Reviewer: Lbdba (Signed) · Date: 13/01/09 02:26 AM · On: Chapter 13
Hi, hope you're still out there. I've read this thru twice now, one of my favorites. Hopefully you will finish soon? I check back every once in a while.
Reviewer: Lbdba (Signed) · Date: 22/11/08 07:01 PM · On: Chapter 13
Hope everything is ok with you. Still waiting on the continuation of your wonderful stories, including I See Dead People. I check every week
Reviewer: Darkbeast (Signed) · Date: 07/09/08 01:42 PM · On: Chapter 13
I really enjoyed the pacing of this story and the attention to the details as well as a good use of dialog to move the story along.
Reviewer: mymuseandi (Signed) · Date: 04/09/08 12:05 AM · On: Chapter 13
Ok, so Dean can get out of the room, but i don't think he's free of that spirit! and knowing you, i think that there's a catch somewhere?
Reviewer: mymuseandi (Signed) · Date: 03/09/08 11:45 PM · On: Chapter 12
I feel so sorry for Sam sometimes, cuz trying to get Dean to eat when he doesn't want to can be hazardous to his health. maybe he needs a replacement for a while. I volunteer! Haha. Hopefully Bobby's fast in digging that grave.
Reviewer: marian_dnsg4l (Signed) · Date: 24/08/08 12:39 AM · On: Chapter 13
WoW! Awesome update! I love everything about this story, and you did an amazing job in this chapter! So, Dean can leave the room as long as he has the key...? Is the key part of the room somehow? And the baby... I still think he has something to do with what's happening... I'm really looking forward to seeing what happens next!
Author's Response: Thank you so much. Do you know how much I love hearing the word Awesome? You hit the nail on the head... the key's the key. As for the baby... well, you may be right there (in fact, I'd bet you are)
Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 21/08/08 05:21 PM · On: Chapter 13
Terrific update Strigo. I thought for one minute that Dr. Alice was going to call the police. Dean's condition is worsening but he left the motel room with no problem this time, intriguing. Like DEan said, time to salt and burn Jeannie's bones. I'm wondering if that'll be enought, the missing baby, maybe he's the key to end this curse. Strigo, you're doing a great job so far, can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Thanks so much Oceane. I always appreciate reading them. You're right, Dean's condition is going downhill fast and it's still a long way to the bottom, I'm afraid. Too bad for him. Honestly, do you really think just salting and burning Jeannie's bones will be enough?
Reviewer: Vanessa (Signed) · Date: 20/08/08 01:58 PM · On: Chapter 13
Fabulous as always, Helen. For a bit, I was worried what the doc was gonna do. :-) I must say I adored the ending with Dean just grabbing that key and marching out of the room--as if basically telling the ghost to kiss his a**. hehe
Author's Response: Thanks Vanessa. I wasn't exactly sure what I was going to do with Dean and the doctor. I thought about him just hiding under the bed until she was gone, but then thought that wouldn't be much fun, would it. Anyway, you are so right about Dean's attitude... it does say kiss my a$$, doesn't it?
Reviewer: TuckerCat (Signed) · Date: 20/08/08 11:22 AM · On: Chapter 13
I think you are doing a great job. I am impressed with the story. I believe the bond between the two brothers and Bobby's concern. You are giving a "real" feeling to the story. I hope to read more soon.
Author's Response: Thank you so much TuckerCat. I am happy to hear that you are impressed with the story and I'm glad you think it feels real. Thanks so much.
Reviewer: Soennelchen (Signed) · Date: 20/08/08 08:32 AM · On: Chapter 13
Great update Helen, well worth the wait! What an interesting turn of events. Aw Dean, hope he knows what he's doing... Looking froward to more :)
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I always need to hear that. As for Dean, does he ever really know what he's doing?
