Reviewer: CherryTootsiePop (Signed) · Date: 24/03/08 09:11 PM · On: Chapter 4
this is a seriously entertaining story! hahahaha *shakes head* keep up the good job :)
Author's Response: Hey, thanks a bunch! Glad you're still enjoying it. Been buggin' my muse for another chapter and I'm still waiting for a reply - shouldn't take too long though, ;) Thanks for the review.
Reviewer: IrishTwilight (Signed) · Date: 24/03/08 01:28 PM · On: Chapter 3
clarification: i didn't mean not to use 'Francis' -- I meant use 'Frances' instead.
Author's Response: I had it in my head (and some how like the idea) that Sam's middle name should/could be Francis - thus the reason for Dean calling him that. Now I know that he said 'Frances' and not 'Francis' - I've gone off of the idea, lol. Which is what I meant by restraining myself from using it in future. P.S. I just shouldn't be allowed to respond to reviews after 1am - I never seem to make sense.LOL
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 20/03/08 05:50 AM · On: Chapter 3
Still howling with laughter at this banter...I don't know any other writer who has your take on it...awesome! And great job writing from Sam's POV, you sound like you've been doing it for years!
Author's Response: Oh Lou, thank you so much!!!! I'm really blushing right now... I'd better tone it down a bit in the next chappie - don't want you wakin' the neighbours with all that howling ;) Thanks for the review and the stars. :)
Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 19/03/08 08:01 AM · On: Chapter 3
Merrie Umm, turning into a Sammy girl huh? nice job Hun. Snarky and funny and realistic. Bev x
Author's Response: Sammy girl? Oh, I dunno 'bout that... ;) Thought it was time to try a little somet different though. Thanks for reviewing! Merrie xx
Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 19/03/08 07:55 AM · On: Chapter 2
funny hun, really like your brother to brother banter and cocky flirty Dean is sweet. Bev xx
Author's Response: Bev!! Thank you darlin', glad you liked it. :) You know me, love myself a good banter between our boys. Come on, fess up - you think any kinda Dean is sweet. Then again, don't we all.. ;) Merrie xx
Reviewer: SuperNaturalObsessed (Signed) · Date: 19/03/08 04:25 AM · On: Chapter 3
I love, I love. Irrespective of which perspective you do, they are always so gut-wrechingly funny. More more more. Bindi
Author's Response: You should be aware of the fact that I'm totally blushing right now. LOL What a lovely review, thank you SO much. More to come, I promise. ;) Merrie
Reviewer: Coldfire (Signed) · Date: 19/03/08 03:12 AM · On: Chapter 3
Hilarious! You did a great job with Sam's POV, you should write it more. : )
Author's Response: I think I may have to go back to Dean's POV for the next chapter but who knows maybe after that I'll try doing Sammy again. :) Thanks for taking the time to review.
Reviewer: mymuseandi (Signed) · Date: 19/03/08 12:12 AM · On: Chapter 3
Hahahaha...i'm actually looking forward to the ending cuz i wanted to see how you can end this chapter with "Run!" again....LOL it's very creative........and i can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Oh, thanks a bunch! :) Glad you're enjoying it. More running for the boys in the next chapter... ;) Thanks for the review and the stars.
