocative dicotomy, both descriptively and emotionally.

Reading on Cal

Bevxx

 

Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 06/03/08 04:42 PM · On: When Hell Freezes Over

Read them all and was going to review and rate at the end...but came back to this one as it's my fav. Read it four times...beautiful!

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