Reviewer: bia1007 (Signed) · Date: 20/08/08 05:54 AM · On: Chapter 13
Very frightening and tense, fantastic update!! Dean's pain and Sam's despair always evident; the way Dean used Dr. Alice's examination to elaborate his - let me guess - life-threatening mad plan, this was an ingenious turn! I'm dying to know what he's up to, still shocked about his sudden run at the end, consequences now will come thick and fast. Grand one!
Author's Response: Oh Sabine, you can say that again! (the consequences part, I mean) I almost feel sorry for poor Dean, thinking this will all be over soon. I sure am going to hate pulling the rug out from under him. (I'm really not, but it sounded good, didn't it?)
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 20/08/08 05:33 AM · On: Chapter 13
Excellent update. Can't wait to find out how Dean was able to leave the room.
Author's Response: Thanks, as always. I'm grateful to know that people are still reading!!
Reviewer: JLE (Signed) · Date: 20/08/08 04:47 AM · On: Chapter 13
It always makes my day when I see an update from you! Interesting turn of events. What's up with Dean? Is it going to get worse before it gets better? I hope so!
Author's Response: I can only hope to make your day a little faster then, and thank you for saying that! As for Dean, well... that remains to be seen but you know me, it can always get worse. (Trust me when I say though, it is probably going to get worse)
Reviewer: Smudge93 (Signed) · Date: 20/08/08 04:19 AM · On: Chapter 13
Hi, ok so what does Dean know that the rest of us don't?? Your updates are always worth the wait, you should know that. Can't wait though to see what happens next. Keep up the good work. Mary xx ps. Have I told you just how much I love the banner on this story! Brings a smile ever time I see it!!
Author's Response: What Dean knows that the rest of us don't can be a very scary concept sometimes, can't it? Ahh, just kidding. Thank you so much for saying that it's worth the wait... but I still feel terrible it takes so long sometimes. Thanks so much!! Oh... the banner, totally the word of the very talented Vanessa! I considered it a gift and can't thank her enough.
Reviewer: amethyst (Signed) · Date: 20/08/08 12:26 AM · On: Chapter 13
no apologies necessary, excellent as always.
Author's Response: Thank so much, I most definitely appreciate all the positive support!!
Reviewer: CdeWinter78 (Signed) · Date: 31/07/08 06:51 PM · On: Chapter 8
LOL!!!! Eloquent Dean's "Innie" not "Outie" phobia was hilarious!!!!! Perfect timing, I was laughing so hard at that one!!!! Like this whole blood-sucking ghost thing - I'll wait for you to enlighten me!!!!! Your story continues to rock!!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you again for the wonderful compliments and I most definitely hope the remainder of the weirdness doesn't disappoint. Thanks for reading and reviewing... it means tons!
Reviewer: CdeWinter78 (Signed) · Date: 31/07/08 06:25 PM · On: Chapter 7
It would appear that this trap is air tight then? Dean can not leave (adored the tearing flesh description of Dean's pain) nor can he stay in the room that seem (literally) too blood thirsty for his own good!!!! I do believe you ARE an evil genius, and as such I can't wait to see which "bad guy" you decided upon!!!!! Your authors note made me laugh as you have appeared to know exactly where your tale was going!!!!! Skillful stuff!!!!
Author's Response: Evil genius... that's a lot of pressure to live up to, but I'll do my best to try. Honest to god, I had three or four different baddies to choose from and it really did take me that long to pick one... guess that makes me the hormonal woman that Sam needs to bitch slap... please.(Yep, still way past my bedtime.)
Reviewer: CdeWinter78 (Signed) · Date: 31/07/08 05:43 PM · On: Chapter 6
LOL!!!! LOVED this -: "cracking me across the face like a hormonal woman? Damn Sam, talk about adding insult to injury,” Sammy bitch slapping Dean was a nice offset to Demon yellow eyed Sam, taunting his brother with his inevitable turn to the dark-side. Intrigued by the wailing Baby - what pearls of Bobby wisdom did Sam miss - so many questions .... got to move on to some answers!!!