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 18/03/08 04:40 PM · On: Chapter 3
hilarious,you did great telling it from sam's pov,i'l be waiting for more.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked this chappie too. Back to Dean's POV in the next one I think. ;)
Reviewer: IrishTwilight (Signed) · Date: 18/03/08 02:26 PM · On: Chapter 3
omg i love this. their dialogue is absolutely hilarious! a little nit-picky note though: I've noticed in a lot of fics that people like to slide in the 'Francis' from Hookman. Howeverm if you watch the deleted scene, the joke is based on the fact that it's a girl's name. Francis is a guy's name. The card must have been spelled 'Frances' which is the female version of the name Francis. I know two women who are both named Mary Frances. Anyways, awesome story, very entertaining! keep it coming :)
Author's Response: Thanks for the nit-picky note! I had no idea there were deleted scenes for Hookman - maybe there only on the US DVDs... ? Anyway, point is - thanks! I'll restrain myself from using Francis/Frances in future. lol Thanks for the review and the stars, I'm glad you're enjoying it so far. :)
Reviewer: fantasycatcher (Signed) · Date: 18/03/08 02:12 PM · On: Chapter 3
I'm honored;) First of all, I applaud ya for coming out of your comfort zone and trying Sam's point of view. And what d'you know, you're still funny!!! Loved the update;) Amusing banter between the boys! Great ending, keep the chaps coming hun. Bails x x x
Author's Response: See, I do actually listen when you talk to me at 3am. ;) Well sort of, I remember somet about Sammy not gettin' enough credit and stuff which is why I wrote this in his POV. I'm glad you liked it hun, thanks for the review and the stars. Ber xxx
Reviewer: SuperNaturalObsessed (Signed) · Date: 13/03/08 09:56 AM · On: Chapter 2
This is SO AWESOME. cannot wait for more, please make like way more because this is so unbelievably fantastic.
Author's Response: Way more? Bugger, I'd better get writing then... LOL Once again, thank you for reviewing I'm glad you enjoyed chapter 2 aswell. I'm plannin' on writing some more this weekend so keep any eye out.. ;)
Reviewer: SuperNaturalObsessed (Signed) · Date: 13/03/08 09:47 AM · On: Chapter 1
Dude that is so awesome. It's hilarious. Good Job
Author's Response: Awesome, hilarious and 5 stars - what more can an author want in a review. lol No, seriously. Thank you very much for your kind words, I'm really thrilled that you enjoyed it. :)
Reviewer: fantasycatcher (Signed) · Date: 11/03/08 03:19 PM · On: Chapter 2
Still really enjoying this, can’t wait for the next chapter!!! Love how this has so much dialogue, you know me, I’ma dialogue…Junkie? Loving the *RUN!* theme. I can always count on you to make me laugh, this is soo funny and cute! Yes Ber…Cute! Get over it;) HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!! (Sat) Love Bails x x x
Author's Response: Junkie? Yep that defo describes you Bails... ;) I really dunno where the "Run!" theme came in, guess I'll have to give 'em somet to run away from in chappie 3 too... Cute?! Damn you Bails! I'll have words with you about that on MSN later, be warned... :P Thanks for the review and the stars hun! Ber xxx
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 11/03/08 09:54 AM · On: Chapter 2
anorther brilliant chapter,can't stop laughing.as for reviewing your stories,what can i say,i love your writing.happy birthday.
Author's Response: Aww thank you so much, what a lovely review. :) I'm glad it made you laugh, hope the next chappie will too. Thanks for taking the time to review.
Reviewer: irnan (Signed) · Date: 11/03/08 04:42 AM · On: Chapter 2
Has müsse läse zum mich ufheitere, und han mich totglachet. wie du bemerke wirsch wenn du hei chunsch.
Author's Response: Totglachet?! Würkli? Dem fall muss i schnell i dis zimmer überä und dim geischt echli salz arüärä sie nervt mi nämli scho dä ganz tag!! ;) Freut mi u mega dass es dr gfallt, dankä.
Reviewer: mymuseandi (Signed) · Date: 11/03/08 04:10 AM · On: Chapter 2
Hahahaha...are all your future chapters going to end with "Run!"?? can't wait what else the boys are going to run away from... :) Happy Birthday!!
Author's Response: I hadn't actually planned to end all the chapters with "Run!" but it seems to be heading that way, doesn't it? lol I plan on getting my ass in gear and writing some more this weekend so you won't have to wait too long to see what else our boys get up to... ;) Thanks for the review and the stars.
