Reviewer: lilballerette10 (Signed) · Date: 09/04/08 02:15 PM · On: Chapter 9
why doesn't Dean believe him:(:( I mean Dean even felt the coldness the last few times that Sam nearly died and didn't Dean even shoot the damn thing! Jeez:( mannn poor Sammy, he's going to have some major trust issues with Dean when this is all over...Sam's not going crazy right?? right??? plz say he's not lolll ahhh i can't wait for the enxt chapt! this story is awesome!!!!
Author's Response: Well... first off: Wow... a lot of questiones :D Totally awsome!!! Gonna try to explain the best I can... And Hurt Sam is my favorite...emmotional pain is the best... i'm sadistic, i know... I wanted to write a "Dean" who wasn't so dependent on Sam (as i feel he is - feel free to disagree)... hence the slightly speedy romance with Kaya. I wanted him to feel whole and guiltfree... maybe a little more selfish, ya know more normal... I guess I wanted to explore what he might be like if he hadn't been forced to sacrefice everything he loved in life, but I didn't want to do an AU where he had a happy life and a loving family - too lazy for that kinda' work right now - and also I wanted the man molded by his memories, like in the show, but with hope of someday having something more for himself... And again, like I said, I wanted to see him a little les self-sacreficial and a little more self-preserving... I love your questions and only hope I answered the to your satisfaction... if not, well then you know where to find me... Oh and about Sam going crazy... weeellllll... I always say: nobody does crazy like I do :D ... Stay tuned!
Reviewer: victorwebsterx (Signed) · Date: 09/04/08 10:19 AM · On: Chapter 9
MORE SOON PLEASE
Author's Response: Sounds like you like it... rest assured, my little fingers are typing as fast as possible...
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 06/04/08 04:16 PM · On: Chapter 8
wow,brilliant chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you SO much... Glad to know you like it...
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 06/04/08 04:01 AM · On: Chapter 8
Dazed and Cofused suits this so well, beautiful song and so atmospheric, just like your writing...and you have really cranked up the tension with this chapter. Still beautfully crafted, but now you have us at the edge of our seats...great work!
Author's Response: Thank you very much... if i have time, I plan on finishing the next chap today and hopefully loading tonight... I'm glad you're rivited...
Reviewer: lilballerette10 (Signed) · Date: 05/04/08 11:53 PM · On: Chapter 8
wow that's a turn in events! she's going after Dean now:O:O:O
Author's Response: Don't wanna give away the big punchline...:D
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 30/03/08 05:19 PM · On: Chapter 7
wonderful chapter,but i'm thinking there's going to be heartbreak ahead.
Author's Response: Well, not much to say other than: It wouldn't be the Winchesters without a little heartbreak...
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 30/03/08 02:15 PM · On: Chapter 7
Now this really is interesting... To start with I think it's your strongest chapter to date...beautiful language and some fantastic analogies...the car a rumbling shadow...wow, and great graveyard sequence. Although Dean fell in love pretty quick, I do like Kaya so that helps to make it believable and now that there seems to be another threat on the horizon...well, can't wait for more! Great work and i'm still looking forward to a lot more! X Louy
Author's Response: Thank you... The reason for the hasty 'falling-in-love' is beacuse I felt like I was dragging it out and needed to get a move on to proceed with some more action filled chapters... i'm glad you like kaya and i'm very glad you like the writing... I had a little help with some of the linguistical twists, but the imagery is still very much mine... And again... Thank you very much for the review, they help me to move forward.
Reviewer: lilballerette10 (Signed) · Date: 28/03/08 05:35 PM · On: Chapter 6
o man loved this chapter!!!! and Dean's guilt o mann...but he shouldn know not to leave Sammy alone like that when some psycho spirit is after him. I love Dean but he should feel guilty for not believing Sam!!! I can't wait for the next chapt:)
Author's Response: Oh, the guilt will come, trust me:D... A LOT of angst and guilt to come...
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 28/03/08 01:48 PM · On: Chapter 6
wonderful chapter,loved it.
Author's Response: Thank you. It's nice to know when people like it.
