this  was one hell of a great story!!!

AWESOME doesn't begin to cover the range and extant of emotions, suspense, action, angst and brotherly love that captivated your reader and pulled them along to an unbeleiebable ending!!!!!!!!!!!

OUTSTANDING!!!!!!!! doesn't begin to cover this Winchester saga!!!!

your words painted such vivid pictures and created such intense setting' s that  your readers were feeling it all.

you are a master writer.!!!!!!!

Sorry I'm so wordy, but when I like something I get carried away.

Bravo!!!

 

Author's Response: Thank you SO much for the kind words. I'm seriously blushing right now. Really think it was that great? Wow... I'm a little stunned byyour review. When I first glanced at it, it was shocking. A bit of a wow-experience, but thank you SO much 'cause you've made my day. Seriously... Whenever I find another review I haven't read I start giggling. Don't know how it is for the rest of you guys, but for me it's right up there amung the greatest feelings in life.

Great finish to a great story, and I loved the emotional, memory filled ending with Dean visiting Kaya, very sad but very good...

Great story all round, and I'll be looking out for your next post!

Author's Response: Thank you very much. It was a thrill to write, but the new updates might be a bit delayed dur to finshing exams and such...

Jeez, this was just beautiful, all the different versions of Sam and the way Dean knew which was the real one, cos he was the only one who hadn't asked him to save him...OMG I was crying into my hands...And that fantastic hug...

...this story is going from strength to strength with every chapter...Awesome work!

Author's Response: Oh thank you so much... I swear every time i go to check your reviews i start giggling with anticapation... Thank you very much...

Oh, this is very good, creepy with a nice bit of tension building up.  It's never good when the boys separate bad things always seem to happen.  Nice work with the dialogue, I loved the argument, Sam's frustration shows so well.  I feel Dean is going to be overcome with guilt and angst if anything hurts Sam after he drove off and left him.  Thanks.  Jane

Author's Response: Thank you very much. Don't know if you've had the chace to read the rest yet, but if you do I think you will either be very exited or angry with me:D Depends on how you like your Winchester served:D:D

Well thank God, they got him out of that hell hole, moving on...!!!!

Wow, what a great but very intense chapter...God! poor Dean but OMG poor Sam...! And I'm a 'Cash' fan too so it's all good...moving on to next chapter...

what a great story, I just read it through!!  you have got to post soon,  I was getting so spoiled flipping from chapter to chapter.  I should have reviewed at each chapter but I was too caught up to stop:)

Author's Response: Glad you were caught by the story... writing the next chapter and i'm almost finished... shouldn't be long... if you lke my stuff, then check out "Vacaton"... not that far along yet, but - again - typing away as fast as my little fingers will allow...

Oh...Sam!  I love this story so far...so much!  lol please continue you, and soon so I can enjoy the rest of it!

Author's Response: Good to know you like it... i will type furiously...

great chapter,at last dean knows whats going on.loved the hug between dean and bobby.

Author's Response:

Thanks... I was worried about the hug... That it might be too unlike Dean, but then again i thought: He has just been through hell, a little emotional release is unerstandible...

 Glad that you like... love that you've sticked with the story. Great to have a fan (My definition of fan is one who actually reads my stuff from end to end) :D

Thanks a bunch...

omggg i had a feeling he'd admit Sam when he found out what happened:(:(:( omggg heartbreaking....plz plz make Sam not be crazy...let it be something supernatural plzzz i noe the guilt will kill Dean but Sam being crazy would be worse....awesome update can;t wait for the rest!!!:D

Author's Response: Thank you SO much for all you reviews... really, really appreciate 'em... glad you like...:D

'Instead came just more guilt. The car wasn’t comforting anymore. It was just pieces of cold metal. It was just as dead as everything else in the world.'...beautiful line in a great chapter.

And I especially liked the flashback with Missouri and John...that was great...moving on to next chapter.

Author's Response: Glad you liked. It wasn't meant as an insight as to how John's experiences with the Mara were, but more how he was dealing and moving on, so glad I succeeded with that...

O.M.G.....NO WAY....OMG PLZ DON'T TELL ME SAM ACTUALLY KILLED HER OMGGG....WOW...THIS IS LIKE...WOW I'M LIKE DYING TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS...OMG WHEN DEAN COMES IN....OMGGG AHHHHHH PLZ UPDATE SOON!

Author's Response:

I'm glad you like... and well as I said, I knew this was a bit of cliff hanger, but I just couldn't resist...

Will update as soon as possible... promise..!