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 10/03/08 07:05 PM · On: Chapter 2
First thing...HAPPY BIRTHDAY...and if anything deserves to be a birthday chapter its this...so freaking funny you had me laughing out loud at some of the best banter ever...just fantastic! Roll on next chapter! X Louy
Author's Response: Thanks Lou, I'm so glad that you liked this chapter aswell. What can I say? I love a good banter between our boys, glad you enjoyed it too. :) Chapter three is in the works, I'll hopefully post it before I go on holiday. Thanks for the review and the stars. Merrie x
Reviewer: Huey Riley (Signed) · Date: 09/03/08 07:56 AM · On: Chapter 1
You make me laugh, who threatened you into this? C'mon you can tell Corey;) I liked this chapter a whole lot! Funny comes easy to you it seems. Corey x
Author's Response: Corey!! Dude you gotta stop droppin' off the face of the earth! LOL Who threatened me? I'll let you know in the next e-mail... You know I'm always up for a laugh. ;) Thanks for reviewing. Merrie x
Reviewer: Agoldenrose (Signed) · Date: 07/03/08 05:34 PM · On: Chapter 1
hi staffyo8i loved the *theres twenty- two wanna be models with nothing but a 6didgit number in there heads* classic.well i must say i did get a good chuckle out of that. good job with that one. dnt take too long with the next chapter.agoldenrose
Author's Response: Hi agoldenrose I'm not really much of a football fan as you may have noticed, lol Glad you like this first chapter. Thanks for reviewing and a big thanks for the stars too. Merrie
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 07/03/08 08:36 AM · On: Chapter 1
great start, that was hilarious,looking forward to reading more of this.
Author's Response: Just wanted to say a big thanks to you, you've reviewed quite a few of my stories and it's much appreciated. :) Glad you liked this and I just posted chapter 2 so keep an eye out if you're interested in knowing more.... Merrie
Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 06/03/08 11:11 AM · On: Chapter 1
Merrie Jeeze Hunny a multi chapter! Hoowee 'bout time!! This is cool, I like your pissy, snarky, possibly insane Dean and am waiting for more so lay off the chocolate and get writing! Bev xx
Author's Response: Chocolate, what chocolate? *smiles innocently* Anywho, what do you mean "'bout time", bloody cheek... :P Thanks for the review Bev :) I'm thrilled that you enjoyed it. Next chappie coming soon. Merrie xx
Reviewer: JennieC (Signed) · Date: 05/03/08 02:19 PM · On: Chapter 1
Uh, oh - this looks like trouble! Can't wait to get some more! hugs jen
Author's Response: Trouble? Yep, you guessed it. lol I'm working on chapter 2 as we speak, not too long till it's posted. Thanks for reviewing Jen, I'm glad you liked it. Merrie
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 05/03/08 01:42 PM · On: Chapter 1
Merrie, I am doing my happy dance as we speak, so pleased you're doing a multy...lol And what a great start, too many fantstic lines in here and we share the same opinion of soccer, or football as we call it!lol Can't wait for chap 2 and well done, awesome work!
Author's Response: *joins in on the happy dance* Thanks Lou! Thankfully I asked my sister to read it through before I posted, if she hadn't reminded me I would have totally forgot to call football soccer. LOL Thanks for the review and the stars. :) Merrie
Reviewer: fantasycatcher (Signed) · Date: 05/03/08 11:16 AM · On: Chapter 1
Oh my Ber, who on earth bugged, threatened and black mailed ya hun? Yes!! Finally I get to read a story of yours that goes on and on, chapter after chapter and I am just biting my nails with excitement. This is so funny, but I expect nothing less from you...no pressure or anything. Hehehe I have loads of favorite lines in this chapter to many to name, but you know which ones, a real good one was ...He never damned well said anything about how to control a teenage boy that is about as predictable as which color sunglasses Elton John is gonna wear next. - Hilarious, now every time I see Elton he's gonna make me laugh!! Well done for taking a dive into the multi chap challenge, you're gonna do great and I'll be reading every chapter that comes. Cant wait for the update! -- and when you respond I wana see 'oh don't know about that!' Bails x x x
Author's Response: "On and on"... well I don't know about that. I might become famous and move on to bigger and better things, leaving you at a loss as to what happens next. LOL Anywho... ;) Thank you soooo much Bails, you know how much I love to hear your thoughts on my ramblings and I'm glad you liked this first chapter. Ber xxxx
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