Author's Response: Some answers to come, only I'm thinking they only create more questions. Glad to hear that you still love it, and man, I'd love to bitch slap Dean too... sounds like fun. (Yeah, it's past my bedtime)
Reviewer: Smudge93 (Signed) · Date: 31/07/08 04:22 PM · On: Chapter 12
Hi Glad you've updated I really like this story, Dean is such a bad patient isn't he? Wonder how they'll smooth their way out of this one? Mary x
Author's Response: Hi right back! You are so right about Dean and patient, they are like fire and water, arent' they? Have no fear, Sam could talk his way out of a mime convention, I think. (Randomly weird, I know) Let me just say too that I really did love your 'Play Me' story... it's one that I'll most definitely read again. Kudos!
Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 31/07/08 02:23 PM · On: Chapter 12
Excellent chapter, hope Dean gets saved soon before it's too late,. Keep them coming
Author's Response: Thanks Maureen! As you know, I really don't do the whole death fic thing, so suffice it to say, it will never be too late...though it sure is fun seeing how far I can push the envelope.
Reviewer: CdeWinter78 (Signed) · Date: 31/07/08 10:42 AM · On: Chapter 4
OMG - hallucinating Dean has some scary imagination - congratulations on a very Stephen King tilt to this story - the chapter endings have just the right amount of hook in them. Also your visual descriptions are great - tap dancing Elephants - very creative!! ;-) You have the brothers language down well too - enjoyed the argument - Dean using logic against Sam?Nice - but that Sammy is a tenacious one!!!! Enjoying the read!
Author's Response: Wow, you have no idea how much that made my day, Stephen King being my all time FAVORITE author! That was a compliment beyond belief, honestly. I am so glad you're enjoying the read so far and hope you continue to until the end. Thank you again.
Reviewer: CdeWinter78 (Signed) · Date: 31/07/08 10:30 AM · On: Chapter 3
Spitting blood - phantom voices... I'd say the only place Dean is going is the A and E ward - after you have finished playing with him of course!!!! And what the heck is with this blood guzzling room?!!!! On to find out more!!!!!
Author's Response: I am never done playing with Dean... aww, the images that conjures up!
Reviewer: CdeWinter78 (Signed) · Date: 31/07/08 10:21 AM · On: Chapter 2
You really are cranking up the Dean pain for us here - God bless you for that LOL!!!!! This continues to build into a bigger more menacing puzzle - what has happened to Dean?!!! I am not medically canny in anyway but this whole not breathing thing can't be concussion induced can it? And who's the lady with the baby - doesn't she realize there is a designated queue for those of us waiting to "Welcome" Dean home?!!! Lol. On a serious not though - the tone and tension of your piece is magnetic and so well timed - loving this - I may miss a review or two in my dash to the next chapter though!!!! Great Work!
Author's Response: Hey, as for that queue, I'm first in line! (and my gun says so, lol)... and as for the Dean pain, the more the merrier, that's what I say. Honest to god, I don't mind if you miss a review as long as you keep reading and enjoying!
Reviewer: CdeWinter78 (Signed) · Date: 31/07/08 09:59 AM · On: Chapter 1
Absorbing blood and Dean admitting he is in pain? Does not bode well for the boys does it? Liked your beginning - innocent everyday occurrence - stopping at a dive motel about to be morphed by Winchester luck, I am guessing. Can't wait to see what the blood sucking mystery room Brian's parents didn't want him sharing with anyone has in store for the boys?!!!!
Author's Response: I only wish I could be in the room right next door to watch the entire thing unfold... now that would be a dream come true!
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 31/07/08 07:30 AM · On: Chapter 12
Fantastic update. Well worth the wait.
Author's Response: Thank you so much and thanks for all your patience. I warms me to know that everyone didn't give up on my ramblings entirely and I'm really gonna try to keep them current in the future. Thanks again!!
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