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 28/03/08 01:06 PM · On: Chapter 6
What a fantastic description of Dean...“You like to drive because it clears your head. Makes a world, that is full of darkness, seem at a distance. You would do anything for those you love. When you love someone, you love them unconditionally and with such fierceness that it seems frightening sometimes. You think you are dead inside, but in reality the light there is just so bright that it scares you. And I think your brother is one of the few you have chosen to share your soul with?” And again some beautiful descritions...'Above them, the mighty mountains gleamed red in the orange light of the waning day. The clouds rolled by in waves, into the yellow horizon and coated the sky in gold'. Just awesome writing, keep up the great work!
Author's Response: Thank you so much... your reviews are great motivation...
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 28/03/08 12:55 PM · On: Chapter 5
Very interesting dream sequence at the start and hey, a shower scene...what's not to love???? Voices are still spot on and I'm moving on to the next chapter straight away...still captivated by this story, great work!
Author's Response: Great to know you find it so riveting... great 'carrot' and it makes me work harder and love it more...
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 28/03/08 12:47 PM · On: Chapter 4
'Dean’s grin grew impossibly sparkling'...what a great line, and some fantastic descriptions in this chapter. I loved the whole image of Dean holding his brother after the shock of finding him dead...awesome work!
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 18/03/08 06:23 PM · On: Chapter 5
fantastic updates,looking forward to more.
Reviewer: ReccaF (Signed) · Date: 18/03/08 11:59 AM · On: Chapter 4
OMG... this is some story-it just gets better and better with each chapter.OUTSTANDING JOB!!!!!!!! Both boys are being torn apart. Dean with the thoughts of Sam dead. Sammy having an evil Jess tear him apart. you vibrantly visual words have created a video in my mind that rocks!!!!!!! You have captured the deep bond and love that holds the boys together-AWESOME work!!!!! Timing -tone-brotherly trust-it's all here and it's all good-you are a great writer!!!! More please!! BRAVO!!!!!
Author's Response: more coming... stick with the story, cause the deeper it gets, the thicker the twists and the stronger emotions...
Reviewer: lilballerette10 (Signed) · Date: 17/03/08 04:08 PM · On: Chapter 4
o man...this just keeps getting better and better, i'm totally hooked!!!! "I don't think she knocks Dean" HAHAAHHAHAHAHA that was awesome loll And poor Sammy:(:( and poor Dean for having to see Sammy practically dead:(:( awesome chapter!!!!
Reviewer: lilballerette10 (Signed) · Date: 13/03/08 11:00 PM · On: Chapter 3
o man using jessicas face....evil...i love this story!!! can't wait for the next part:D
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 13/03/08 04:34 PM · On: Chapter 3
just read chapters 2 and 3.great update,really enjoyed it.
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 13/03/08 02:39 PM · On: Chapter 3
Have to say, I'm really enjoying this story, it's a fantastic first fic and a very good plot...and, you have the boys emotions and voices down. Very impressive Andrea!
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 13/03/08 02:33 PM · On: Chapter 2
I love the descriptive style to your writing, and the analogies you chose really enhance that style. Very nice work Andrea, moving on to the next chapter...
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 13/03/08 02:07 PM · On: Chapter 1
Andrea, I have to say I would never have believed this was your first fic if you hadn't said so on the notes. I'm very impressed not only because of the way you put the chapter together but because you've started with a really great plot, very compelling. Gonna finish reading this tonight!
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 08/03/08 06:59 AM · On: Chapter 1
great start,this sounds like it's going to be good, but i can't get chapter 2.
Reviewer: lilballerette10 (Signed) · Date: 04/03/08 11:03 PM · On: Chapter 1
awww this story seems like it's going to get really really goood, it's alreayd awesome!!! i love dean and all but he was being an ass to Sam, and Sam breaking down on the side of the road:(:( heartbreakingg...your story is amazing but just a smalll piece of advice, could you space out the story more, like the actual wording and paragraphs, cuz reading it like the way it is in this chapter is a little hard on the eyes, i was just highling the lines as i went along to make it easier to read...thanks a lot:D:D the story is amazing tho, can't wait for the rest:D
Reviewer: monkeybrat (Signed) · Date: 04/03/08 08:13 PM · On: Chapter 1
Intriguing beginning, but if you break it into paragraphs your writing will be a lot easier to read! Looking forward to reading more. Is there a chapter 2? I can't get the link to work.
Author's Response: yeah, sorry... i'm still trying to figure this site out and i'm having some problems with posting. i've contacted tree and will hopefully continue with the story soon...
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